Pokemon: World!

This is the author's first time writing a book. I hope readers will bear with me [Salute] It's almost time to reach the climax of the Ice City Chapter [Thoughts]

Personally, I think one of the highlights of this book is the distribution of the plot. I rarely see characters and Pokémon being created in two ways. The friends who fought side by side are not just thrown away, but they are a lot ahead (so the old characters still need to return more!). As the initial Pokémon, Yaya handles the running-in process relatively well from the first encounter. There is also interaction within the Pokémon, and it is not the kind of relationship between colleagues who are not familiar with each other at all. Of course, there are areas in the novel that need to be polished, and the combat aspect needs to be improved (the mood was not aroused at all in the very burning part [annoyed]). Anyway, just stick to it, Haochi!

The principles of the three golden chapters are not well implemented, but you can see the progress of the author's writing style little by little, which is pretty good for a new writer. However, the disadvantage is that the writing is not full and round enough and needs more practice. Finally, Yaya is very cute, and the evolution into an axe-toothed dragon is also very handsome [sending my heart]

Very nice, good luck to the author

I can write it, but the number of words is so small.

The content is very substantial and the teeth are cute. The author will update soon, Oh Rigai, Vadasi can do anything.

Good-looking, one of the better-looking novel elf books

Like Luochuan and Xiaoye

I really enjoyed reading it and it met my requirements. There is nothing harmful about it. I hope the author will update it more 👍

Tooth is cute and the world with Pokémon is really a desirable utopia.