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To be honest, I quite like elf novels🍅. I have been looking for a long time. So far, the author has the most reasonable and slow development flow of Logic Finger [novel such as Bounty, Bottom, Shinji, Legend, and Leader]. But when I read it, I felt weird because of some introductions and strange foreshadowings. I always feel that there are too many narrations about the inner drama, foreshadowing, such as the part where he first enters the secret realm and expresses his admiration for the Lin family. I think it should be briefly introduced to make it more reasonable. Of course, this is all from my own experience. Overall, this novel is quite good.

I feel okay This book is mainly about elves (Pokémon), and the main story line is about elves. It won't focus too much on emotional drama. The heroine really hasn't thought about it in this regard, so it depends on the subsequent plot direction. [Facepalm] A new writer, please bear with me if there are some immature or unpalatable parts.

After reading these two chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 Nongfu Spring Water, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually , it started to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why was my vision blurred? I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining heavily. It might be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just update a few chapters. Who are you looking down on?

I think it's quite interesting, but the author needs to add that the Power of Viridian is also a blessing of the forest, and has the ability to communicate with the forest, and the ability of the Power of Viridian in the forest is much stronger than the special strengthening skills of the female squad leader.

This novel does not have a particularly perverted system, and the plot development is normal. However, the elves are a bit too ordinary. Overall, it is a very interesting novel. I hope the author can change the elves [shy]

It's a pity that there are not many book friends, so maybe the business failed halfway through. Keep up the good work, come on

The 15-year-old bookworm has confirmed that he writes well.

Give 5 stars to encourage the author. The more you look at the back, the more speechless you become. Author, if you can't write emotional scenes well, don't write them. All women are either coquettish or holding their tongues. Women write a lot, making the protagonist look like a scumbag, and he also has a bit of a straight man feeling. It's really hard to watch. I really can't stand it.

It's been a long time since I found such a good Pokémon novel again. I hope I can keep checking it. +1 For fans.

Better than many rebirth novels

Either there is no heroine, or there are three thousand beauties in the harem @cokeluoshen [laughing]

Those trolls are enough, it's the first time the author has written a book, so that's good. There are definitely some shortcomings, but the author is a novice [eating melon] If I were to write it, I could think about the beginning for three years [smile]

The writing is quite good, but the question is how to arrange the heroine, whether she is alone or in a harem [laughter]

Well written, great book.

Very good Pokémon novel

Not bad, come on!

Come on! The author is great

It's very beautiful. Don't stop writing. Let Bai Bingli be the heroine, please

It looks quite comfortable, but before rebirth in the apocalypse, it feels so relaxed and not a bit stressful.

It's well written, but it's too little. I hope you can write more [you taste it carefully]

The plot is good and well written. Keep going.

Good elven writing, a masterpiece in Tomato

Generally speaking, it is a growth path of the protagonist's self-discipline and hard work. The improvement that Goldfinger brings to the protagonist is not very outstanding. But it does look good.

Very good. I like this book very much. I highly recommend it.

It fits the Pokémon world in my mind very well.

I finished reading it in less than a day. The plot mentions Banmu, so I hope he's not the boss. After all, Banmu wants to make the world a better place when he conquers the world (✪▽✪)

Come on, it's very good, I like watching it.

Beautiful 😄 I love the details of the story Can you do 30 chapters in one day? It's really not enough. It's best to finish it tomorrow. Please! ! ! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good, you must finish writing it