Quick Travel: the Beautiful Fairy Is Bound to the Birth System

Xiao Yunyin is the heroine of Shuangwen, right? In the early stage, she always criticized the heroine and caused trouble for the heroine. When she couldn't afford to offend the heroine later, she reluctantly apologized, gave in, and was forgiven. She was also able to make the heroine think about her. It's amazing [Sending Hearts]

Who knows what I'm screaming about? The author is very good at describing the appearance and movements of characters. Even the beauty of the heroine has different descriptions at different times and in the eyes of different people. When I first watched it, I thought it was a cookie-cutter heartthrob, but it turns out that the heroine is beautiful and scheming. The point is, I really like the emotional scenes too! Don't stop updating, author, please work harder, update three, four, five, six, seven or eight times a day, I will hit a big wall for you.

Um... It's pretty good, although it looks a bit messy in some places. The author seems to like the way of writing flashbacks. At the beginning, you will feel that it is inexplicable when you watch it happen, and then it will be reversed to explain what happened later! Maybe it's my personal reason, I don't like this very much! Overall, the flaws outweigh the advantages! The heroine is not a weak character, which I still like! I hope that the heroine's strength can be developed in the future! Looking forward to the author's fairy tale fantasy plane! Love you! Chew Mi!

I picked it up from the last book and I really like the author's narrative style! ! ! Worth tasting! The heroine is so beautiful and scheming, it makes my blood boil. She thought she was some innocent little white flower, but turned out to be a scheming white lotus. She is a pretty and smart little fairy. Who doesn't love her? And the further you go, the better you write.

It's okay, I don't like some planes very much, and the movie king plane is a bit slow and I couldn't stand it anymore, so I jumped to the next plane, but it's okay, I like it like crazy, Overall, I just couldn't stand the dragging, so I introduced a lot of past lives of the original heroine, and I was convinced.

I have watched Two Worlds, so I would like to review it. I like the plot very much. I think the only shortcoming is that the explanation is not clear. It gives me the feeling that I will not want to continue reading after watching it. The reasons will not be clearly stated, but will be explained later. It will be a bit abrupt, which means that the reader will not have the feeling of step by step when starting to read, but will have a very single perspective. This perspective is like the author's perspective. Character, but we don't know the confusion of the ending, and the background of the character scenes is not clear. For example, the general environment is not written, and a character suddenly pops up and performs activities next to it, which will misunderstand the scene where we thought there are only male and female protagonists. For example, the emotional intertwining of the male and female protagonists in the second world is a bit messy, and the writing is very objectified. The male protagonist seems to be with the female protagonist because only the female protagonist can get hard, and he likes her feelings so much. I felt that I didn't feel that kind of evenly matched emotional pull. The heroine was also inexplicable and didn't write that feeling of pull. It's not that I must ask the author to write the emotional line of pull, but the plot and character setting of the second story made me feel that the author wanted to write about the pull between the male and female protagonists, but couldn't. In short, there is no problem with the author's cultural heritage, but there is no problem with the description of the charm of the characters, and there is no problem with the plot development. The topic, but the narrative expression is lacking. I saw that some people in the comment area responded earlier, so I think this article may be stuck here because of its low rating. The above is only from my perspective. I hope to see improvements in the next world, because the storyline is very good, but the description and expression will really affect the reading experience, so I don't know if I will abandon it halfway through. I will comment first and wait for my follow-up review.

No joke, the first world is very beautiful, I really like the setting and character of the heroine, it has completely raised my expectations. It is not the kind of super brainless and refreshing novel, it is refreshing but also clever. The author is very good at it, but it is too little. The author will update it soon, don't sleep.

I really like the heroine, she is beautiful and scheming. What I like most is the author's use of ancient poems at times. It is really just right. I can't stop reading it. All I can say is that there is no loss in investing. I'm all looking forward to the future.

The heroine is soft and easy to fall over. She is really good-looking and has a very distinct personality. Although she is gentle on the surface, she is powerful in her thoughts. The male protagonist feels too impatient [laughter] [laughter]

It's very beautiful, the author's writing is very good, but there are too few and it's not enough to read. I like the heroine so much, she is beautiful, flirtatious and scheming.

The treasure novel is well written, the plot is well advanced, and the descriptions of various details are also very poignant. If you like reading this kind of novels, you must collect them. Please update them soon! !

I don't understand why the rating is so low. It has clear logic, complete character lines, no nonsense, and the content is funny and interesting. Come on, it may be a new article, so the rating is a bit low.

I didn't want to read it when I saw that the word count was too small and the score was too low, but after reading the reviews, most of them were positive, so I decided to give it a try. Unexpectedly, the more I watched it, the more addictive it became. The heroine is clear-headed, scheming but has a certain bottom line. She can use her own advantages, control other people's hearts, and know her own purpose. It's not the kind of love-minded one. The female protagonist is well portrayed. The two male protagonists are in two different planes for the time being. Their personalities are different, but they are really compatible with each other. It would be better with more updates, it's not enough!

It's very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful. I hope the author will update it soon. It's super beautiful.

It's great. It looks like the plot is more complete. After all, the plot is fuller. Anyway, it's very good to watch.

It's good-looking and completely in line with my taste. The author will update soon [laughs][laughs]

I give you five stars because there are only five stars. It's too good for my taste and not enough to watch! The heroine is so beautiful that it makes me crazy, and her personality is so attractive to me. Now I am being controlled by this little fairy, the heroine, I love her so much! I like the first story so much, keep it up for the second one!

It looks good, watch more and give yourself a five-star thumbs up!

I have finished reading both stories, and I personally think they are quite interesting. The heroine is white and black, and the story line is quite smooth as she has a plan and a goal. I don't understand why 6. Is an extra score

It's very interesting. I can't help but keep reading. The author is really good at writing. The heroine with brains is invincible. [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The sisters can really punch, they are super pretty. The writing is wonderful and the transitions are very good. Some of the details of the heroine's character are really super detailed. I really love it.

It's good to watch, the plot is clear, the characters are well-rounded, and the beauties are the ones you catch.

Nice. Going to different worlds will have different characters, with distinctive characters, and the storyline is also smooth. Maybe the first few chapters are not very attractive to me, but the more I read later, the more addictive I am. The author will give you more support😘

It's pretty good [Blowing Kiss], but it's too little. I like to save up a story before reading it.

It's really good, but I just can't get enough of it every time. I have to wait for the update [I'm full]. I want to stock up on reading every time, but I can't help but finish it every time [face covering]. Highly recommended! ! ! [Cry]

Finished viewing a plane! Looking forward to the following plot! Come on

Yeah, yeah, yeah, I really like to be the most beautiful and delicate woman who can do the most ruthless things, so energetic

The writing is good, and the stories in the small world are very sweet. In the second world, the male protagonist had his first love, and he explained that they broke up because of the male protagonist's indifference. He never mentioned it again, but what the male protagonist's feelings were for that first love, whether he still liked it, and where the first love went was not mentioned. . . Can the author mark whether the male protagonist is clean or unclean at the beginning of each small world, so that people like me who can't see the cleanliness can skip it, and save myself half the time to find out that it is unclean.

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It's good to watch, the plot doesn't drag on, and the heroine is very good