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This setting is so interesting. I love the character of the protagonist very much, but I love to make fun of the protagonist and Wolf [Shy] I love men like Wolf so much, he must be the main character [Admiration] The author wrote it very well. I couldn't hold it back and just tied it up [sending my heart]. Come on!

The author's writing style is exquisite and delicate (compared to the previous ones I have seen in this software) and even writing fan fiction is too limited. Thank you to Power for Love for giving us a real protagonist who has ambitions but who is also a child and has fears. His intelligence is just right. He is as smart as a child (not all wisdom, but also has some loopholes), has emotions, has his own feelings, and has good and bad feelings in the child's heart. He knows why he is in a relatively superior position now. (But I hope he no longer needs to depend on others) He will have more family members (good girl Natasha) and friends (little Tom) of his own, not because of others, but because of who he is. Of course, the protagonist is not a good boy in the traditional sense, because he does not have anyone who will always firmly believe that supporting him can help him. Therefore, in order to achieve his goal, he will do bad things (his situation prevents us from asking him to be pure and kind, but I still hope that he can maintain his original ideals and not be affected by the outside world. It is impossible, but at least he cannot forget his roots). I hope that his growth path, even if it is tortuous, can make him stronger, recognize his true heart, find close friends, companions, and family, and create a future that belongs to him. Of course the tone of this book is not very sweet. Maybe a little abuse in the future. But Zhen Zashi's delicate writing style makes me feel comfortable reading it (at least for now). I hope the author will not be affected by the opinions of others outside the world (I hope the climax of this book will not stay now), and I hope that whether the story follows the trend or not, he will depict it carefully, or that no matter what he does, he will not let you regret it. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for bringing me this period of relaxation and the shock to my soul. I hope your future is bright, happy and healthy. I also hope that you will always do it for your own love. No matter what, it's enough to please yourself.

The character of the protagonist is very unique, and the psychological activities and details are very good. I can give 9.5 Points to the Snake Court novel. Ah~ Among the books about Harry Potter, this is my favorite one at the moment. The setting of the protagonist is in line with my fantasy of the perfect male protagonist (I can't describe the feelings) (feeling), some protagonists directly compete for Potter's role, which is not bad, but not much better. It is a very common and common material, and there is no specific name or surname to refer to which book or author. It is my personal opinion. If it offends me, I apologize. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon! ! ! ❤️😘

The structure of the story, the rhythm changes, etc... I don't understand/Eh hey So far, I've watched it smoothly, without any surprises. As for who the other male protagonist will be besides the protagonist, I'm a little excited if I really like watching this kind of thing/laughs Is this book similar to buying stocks... By the way, can the male protagonists who are not left to the end have a side story~ or a Shura field? I really like that kind of plot (I'm not forcing it, my wife can write it however she wants) Parental love is also great/eye-moving It's delicious. I love eating. Please update more. Also, can't there really be more male protagonists in eating?——

It's very comfortable to read, and I didn't deliberately organize the CP to sell sugar or cheat.

I've already read the latest chapter without realizing it. Overall, it's really good! ! In fact, my favorite is Professor Snape, he is really great! ! ! Still can't help but comment: It's really beautiful! ! ! I hope the male protagonist can become a black man [crying][crying][crying] It hurts so much [crying][crying]

This is the only Harry Potter fanfic on my bookshelf. I personally think this book is very well written and well-written. The character of Seples is very well developed. He has ambitions, desires, and ideals. He can do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. He is not a virgin, not soft-hearted, but he is not indifferent to life. He is very good to his family, and he feels like his family is above all else. He is also very good to his friends. The various emotional lines of Serples in the book are also very interesting. Personally, I like the couple of Wolfe the best. I feel that Wolfe is very doting on Serples. Finally, the only shortcoming of this book (it is not a shortcoming at all) is that there are too few updates and it is not enough to read, so please give the author a big boost! [I beg the author, please don't be like this Wolf couple, otherwise I will really cry to death and pass out in the toilet] The above only represents my personal opinion

The author's writing style is very good, and the character creation is also very three-dimensional. The male protagonist has become a heartthrob because of his strength, brains and appearance, which surpasses most Mary Sue-style HP fans. Each character likes the male protagonist because of his own thoughts and stories, not because of his appearance, which is awesome! ! ! (Another question, since even Sirius has fallen in love with the male protagonist, can Snape and Lupine do it? [Shy] I'm looking forward to it!)

Highly recommended! ! Super super super super invincible and beautiful! The character setting of the protagonist is really fascinating to me! There is no such thing as the Holy Mother and the Holy Father who care about the world. They are neither completely bad nor completely good. They only care about the people they value. It's really great! ! I just like to protect my shortcomings! ! The part that irritated me the most was the one where Lupine and Sirius apologized to Professor Snape! ! It really makes me happy, okay? ! ! Sure enough, go to hell with school violence and all that! In short, in one sentence: I like it, love to watch it, and highly recommend it! Really, every set of cp is really good! ! ! The protagonist's relationship with Xiao Long is also very good, and his relationship with Wolf is even better! And Tom's is already a masterpiece! ! ! Who knows? ! ! !，，～～

I can't stand the spicy food. The author is so strong. The plot is so natural and every point is consistent with the original work. The characters are really three-dimensional. I feel that every character is created with great care, including the protagonist who is so cute and cute. Really, it is my favorite among the HP books I have read. It is very suitable for me! I probably couldn't stop watching the beginning, but! ! ! It's too little. Please write more (crying). I love reading it, but then I lost it when I saw the climax. It's such a laggy writing. (Crying) By the way, I'm talking about Tom and Bao [laughing evilly]

It's perfect, the story flows very smoothly - but I have to mention a few words that impressed me most Our dear and lovely "main palace" who first met the protagonist was still comforting herself by saying "the first to get the moon near the water and the tower" Little Barty here has used a piece of gossip to successfully realize what "brave people experience the world first" ，，（）

This is by far the best HP fanfic I have ever read. In fact, the sudden appearance of a lot of meat caught me off guard. Maybe the writing was a little sloppy in the early stages, but I became more proficient as I read later. In the early stage, Serp had actually been thinking about what is love, but no matter what love is for him, as long as his family is happy. In the early stage, Draco and Tom/Theodore were on the stand. Tom and Theodore really had less interaction with each other, which made me sad. After reading it, I felt an indescribable feeling of emptiness. Talking about something. Little Barty's lifespan theory in the extra episode is really interesting. It's a secret that only belongs to them.

It's really great. To be honest, I love Little Barty. It's probably the vigorous love and madness that moved me the most. Seples just wants a home, and it's been really hard to get through this journey [crying][crying][crying]

It's really super, super, super good-looking. It makes me feel that Serples is a flesh-and-blood person. He has his own ideas and wishes, and he can give anything for a better future. Moreover, the emotions of each character are written very delicately, which makes me feel that it is not too abrupt and feels natural. (Also, dear author, hurry up, hurry up, hurry up, hurry up, hurry up, the future must be beautiful, right? [Almost crying] I really, really hope that Seples can have a bright future soon, and I hope he is happy [love])

It took me two days to finish it. After reading so many HP fics, there is still one that I can read from beginning to end. That can only mean that it is really good. First of all, the male protagonist is not a good person in the sense of the word. Serp is just an ordinary poor kid who is forced to have inextricable ties with Lao Fu. No one in a high position believes in him, and those below his ability and status cannot help him. Apart from a small snake and a diary, he has almost nothing. He kills people, both good and bad, with decisive actions and a sensitive heart. There's no better way to describe him than "poor badass beauty." It is true that Grindelwald, his various lovers and partners, and even Lao Fu in the middle period can be regarded as his backstage, but these backstages more or less have things they care about more. In this book, the author seems to have written "profit first" vividly and kept silent about the truth of "love", which is completely opposite to the children's book "Harry Potter". But I think all of this stops at Barty Jr.'S part after Goblet of Fire. I think the best part is the twist in this part. If all the relationships around Serp before were mixed with interests, then little Barty started to have more and more people love him. It is true that this part of Sepp's life was the most painful, but Sijiao, Wolf and more people who reached out in adversity showed "love" (not something that can be described by "love" or "family affection"). Without these people, perhaps Sepp would have truly fallen into darkness. My favorite part is the conversation between Professor McGonagall and Thupp near the end. Professor McGonagall doesn't appear many times in the whole movie, but she is the one who really sees Thupp's full growth from a bystander's perspective. The child who even she feels sorry for is really annoying. In short, I really like the "love" described in this book, but I really didn't expect that the first one to eat meat was little Barty... I thought that Wolfe had to take the lead (chew, chew, chew)

All I can say is that he is my favorite one of the Harry fics I have read [Adoration]. I like his harem very much, and I also like his harem. Hehe, I really cried when I saw Barty. I was very sad. Later, when he thought about that part, I cried again because he was very happy. Hahaha, I also like Professor Snape very much. He is very protective of Thor. And Sirius and the others apologized to him and refused to commit any form of school violence. The whole work is very ups and downs. (Another day of hating Voldemort) Support the author greatly The knife is very sweet (vomiting blood) Five-star praise

I finished reading it in one sitting. It is a rare good article among Tou Ma Tou. The main character's personality is very distinct. The protagonist's taste of tea in the early stage is particularly good. His inner goal is always clear, and he will take action when he needs to. The plot for the first and second grade students was also well arranged. The only drawback was that the plot for the third grade was too rushed. It felt like the protagonist's emotions and the undercurrent of the black and white forces ended without even starting. Then, so many things happened in the fourth grade, which was a bit sudden. The last thing I want to say is: Bao, you are not that person. You are different from the beginning to now. I look forward to when you kill the braised eggs, walk out with dignity, and then buy Diagon Alley openly.

Ahhhhhhhhhh! My cp is back on fire! ! ! Thanks to Professor Qinqin for the assist. Little Barty is really handsome. Damn, can you give everyone a story about the protagonist? I really like the protagonist and Little Barty! (It feels like there are very few people standing on this pair)

It's very comfortable to read all the way, there are no pauses and no typos. The punctuation marks and paragraphs are all very clear and coherent. I was very reluctant to leave at the end, even if it was just a few days, I would take the time to read this book I felt emo after watching it, and when I was in an ambiguous situation, I pulled my kuku line [thinking], and I even thought for a while that the plot behind it might be my favorite wallpaper (? Then what? ｜I can't believe it when I look at emo｜ Oops, I'm still done reading it———— I feel like I have to look for a new book with good writing that I can read (and finish) for a long time /emo~*

I like the protagonist's madness and how he will risk everything for his family; I like Wolfe's preference for the protagonist; I like Draco's temptation of the protagonist;... In short, I hope the author will continue to work hard and continue these settings.

I read it in one sitting. The protagonist is very good. The character is well described. The author writes very delicately. What kind of choices should be made under what kind of environment? The last few endings are also good.

It's a very delicate emotion (although... Everyone understands it), and I personally feel that this is the best analysis of the character and plot rationality among the second novels. Regardless of whether it is OOC or not in your eyes, this is an unparalleled second novel! Absolutely amazing! I clicked in and unexpectedly got out of hand [crying] Beautiful! Love watching! Write more!

This is my favorite book in HP, but it's still a little bit scary for me, especially when I saw little Sepp being held hostage for his family, and what little Barty said when he was fed veritaserum... (When will the other if lines be released, can't wait) [Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy]

Voldemort really deserves it [angry][angry][angry] How dare you bully my lovely protagonist like this. When I saw that the middle part was stuffed with Voldemort sauce, I didn't even want to take this bite [angry] The author writes really well, the author writes well, Voldemort is bad, and the protagonist is cute.

This is really unique and exciting among HP fans! There is a plot and logic. The characters are not OOC, each has its own highlights. Finally, dear Seples, I hope you will have endless joy and happiness in the rest of your life, and feel the beauty and warmth of life.

Sepp is planning to grow up and become stronger for his family step by step. I really feel sorry for Sepp, he is super good-looking! Whether it's emotional pull or personality, I recommend it! The author's fan base is full, when will he create a new one?

Very beautiful. I especially like Baby Sepp's character. He is courageous and determined and never gives up. I also like Baby Natasha and Baby Tom very much. They are both very, very good babies [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Top Post]🤗

This is the highest quality fanfic I have ever seen. The main character is very lovable and the Holy Father has his own pursuits. The emotional line is also very touching and not too abrupt. The plot is really awesome [love] [love] [love]

To be honest, after reading the chapters updated so far, I felt that I was deceived by the introduction. Maybe "Sweet Pet" is not what we thought. However, the author's writing style is quite good, and the content modifications did not exceed the scope of the plot. Serples works hard for a better life in the future. In the process, he will inevitably encounter twists and turns. I hope the future will have a good ending.

I love watching it. I really love the character of the main character. The key is beauty, strength and misery (Voldemort, please die to me [smile]). There are more than a dozen people in the team, and eight of them are known to like Sepulus... Someone has already jumped in first, but... Author, do you think Sepulus has suffered? He just did it with Barty Jr., And now he wants to do it with Wolfe [face covering] It's not interesting, it's not interesting at all.