Natsume Aoba, who traveled to the world of Naruto, worked hard to do D-level tasks every day, and finally saved up enough for a system of ten consecutive draws.
From the moment he drew the Flying Thunder God Jutsu, the world of ninja began to change.
Reader comments
It's not bad, but it's a bit soft. If Danzo doesn't have the strength, he can't bear it. If he has the strength, he should bring it back. If he can't kill Danzo and kill his entire clan, he's in trouble anyway. Otherwise, Danzo might go crazy and mess with Hinata.
It's good to have more girlfriends.
The writing is quite good. I would like to give you some suggestions. The Thunder Chakra mode is a secret technique that integrates offense and defense. It can strengthen the body's defense. Dacheng can fight hand-to-hand with tailed beasts.
Do you think I will urge you to update?
No... I won't
I'll just change it to the next one [Punch Out]
It's pretty, but there are a few female leads, why don't you take a few more?
Why did Obito use White Zetsu to recover after using Izanagi?
In Chapter 47
The protagonist is too honest and gets screwed several times before he takes revenge on Danzo. And make money to rob the treasury of the famous people. Wouldn't it be a wave of sudden wealth?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.
Come on, come on, work hard, and don't always use forbidden techniques in battles. Forbidden techniques are not valuable, everyone can use them.
I'm a bit weak. If my leader threatened me, I would have killed him. I have the strength.
Okay, I didn't join Xiao, I didn't join Gen, it's full of positive energy [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]
I actually finished watching it, the plot has its own thing and the pace is super fast. The plot of fighting Danzo is indeed very draggy, comparable to three fights with the Bone Demon, but it's okay. There are just a few parts of the book that are very annoying. For example, Orochimaru has lost his memory several times. He has clearly seen the protagonist use fairy magic, but he is still fine when he encounters fairy magic later. For example, the protagonist hit Payne before to summon a Cerberus, and the second time he hit him and summoned it again, Payne looked shocked as if he had lost his memory [facepalm].
In general, a qualified novice article is worth reading.
Looks good, but needs to be taken care of first
Personally I think it looks very good, don't spray it if it doesn't look good.
Yes, the children like to eat it very much and are very satisfied.
The Raiton Armor should not be B. After all, Raikage is pretty good in illusions except for chakra, and his physical body is strong. However, after passing through the whirlpool physique, he should be able to use the thunder escape chakra mode.
It's pretty good. Come on! !
This book is pretty good
A very good novel
Very well written... 5 Stars to go... Keep up the good work
Come on, come on, come on
Personally I think it looks good
It's pretty cool, why is the score so low?
I hope the author can keep writing. I don't have much money left, so I'll give you some gifts. I've already received a five-star rating👍
When I saw it suddenly disappeared, I exploded [crying]
Author, there is a rich second generation in Konoha who has the ability to make money, why don't you accept his mission? Ninjutsu - the art of throwing money.
A very good fanfic, worth reading. I hope the author can keep writing.
All I can say is opening a harem [laughing evilly]
It's not bad, but it's a bit soft. If Danzo doesn't have the strength, he can't bear it. If he has the strength, he should bring it back. If he can't kill Danzo and kill his entire clan, he's in trouble anyway. Otherwise, Danzo might go crazy and mess with Hinata.
It's good to have more girlfriends.
The writing is quite good. I would like to give you some suggestions. The Thunder Chakra mode is a secret technique that integrates offense and defense. It can strengthen the body's defense. Dacheng can fight hand-to-hand with tailed beasts.
Do you think I will urge you to update? No... I won't I'll just change it to the next one [Punch Out]
It's pretty, but there are a few female leads, why don't you take a few more?
Why did Obito use White Zetsu to recover after using Izanagi? In Chapter 47
The protagonist is too honest and gets screwed several times before he takes revenge on Danzo. And make money to rob the treasury of the famous people. Wouldn't it be a wave of sudden wealth?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.
Come on, come on, work hard, and don't always use forbidden techniques in battles. Forbidden techniques are not valuable, everyone can use them.
I'm a bit weak. If my leader threatened me, I would have killed him. I have the strength.
Okay, I didn't join Xiao, I didn't join Gen, it's full of positive energy [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]
I actually finished watching it, the plot has its own thing and the pace is super fast. The plot of fighting Danzo is indeed very draggy, comparable to three fights with the Bone Demon, but it's okay. There are just a few parts of the book that are very annoying. For example, Orochimaru has lost his memory several times. He has clearly seen the protagonist use fairy magic, but he is still fine when he encounters fairy magic later. For example, the protagonist hit Payne before to summon a Cerberus, and the second time he hit him and summoned it again, Payne looked shocked as if he had lost his memory [facepalm]. In general, a qualified novice article is worth reading.
Looks good, but needs to be taken care of first
Personally I think it looks very good, don't spray it if it doesn't look good.
Yes, the children like to eat it very much and are very satisfied.
The Raiton Armor should not be B. After all, Raikage is pretty good in illusions except for chakra, and his physical body is strong. However, after passing through the whirlpool physique, he should be able to use the thunder escape chakra mode.
It's pretty good. Come on! !
This book is pretty good
A very good novel
Very well written... 5 Stars to go... Keep up the good work
Come on, come on, come on
Personally I think it looks good
It's pretty cool, why is the score so low?
I hope the author can keep writing. I don't have much money left, so I'll give you some gifts. I've already received a five-star rating👍
When I saw it suddenly disappeared, I exploded [crying]
Author, there is a rich second generation in Konoha who has the ability to make money, why don't you accept his mission? Ninjutsu - the art of throwing money.
A very good fanfic, worth reading. I hope the author can keep writing.
All I can say is opening a harem [laughing evilly]
Not bad, not ugly
Step by step, good book.