I Transmigrated Into a Book and Became the Stepfather of Five Villainous Big Shots

This book is so good that I read it in less than a day. Also, the author's sister has a great personality and interacts with readers a lot, which I really like. Although I plan to keep it because it is so beautiful, I will keep it for a week because I hope the author will not abandon the book. Come on, author sister! ! I support you [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This is the first time I've seen this type of article. It's very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The author's descriptions are also very detailed.

I lost sight of it before I knew it. . . . Let's take a look at the language of this novel. Language is the flesh and blood of a novel. It needs to be vivid and vivid, and can accurately convey the author's intention. If the language is beautiful and poetic, then this novel will bring people beautiful enjoyment. However, this book is not limited to the above aspects. It also has a unique perspective and novel creativity, which makes it stand out among many urban novels.

I like the daily life writing, it doesn't feel too fast. The author's naming and plot design are very good. I hope the author will update more [Love] Praise the author @ Ji Cai [Like] [Like]

It's good-looking and very specific. I hope the author will work hard to write it down. Don't be a eunuch, I support you. [Laughing evilly][thinking]

How can I put it this way? I came here from Douyin. At first I thought it was an ordinary stepfather article, but it opened my eyes. The eldest brother is honest and honest, the second child is gentle and elegant, the third child is crazy and arrogant, the fourth child is silly and stupid, the fifth princess is cute and adorable, and the stepfather is caring. , I think it's very interesting. Except for the settings that are not very good, everything else is okay. There is nothing you can do about the settings. You can watch it if you don't have a brain, and you can watch it as if you don't see the details [laughing]. In fact, the main reason is that the time is a bit short, and readers can't accept it for a while. After all, I was beaten and abused for three years, but I got better in a few months, emmmmm, you know, everything else is okay. In addition, in the later stage of my stepfather's career, I think I can write it shorter, but I don't go into details, just write without thinking and it can develop smoothly. After all, that's what happened before. It's short, but it's a bit shabby when I write it later, but this is just my personal opinion [smile][smile][smile], don't think too much, I'll give you a suggestion, you can choose to refer to it [note] Overall, it's still very good, keep up the good work, I hope to write better articles! ! ! [Cool][Cool][Cool]

Very good, really good. I don't have much culture and I can't say anything. The author writes this novel really well. The writing style is very good. It's easy to get into it. It's very sad when it should be sad, and it's very happy when it's happy. I don't have any good suggestions. I just wish the author's writing will get better and better, his person will become more and more beautiful, and he will become richer and richer.

Good, good, sincerity is the only surefire weapon. From the beginning, the male protagonist was just for self-protection to later integrating into the family wholeheartedly. The relationship between the male protagonist and his children gradually eased. By the time the children called out daddy one by one, I really think this two-way redemption plot is very good. (Is there such a person in reality? Sometimes I feel that the plot makes me feel a little nauseous [shy]) I am an 18-year-old boy who loves watching, am I normal?

I just read the latest chapter in one day. It's good. It's pretty good. The author's writing ability is average. I just feel that there is a description after the second child, saying that he wants to monopolize the male protagonist. I think the author's writing is a bit too abrupt and a bit strange. It's normal for children to be jealous, but you have to pay attention to the degree. Don't write the kind of cp embarrassing plot. Don't write just for an idea. Many good ideas have to be different from each other. Not all of these elements must be included in a work. Generally speaking, it's okay. In addition, it feels old. The turning point of Zhou Zhouchengxi's change in attitude towards the male protagonist is also very important. I hope the author will think clearly about how to write it [I understand] (Family members who like dual male protagonists with orthopedics, don't be too outrageous [laughs], everything will only hurt you. In addition, the author also said before This is just a story about family and father-son, but I feel that it is a bit strange that you have written it up to this point. If you change your mind and want to write about pseudo-orthopedics, please tell me in advance [awkward laugh]) After typing so many words, I hope it can bring useful suggestions to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It looks good, but updates are a bit slow. . But if you update quickly. I'm also afraid that the quality of the author's writing is not as good as before.