Chuan Shu: I Became Long Aotian's Cannon Fodder Stepfather

This book is so good that I read it in less than a day. Also, the author's sister has a great personality and interacts with readers a lot, which I really like. Although I plan to keep it because it is so beautiful, I will keep it for a week because I hope the author will not abandon the book. Come on, author sister! ! I support you [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

This is the first time I've seen this type of article. It's very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The author's descriptions are also very detailed.

I like the daily life writing, it doesn't feel too fast. The author's naming and plot design are very good. I hope the author will update more [Love] Praise the author @ Ji Cai [Like] [Like]

It's good-looking and very specific. I hope the author will work hard to write it down. Don't be a eunuch, I support you. [Laughing evilly][thinking]

How can I put it this way? I came here from Douyin. At first I thought it was an ordinary stepfather article, but it opened my eyes. The eldest brother is honest and honest, the second child is gentle and elegant, the third child is crazy and arrogant, the fourth child is silly and stupid, the fifth princess is cute and adorable, and the stepfather is caring. , I think it's very interesting. Except for the settings that are not very good, everything else is okay. There is nothing you can do about the settings. You can watch it if you don't have a brain, and you can watch it as if you don't see the details [laughing]. In fact, the main reason is that the time is a bit short, and readers can't accept it for a while. After all, I was beaten and abused for three years, but I got better in a few months, emmmmm, you know, everything else is okay. In addition, in the later stage of my stepfather's career, I think I can write it shorter, but I don't go into details, just write without thinking and it can develop smoothly. After all, that's what happened before. It's short, but it's a bit shabby when I write it later, but this is just my personal opinion [smile][smile][smile], don't think too much, I'll give you a suggestion, you can choose to refer to it [note] Overall, it's still very good, keep up the good work, I hope to write better articles! ! ! [Cool][Cool][Cool]

Very good, really good. I don't have much culture and I can't say anything. The author writes this novel really well. The writing style is very good. It's easy to get into it. It's very sad when it should be sad, and it's very happy when it's happy. I don't have any good suggestions. I just wish the author's writing will get better and better, his person will become more and more beautiful, and he will become richer and richer.

I just read the latest chapter in one day. It's good. It's pretty good. The author's writing ability is average. I just feel that there is a description after the second child, saying that he wants to monopolize the male protagonist. I think the author's writing is a bit too abrupt and a bit strange. It's normal for children to be jealous, but you have to pay attention to the degree. Don't write the kind of cp embarrassing plot. Don't write just for an idea. Many good ideas have to be different from each other. Not all of these elements must be included in a work. Generally speaking, it's okay. In addition, it feels old. The turning point of Zhou Zhouchengxi's change in attitude towards the male protagonist is also very important. I hope the author will think clearly about how to write it [I understand] (Family members who like dual male protagonists with orthopedics, don't be too outrageous [laughs], everything will only hurt you. In addition, the author also said before This is just a story about family and father-son, but I feel that it is a bit strange that you have written it up to this point. If you change your mind and want to write about pseudo-orthopedics, please tell me in advance [awkward laugh]) After typing so many words, I hope it can bring useful suggestions to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Good, good, sincerity is the only surefire weapon. From the beginning, the male protagonist was just for self-protection to later integrating into the family wholeheartedly. The relationship between the male protagonist and his children gradually eased. By the time the children called out daddy one by one, I really think this two-way redemption plot is very good. (Is there such a person in reality? Sometimes I feel that the plot makes me feel a little nauseous [shy]) I am an 18-year-old boy who loves watching, am I normal?

Great support for the author, it's so good-looking. I've already begun to imagine the hero's life as a group favorite after the children grow up.

Wow, I finished reading it in one day. I haven't read so much in a long time. I really love the interaction between the protagonist and the five children. The author has written so much. Of course, don't tire yourself when updating. Cheers to the author [blowing kiss]

The author should add a cp. Mu Jia thinks it is quite interesting. The heroine has not appeared yet. I don't know what it is like. It is said that the eldest daughter avoids her father, and Xiao Wanning also wants a mother [sending heart], okay [sending heart][sending heart][sending Heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I like this book so much. The relationship between father and son is really hard to see someone describe it in such detail. I was soothed by reading all kinds of cool articles. The rhythm is really comfortable. After all, family love is the most resonant. The dependence and care between children and their father is also very moving. The author's writing is so good! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's good-looking, the content is very novel, I like to see the daily life of the male protagonist and the children, it's very warm. I'm so happy to see the author say that there is no cp, but it would also be possible if there is a pseudo-orthopedic cp with two male protagonists [laughing]

It's pretty good. The male protagonist is really good-looking. I have high expectations.

Very good. Although it is a bit sparse at the moment, he updates three times a day quite quickly. If there are any pitfalls, read the introduction first. There is no female protagonist. Regarding the plot, now only the third child is left without calling him daddy. It is estimated that in a few days, the third child should also let go. All in all, it's not a loss to start with, thank you, keep working hard!

It's super good-looking. The author also said that this book has no CP or a female protagonist. But I hope this novel won't be too short and the progress won't be too fast. After all, for a good-looking book, the more, the more enjoyable it is. Being more detailed is never a bad thing. This shocked the whole family. I couldn't stand it anymore after more than 300 chapters. There was a spark between the heroine and the hero. Their happy life ends here. Let's change the book.

Let's give it five stars first. This subject matter is very new. The article from the female channel has been moved here, but it looks pretty good. The author should work harder. It's better to have more chapters in the new book, otherwise no one will read it.

It's good to watch, but it's too short. I hope the male protagonist can get along with her more, untie the children's knots, and bring the female protagonist back.

This situation of getting along is really good. I hope it will get better and better. I support no cp. Come on come on. Looking forward to the follow-up. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Love][Love][Love][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Please update! Like like like! No CP Xiangxiang! [Blowing a kiss] I think there is a solution for the amnesia-free mother abroad if she wants to come back. After all, she is a strong woman who is busy with work, so I think the appearance rate can be low. [Eat melon]

This book is really good to read. The male protagonist has a very good personality and is a gentle and kind-hearted person. After reading it with my own eyes, from the tit-for-tat confrontation between the male protagonist and his five little animals at the beginning, to the warm scenes of living in harmony later, I was really moved. It's very beautiful. It's rare to encounter this kind of person, and it's so appetizing.

It's great, warm, and interesting. I love it! The author would like to thank you for updating!

Very nice. The father is very responsible, has a sense of responsibility, and is very attentive to his children. The children also know how to be grateful and repay. Let's work together for a happy and beautiful life. I hope Gu Chengxi can live in harmony with them soon. Xiao Wanning is really cute [Adored] I hope the author doesn't pair the male protagonist with the female protagonist. I mainly want to see the daily life of the male protagonist and the children, and the side scenes of the male protagonist making money. It's really interesting. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The main plot of this book is very good. I have read many books on this subject. This is the first time I have seen this subject. This book is very good. I hope everyone can pay attention to it and read it. If you think it is good, I hope you can add it to your bookshelf and recommend it to your relatives and friends.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I am very picky about reading articles. Most of the reviews I have reviewed are negative reviews that make me angry, or a few are so good that I have the patience to review them. This article is really great, a heart-warming article about raising cubs, not a single bit disappointing.

Really look! It's particularly loving. The male protagonist is a very gentle one, super cute, isn't it? There are also five little ones with different personalities but eager to be loved, and the author is such a fan! I really wrote no cp! ! Although I really want to criticize CP, I think the relationship between father and son in this book is really good and sincere, but what I look forward to the most is the moment of confession! The male protagonist did nothing but had to repay the original owner. If the five little ones didn't know the truth, it would be too hurtful and aggrieved. So can the author tell me if there is any confession plot?

It's beautiful. I haven't seen such heartwarming writing in a long time. It's really well written, I like it very much. Waiting for the update, I see many people are debating whether to use cp or not. I personally have no opinion on this. The author can just write according to his own ideas. However, I hope the focus can be on the male protagonist and the children. Even if there is CP, don't describe too much emotional lines, otherwise, it seems to change the flavor. (Of course, it's important to emphasize that these are just personal thoughts, and everything is based on the author's thoughts. I don't mean to "give guidance" or anything else.) Come on come on. ↖(^ω^)↗

I like healing novels very much. I just hope that later on, the mother will come back from overseas and reunite with the male protagonist. Maybe not now. It will take at least two to three hundred chapters before the female protagonist can appear. I think that's not bad.

I think it's very interesting, but I hope there is no female protagonist. I feel that Zhou Xinru can come back, but she already has someone she likes, divorces the male protagonist, and the male protagonist starts a company and starts from scratch... I would like to watch it more like this.

It's good to read. This book is really comfortable to read. It's plain and simple. Personally, I feel that the writing and details are not the most important. The main reason for reading this book is that it feels good, but it's just too short and not enough to read. I lost it as soon as I saw the foster mother. I read it all in one go. It's pretty good, 🉑