[Mindless Fun + Complicated Elements + Many Early Plot Holes + System Competition + Multiple Storylines]
I want a tragedy that never ends. I want my barren heart to bloom for me. I want to passionately kiss them in a place covered with forbidden flowers. I want a love so sincere it will never betray me. I am a bad person, a madman, a monster without feelings, a chaotic mess of a self.
I don't need anyone to save me. I only need someone to sink into misery alongside me.
Have you ever felt that some great hand was pushing everything in your life? It is called [Fate].
Have you ever seen the true face of this world? Have you ever witnessed the most genuine contradictions of human nature?
When you see through everything, this world is so calm, and yet so mad.
And there is a world called [Spirit], a world where all living things are laid waste.
"I'm sorry. I don't know how I feel about you, so could you die once for me?"
"If we're all fake, then killing every last one of us won't send us to hell, right?"
"People who betray a sincere heart have to swallow ten thousand needles."
My new work is out! Welcome to read it on Tomato Novel. I hope you enjoy it. Your support is what motivates me to write, and I'll do my best to tell every story well!
After reading a few pictures, the biggest problem is that it is recommended to delete all the ai parts in a major revision. Use your own understanding of the book to write. Don't use ai. If you use ai, you will be dependent on it, and the subsequent results will definitely not be better. Then the writing is too vague and nothing is said, but It seems that nothing has been said. There will not be so many readers to understand the profound meaning, and there will not be so much patience. Generally speaking, if you want to dig a hole, you should dig it when the readers have already seen it. Don't write in a messy way at the beginning. It is inevitable to be clear at the beginning to prevent readers from losing. I don't know if you can see it or not, but I'm just going to give you an opinion. If you don't like it, I can delete it.