Hong Kong Island: My Undercover Brother

Not bad. Is it really okay for you, an immortal cultivator, to do things in an ordinary way of thinking?

As a newbie, your support is my motivation!

This book is still good, I hope it will continue to be good and I can write more. It's just that the word "Da Luo Jin Xian" is too dramatic. It's about cultivating immortals and fantasy, and it doesn't match the Hong Kong variety genre. But don't worry about it. Reading novels and online novels is just to pass the time, so it's not a big problem. The most important thing is that the plot is smooth and the ideas are clear, and don't talk too much about everything.

Very good. I have watched a lot of undercover gangsters. This is my first time watching this kind of thing.

How could it be such a low score? The writing is concise and smooth, the plot is compact and informative, and the characters are distinct. The only regret is that the ending is too hasty, but this is the author's first book, so it is very good! I am optimistic that the author will definitely have more and better works in the future!

Da Luo just said it nicely! I don't even know how to make a talisman.

The writing is very interesting, and the refreshing writing is different from other Hong Kong Island writings. When reading the writing, you should not pretend to be a big Luo Jinxian or something like that, just read it as if you are an invincible and half-novice pretending to be a pig.

I rarely read novels about gangsters and gangsters. This one feels good. Come on, author.

If nothing else, I just wanted to ask the boss to pay the five insurances and one housing fund to his younger brother. He discovered that the younger brother had actually paid it, and it was from the police station! This plot is very good! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

I would like to give him a good review. I feel that the strength of this Daluo is a bit low in the book. There is no sky and earth, divine mark, large-scale teleportation, and clones. It is more about short-distance teleportation, crushing bones and ashes, and super physical fitness. It is probably to reduce the impact of this plug-in ability and reflect the appearance of entering the world of mortals.

Still invincible and creative, I opened a second book about Azu's template [Chigua]

Very beautiful and novel

The author would like to work hard and update [smile][smile][smile]

The author's writing is good and that's it. Come on!

Unbridled! Looks interesting

It's pretty good, the pig's feet kill decisively, and the plot is quite interesting! I hope I won't write it down

I wanted to give it three stars because of the plot of Ding Yao coming to Hong Kong Island, but one star will be deducted after watching it for so long! Anyway, I can't bear it anymore! Goodbye!

Come on, come on, come on

Quite funny, not bad

More in line with taste

It's quite interesting to read now, it's a cool article

The author's writing style is very good and his writing skills are very strong. . . The language art is very superb. . . Very funny in many places. . Very interesting

It looks good, much better than other Hong Kong dramas. At least there won't be any movie plot

It's better than the same old Hong Kong stories. The story is complete and not bloody. (It's good that there's no official version. There are official ones that I haven't finished yet.)

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, good looking.

Where are the new books?

Not bad, good cheers, author

Just invincible Kaka killing randomly [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

The writing is okay, keep up the good work!