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To be honest, although I don't know why the author finished it so quickly, I have deep feelings for these characters. Qing lost his redeemer and died alone. Su Yang fell in love with his sworn brother but hid his feelings deeply and couldn't love her. Su Xiaonu had low self-esteem and silently guarded her and sacrificed her life for love. Yan Ling sacrificed himself but got a false love. Ao Zhaozhao's first love seemed to be only Let Sunan become a friend. Chi Qingqian gave up her emotions because of Sunan. Yingning started out as a little fox servant but also fell in love with Sunan and dared to go to heaven for love. Each character made me very sad. Thank you very much for letting me read this novel. Although the writing is immature, the author has really worked hard. I hope to see the author's new book again. Come on! [Please update]——April 5, 2024, Friday, sunny weather, a student in Linfen, Shanxi

Maybe the part in the first world was not written well at the beginning, and some people may find it disgusting (the protagonist didn't care about the other beggars, and walked straight over to pay special attention to Qing, which was a bit artificial). The rest of it is pretty good. Personally speaking, when I first saw the beggar scene, I thought it was outrageous and stopped watching it. I don't have the habit of rating books, otherwise I would definitely give them very low stars. I happened to click in later and wanted to see the ending, and found it to be pretty good. Then after watching the second world, I felt that it was pretty good anyway. It wasn't poisonous at all, at least it's not like the canned type. It would be good to use snacks in Tomato. Okay [smiles] Then do you like to eat running water noodles? [Laughs evilly]? I still hope that the author will not be shocked, and be more open-minded [laughs] Is it possible that it is not as good as your liking because of the short paragraph before others gave you a bad review before they even read it [cool] Also, let me mention it again, the first world is really quite poisonous. The key is that I haven't finished it yet. I have watched the ending and the beginning. The beginning and the ending are also poisonous... I skipped the first world and watched the second world directly. I thought it was quite interesting.

I've finished reading the first volume. It's so dark that it's inexplicably dark. I gave it four stars for Si Li's sake. The most fleshed-out character is Si Li.

Hello, dear author, in the finale, can you have a group reunion for the heroines who have been conquered?

Before I clicked in, I thought it was a cool article, but after I clicked in, I realized it was a romance. Although it is very classic, I have to say that the description of emotions is still quite delicate, but I suggest the author add a female channel label. I just finished reading the knife, and I was going to relax my brain with a cool article, but when I came in, you gave me another knife, and I... Red bean paste Aligado [please taste it carefully]

The plot is still very good, although there are a few places where the plot is a bit stiff, and there are some typos and confusing names, but it is innocuous and does not affect the overall look and feel. I hope the author will polish the details in the future. Please support me.

It's good that the male protagonist has feelings, but the blackness is mediocre.

The writing is very good, but it is not suitable for me to read. My heart is too fragile, especially when I saw the part where Si Li was beheaded, my heart felt like it was pinched by someone. To be honest, if the author has your address, I really want to send the razor blade. You are the first person who wants to send the razor blade to me in the past 7 years since I read the novel.

After reading it overnight, I was deeply moved. Both the first and second volumes are very interesting. Personally, I like the first volume better. The logic is reasonable and the personalities of each character are very distinct. Everything that happens is predictable, and the author will lay the groundwork early. Unexpected, but reasonable. Padding before and after, excessively natural. It can be seen that the author has a certain writing style and is very flexible. Personally, I'm still looking forward to the author's new work. In addition, not every book has to be a good book. After reading some people's comments, I feel that if it is not good enough, they will give negative reviews. I really feel sorry for the author. But you have to know that this is the same as playing a villain in a film or television drama. The more people hate it, the better the actor's acting skills are, right?

Brothers, wait a moment! I'm going to ask someone to write the formalities! ! ! ✍🏻 , , , , , , , . . , . . . . . . . , , , No, it's a joke.

It would be a surefire success if the protagonist of the first world, Chang Qing, was directly transformed into a black character. Originally, the death of the protagonist led to the blackening of the heroine's system, which forcibly protected the protagonist from killing others.

I really felt uncomfortable watching Xiao Nu. The article was well written and had a strong sense of substitution, and the text was also very good, but it felt like it was deliberately written to force the tragedy. It could have been done by the male protagonist, and then "Qing" was angry and killed the corrupt officials, leading the second sister and Xiao Nu to escape. Finally, after they parted ways, the male protagonist was resurrected by the system, and the story ended perfectly. The plot near the end of the first chapter I felt like I was in a hurry, but the article was very emotional, and I really hope for a good ending. People long for light and hope for good things. I think most of the writing is okay, but I feel uncomfortable because the ending is not so beautiful. I don't dare to read the rest, but I personally think the author's writing is pretty good. I look forward to the perfect ending of the extra chapter in the future.

This book can also be regarded as the author's debut novel. Although it is not as exciting as I imagined, the book has an ending, which is enough to defeat many novice authors. I don't know why the rating is so low, but I still hope that the author can write more or open a new book. In short, the writing is really great.

Not bad. I like the 2nd world. Come on, author.

It is one of my favorite subjects, but there are not many books on this subject. Now there is a book to support it.

Hahahaha so sweet Very nice In the first chapter, I directly stabbed with the knife, but in the second chapter, I just started to draw the knife now.

Why did Si Li die [smile]

Don't worry, everyone, the second story line is very interesting, although the book itself is a tragedy (Sad) It's not a good ending, but the subject matter is very novel and can be adapted in the future.

The best character is not Qing but Xiaonu [face covering]. It's such a pity that he died for the male protagonist.

I think the first world is still good, be is still there, but the bond with Qing is not deep enough

Judging from the dense knives in the book, the author likes the characters he created very much. The ending of the book was a bit rushed, and I felt like the author still had a lot to write. If the author writes another book, I wish the author a prosperous literary career

Keep writing, the ratings for books on this subject are very low. After all, readers will assume both the perspective of the protagonist and the perspective of God, so it is easy to get into trouble. This is one of the few books I can read [face covering]

Yes, it's quite coherent, and the plot and emotional development are pretty good. The protagonist's character is also quite likable. He doesn't feel sorry for anyone, and he doesn't pretend to be hypocritical for one thing.

The author must work hard💪🏻 ˶╹ꇴ╹˶ Although there are many shortcomings, you can correct them slowly. Don't rush for success. You must practice with concentration and improve your shortcomings step by step. Don't be depressed by bad reviews. I believe you, you are the best (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡ Hmm, um, the ending is a bit rushed. Hmm, how about the author make a few more extras?

I skipped the first chapter. I don't really like reading heroines, but the second chapter is really interesting. If the author writes the second chapter first, I think this book will be very popular.

A fascinating piece of history, recommended to people on earth.

Not bad, I will try my best to give you five stars.

I'm afraid this is not a dark story about the male protagonist.

Su Xiaonu's death is unacceptable. I couldn't recover for a long time after reading it.