It's Over! We Broke Up from the Start, But Thank Goodness She's Here!

Although it's not bad, it feels a bit, how should I put it, not like a novel, a bit like a composition, more like a narrative, quick autobiography of oneself 🤦 🤦 I am used to listening to novels, so this is quite novel, but to put it bluntly, I feel that the content needs to be added a little more, preferably with ups and downs and a more exciting plot.

There is a sense of narrative. This writing method is suitable for writing essays but not novels.