Even Reborn, I Just Want to Make a Living Through the League

I don't understand the role of the protagonist's golden finger at all. If you take the professional path, even if you give him a physical disability like a pig's foot, he won't be able to beat him with the full field of view, and the game will be over during the laning phase. If you don't take a career path, you won't be able to use this golden finger even if you have the analytical ability in your previous life and the rebirth prophet buff. There are a lot of logic bugs.

The meaningless forward sway is too long. The evaluation is: I haven't seen such a stubborn person in a long time.

How to say? The writing and rhythm of this book are all excellent, the characters can be read with your brain without losing your wits, and the author is very rigorous and there are basically no mistakes. But if you watch the end in one breath, there is a high probability that you will have more female protagonists to start a harem... But I came to read the game article, and those complicated emotional lines were too slow for the plot. The younger sister, the squad leader, the daughter, and the fruit shop sister, wow, the four female supporting characters are all portrayed very well. But the better the portrayal, the less likely it is that the protagonist will have a chance to have a harem. If it had to be decided, the probability that the four female partners would agree that there are other women is roughly as follows: 55% for the sister's personality, 20% for the squad leader, 20% for the daughter, and 25% for the fruit shop sister (PS: 50% is the probability of normal people agreeing). Except for my younger sister who has a softer personality, other people's experiences, family backgrounds and personalities will most likely not agree, or in other words, there is no such option in their lives. They are all such outstanding people, why? Is he the protagonist (laughs)? Summary: This is a very good book. If you happen to like game novels and harem novels, then congratulations, don't hesitate and jump right in. If I don't like the harem, I can withdraw 😂

The writing is very detailed, as detailed as a running account. The progress is too slow. The introduction was quite attractive and I thought it was a good e-sports article, but I feel that 80% of the content is urban and 20% is e-sports. The protagonist's character is not very likable, and the protagonist's family also feels very depressing. I can't see what the main character's goal is, the golden finger is not clear, and the effect bonuses are not detailed. It feels like I just want to play whatever I want. I won this hero in the last game, and I use the system as an excuse to choose this hero. I haven't seen any growth either. LOL is a numerical and operational game. I feel that the numerical values ​​of the characters played by the protagonist are not clear, and the operation always emphasizes handicap. So what is the meaning of playing LOL? Slipped away

The writing is very interesting, and it is different from the previous pure e-sports articles. It is almost 40% life and 60% games. The characters are also well developed. Now that I have read Chapter 80, I feel very comfortable reading it. The meeting of individual characters and the fate of each person are very good. Personally, I prefer a harem (but the time of the book is the modern world, and a harem is basically impossible) Therefore, I personally hope that the heroine is Zhuang Xuexi. I can't have such a dream in real life. Why is it so refreshing to read the novel (Xuexi is rich and powerful, and when she saw the male protagonist in trouble (more than sixty chapters), she went to help. Although it is old-fashioned, it is more enjoyable to read than others) And there are also foreshadowings of the love line (which can lead to conflicts, awa) Finally, cheers to the author 😘

The first one is to write a lot of supporting characters and describe all kinds of preferences in detail, and it is a forced harem story. The second is a logical question. As for the protagonist, you tell me that he can score well in the college entrance examination? I feel like it's a miracle that he can write. The third problem is that Golden Finger vaguely and forcefully gives proficiency levels for the sake of the plot, and the number of proficiency levels given is just to get who can play. The fourth one is just like the previous online articles, all kinds of forced coincidences are just to achieve the goal, but it makes people very dramatic. They keep meeting some masters, anchors, etc. Why don't you just write fantasy? The fifth one is all kinds of meaningless things that force the plot to be dragged out, like the one in the fruit shop, the one in the civil war, and other people who forcefully find things to borrow, whether they are not allowed to rent or buy, or something, and can't they just start dividing the liver immediately after the technology is developed? I keep making a mess and dragging it out on purpose. It's disgusting.

Your updates are not commensurate with your ambition. Slow pace and no large update volume basically require G. Good luck to you, author.

The first 100,000 words are okay, the pace is a little slower, and the characters are more fleshed out. If the subsequent plot is not poisonous, it should be a good work. Be persistent and don't stop updating. 👍

How can I put it this way, those who like to watch competitive games may not particularly like this book, because it contains a lot of emotional plots involving interactions with girls. It is not a pure game, but the author's emotional lines are very delicate and very lovable. Moreover, the author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the game plot, which made me feel very happy when I watched it. Generally speaking, it is not friendly to people who like pure games, but it is still quite good for people who read more complex novels. (It looks like there are many female protagonists) I quite like it, and I give it a four-point rating.

The plot is too slow, I only started making videos at chapter 45. I have been dragged into playing games, once or twice, and three times. I have things to do, but I am still dragged into playing games. I see that it is very confusing. There are only so many chapters. After all the chapters have been updated, about ten chapters will be themed. There are not many updated chapters. It is annoying to not get into the theme. You can do it with one or two hundred chapters, but only fifty or sixty chapters😅