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For now, I have finished reading Zan Yan Line written by the author, but I haven't read Gongsun Shao Line yet, but after reading it, I have some thoughts and comments, so I will share my opinions. 1 First of all, the pace of reading feels too slow. There are 25 chapters in the Zanyan storyline. In fact, the story line is not too long, but it consumes so many chapters. It feels a bit slow to read. However, the plot inside shows that the author wants to tell a twisty story and hides a lot of plots. It is a highlight. I don't often read slow-paced books. Therefore, if you like fast-paced books, I do not recommend this book; but if you like some slower-paced books, you can take a look. 2 The author has laid too many foreshadowings in this big plot line. As for the king, we don't know what his purpose is; at the same time, we don't know Zan Yan's past. Apart from Pan Yang, Charles and the guerrillas, there is too little information revealed about the knots on the battlefield. Moreover, we have no idea what exactly Han Madi went through. When Zanyan slept for seven days, the story line of those seven days was completely blank. If he wanted to fill in this blank line, the author had to work more on Gongsun Shaoxin. But one thing I'm worried about is that the author has laid too many foreshadowings. If the foreshadowing is handled well, then the entire story line will probably be complete and novel, and will be very, very attractive. However, once the foreshadowing is not handled well, it may get out of control and even risk collapse. The author must work hard in this regard. 3 Parts of the details need to be improved. For example, during the fight between Zan Yan and McGrady, Zan Yan was a soldier, and McGrady was just an ordinary person who was overly frightened. Although Zan Yan won the fight between them in the end, the descriptions during the fight always made me feel that Yuan was at a disadvantage, which somewhat weakened him. Although the subsequent killing spree at the gate of the community gave people a sense of madness, it actually revealed that some details in this novel were still imperfect. Although it is not perfect in terms of details, if you ignore it, there are still some highlights. When the author reset it for the first time, he improved a lot. I think after reading these opinions, the following problems will be solved. 4 Languages I don't really like the author's language when writing dialogues between characters, it feels like a translation. For example: "Oh my God, this is not good news!" "Damn it, maybe there's another way to deal with it." "Wow hahaha, that's right, some more." Looking at the previous words, I always feel a bit like reading foreign novels. I always feel that the author seems to have a unique language style, but if you don't care, this may not be a flaw. Generally speaking, this book has certain content and ideas. If the plot is constantly updated and the foreshadowing is handled well, it is indeed a good book. However, at present, there are still some flaws. I hope it can be continuously improved in the future, so I still give it four stars. Come on, author

The rating of this book is divided into two parts, which I will use dividing lines to divide. The first part is my reflections on the reset, and the second part is the book review. Part one This book has basically been reset. I read the suggestions made by some readers. For example, adding the character's name before the dialogue may cause some confusion to the audience listening to the book, so I changed all the dialogue. Yuan: Zanyan looked at the surrounding environment and couldn't help but sigh. Zanyan: "It's really bad." After change: Zanyan looked at the surrounding environment and couldn't help but sigh. "It's so bad" Although the content remains unchanged, the format has been indirectly optimized, so that the audience who listens to the book will have less trouble. I hope that my work can satisfy the audience who like this book, and I also hope that it can satisfy myself, so if there are any problems, I will continue to optimize it. A little idea: I plan to insert some pictures at the end of what the author has to say, so that you can better understand the scene and environment. The inspiration comes from Douyin's novel commentary. Although it is still in the idea stage, if you have any comments, you can always comment on this book. Dividing line dividing line dividing line dividing line dividing line dividing line Book review: This novel has two routes and two stories, one is about Yuan Zanyan and Gongsun Shao (if you exchange the two names and surnames, there will be easter eggs) 1. I'm not going to comment on Yuan's line. I think the four-star book review has introduced my route very perfectly, with all the advantages and disadvantages. 2 As for the Gongsun Shao line, the general content is that Gongsun Shao, as a senior high school student, hoarded a small amount of supplies after learning that the virus might break out. Then a zombie virus broke out in the campus, and he led the students to survive with the cooperation of the team. This process involves disputes, sacrifices, quarrels, friendliness, betrayal, and returns, but from the moment everyone arrives at the big villa, everything will be fine. I think this one should be better than Yuan's line. After all, the degree of thought I put into the two routes is different. I don't know how it will develop in the future, but if anyone has opinions in the future, I will refer to it. Thank you. This book is currently only worth four stars, and the remaining one star is for the incomplete part. I hope the audience will point out more problems. After all, only by pointing out the problems can the book improve. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to every reader who likes this book. 😄😄😄😄 After talking to some big guys in Tieba, this book is hopeless. Although the plot is still the same as before, after showing it to my classmates and friends, I realized that my writing skills were indeed not good. I was too hasty and I must make more preparations when writing a book next time! But since I made a promise to never update it, after weighing the pros and cons tonight, I opened the fourth volume. The fourth volume is about this work and some of my thoughts and words as the author. It contains everything I want to express. This book is finally finished! Hahaha! I'm free! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Feeling pretty good