Eerie: There's a Female Ghost Inside Me

The writing is generally OK, that is, after three months of hallucinations and reality being separated from each other, the protagonist is in good spirits. When he sees a young girl, he can still think of his own school days. A normal person would have a bit of hysteria when encountering such a mental state. The protagonist is what I have experienced, but I feel good about myself, emotionally stable and even escape.

A true divine book, at least in the early stages. We were given a hazy moonlight star map earlier, but the whole story was shrouded in fog and we couldn't see it clearly. What impressed me deeply was the portrayal of the protagonist, which is very penetrating. Especially when the protagonist starts to question himself after protecting Aunt Fang, he hurts himself with a knife. The image of a mental patient emerges vividly on the page. Anyone who looks at the protagonist will think that he is sick. After three months of torture, perhaps his soul has been bruised and bruised by the illusion [petrified]. The female ghost gradually appears behind her, Sister Song Jin can see things invisible to ordinary people like the protagonist, the gift left by the grandfather for the protagonist's twenty-fifth birthday, Wang Qiongchu's recollection of memories that did not exist in the protagonist's memory when he was a child, and the various mysteries of wound healing and phantoms on the protagonist's body... This moonlight star map only reveals a few stars. How about the moon? How is the moonlight? What kind of scenery is it under the moon? Can't see clearly, can't see clearly at all... [Learned] The author said that it is mainly about emotions, but as I read earlier, the core of the plot is currently more attractive to me! What's even weirder is that I started reading this book because of the emotional drama [face covering]. Anyway, it's so good that I loved reading it. It's only eighty chapters, so I'm here early 😫

How should I put it, the urban version of Taoist ghosts and immortals? This wave is my problem. From the current point of view, the only similarity with Dao Wei Xian is that the male protagonist is regarded as a mental illness. Mainly because when I first saw this mental illness and being able to see another world, I subconsciously thought of Dao Wei Xian.

The setting is very novel. Although I don't have much experience, I can't tell whether it has been borrowed from other books, but the promotion of the storyline and the grasp of the rhythm are still good. The shortcoming may be that the character creation is too simple, but the overall description of the characters in the plot is good. Smooth writing

It can be regarded as a different kind of Daogui, but the turning point of this book is too slow, which is not suitable for the atmosphere of Tomato. It would be better to speed up the start However, the male protagonist's mentality is indeed very good. I already felt aggrieved after watching the first 29 pictures.

The writing is okay

I would like to call it the next masterpiece. I beg the author not to give up.

The writing is pretty good, but it's too slow. I haven't written about the female spy behind me for so long. I'll update the issue. If it's finished, it will definitely be enjoyable. How detailed is it to write a novel? The setting of this novel is so awesome, can't it be faster (what takes one day in the novel takes more than three days in reality)

It's pretty good, but the pace is a bit slow. After so many chapters, I feel like I haven't gotten to the point yet 🤔

It's a very interesting novel, and the plot is also very good. It's just that the protagonist's ability is too slow to acquire. Please update it quickly 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂