Siheyuan: I’ll Do Whatever You Say

The story is pretty good. The writing is very vivid. It's just that it's a bit bad to apply Siheyuan. The author doesn't even think about what era that was. The story and plot are completely inconsistent with that era. Were there any promotional commissions in those days? What kind of hat can be worth 1,000 yuan and be sold to 4,000 yuan? In that era, you were not afraid of being labeled a capitalist. Supply and marketing cooperatives are all state-owned enterprises. What you wrote is entirely about private companies.

The relatively gentle method of punishing the beasts makes people feel bright. If the theme of the book remains unchanged and continues to pursue "gentle" and highly intelligent methods with the help of the system to punish evil and promote good, it will definitely be a rare and excellent novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard to complete this book perfectly. Thank you for your hard work!

I couldn't even tell what a fitter's job was, so I persuaded him to quit.

I would like to give you a suggestion, make the amount smaller. A person can live for a month with 5 yuan.

Not to mention other plot logic, let's just say that the time is wrong. In 1952, Lou Xiao'an was only 10 or 12 years old, and she was old enough to fall in love. The same was true for everyone else. Only Jia Dongxu was of marriageable age.

The story is very good, but it is a failure to try to hide the courtyard.

Shui is already speechless. He actually writes about buying antiques [what]. This is really daring to write without knowing the era 🤮 🤮 🤮

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

One moment he jumped into a well to save someone, the next moment he was swimming in a river to save someone.

Don't you read the information on the bills that only started in 1952? Is the salary gap between Yi Zhonghai and Liu Haizhong so big? One is in her 90s and the other is in her 30s? Why did you write down some things that obviously did not happen in those years? And there are so many typos