Traveling to a Different World: Sexual Transformation into a Young Mage

It's quite interesting. It rewards a five-star start. Emmm Since entering Frost City, I've been a bit high and low. The plot is a bit loose The author's ability to control the plot needs to be improved... Also, the shape of the master is more crotch-stretching. The whole person is very contradictory, very chaotic, and very pretentious. The current plot advancement has nothing to do Let's wait and see first

To be honest, the plot explanation is too weak and cannot explain the plot clearly and concisely. Looking at the big head, it feels a bit like suffering. And it can't switch the perspectives between plot characters very well. In addition, it gives people the feeling that there is no outline, or that it is not complete? To be honest, although the reading experience is not very good, I still prefer books with this theme. Players bring game items and levels to travel through the Western fantasy world/game, or play a management game (a game similar to Yggdrasil), so they can continue watching. I hope the author can continue writing and gradually make the story more exciting, and the author can also grow up with the protagonist. (The protagonist grows up and matures over time, and the author grows up and writes better over time. He becomes a writing master) Finally, I hope that the author can find his own feeling and create his own writing style (for many books, you can tell whose book they resemble and whose book they are as soon as you look at the plot and overall style)

A bunch of Riddlers who always half-speak.

I'm curious, is your worldview purely fictional? There are also spells inside. Could it be from dnd? (I'm not familiar with dnd either)

After reading it, this is how I imagined traveling to another world. The change in the protagonist's mentality has nothing to do with himself. I wonder when the protagonist will see this as the real world. Will the president of the protagonist's trumpet also leave the factory? [Laughs]

I feel that it will be a great book. The pace does not need to be too fast. If it is too fast, it will be satisfying but it will be boring. Likewise, the pace cannot be too slow, as this will also make readers lose interest in reading.

This is what I am most satisfied with reading. It gives me a sense of immersion and is no longer just toilet paper written just to please the audience. Mainly why is there said to be substitution? First of all, the character must be brought to life. If the protagonist is a living person, he will encounter the same problems that we encounter in reality, such as some mistakes. The protagonist is not omniscient and omnipotent, nor is he a machine, nor can he save everyone. He can only do what he can do, and many times he will make wrong judgments and then pay the price, because he only has an overall understanding of the world, but when he truly enters the first perspective, he only I can watch one step at a time, unlike the characters in some novels, who are either Long Aotian or their minds are spinning. Sometimes this kind of watching is boring, or all kinds of XP slaps in the face, and persecutes the protagonist in various ways that readers like to attract readers, but sometimes it is very disconnected. Although this book will take my thoughts away, after all, I am not the protagonist, but it can bring me into the things I will encounter. Think about what I will do?

Update soon [crying] [scrolling], and I hope to fill out the world view through some branch lines and add some supporting characters.

Like it, no reason

I feel like I didn't write an outline

Looks great, when else can I start Myth Pool?

Come on, but it's a bit of a battle of wits with the air behind me.

There is still a lot of room for improvement in this book. I suggest the author make the subsequent plots more purposeful. The early stages are a bit confusing [face covering]

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Looks good, give me more

Ah ah ah ah Hao Kan, why are so few people watching? [Crying][crying][crying][crying]

When will this mythical pool open?

Good! Very energetic! ! ! Come on, don't stop updating [cool][cool][cool]

It would be nice if the updates were faster. It's a great Western fantasy. It deserves a higher rating.