My best friend said: You wrote this novel so that the male protagonist became cannon fodder, and the person who was not originally intended to write it ended up being the male protagonist.
People! ! ! If you have nothing to do, go to the theater less, go out less if you have nothing to do, be less curious if you have nothing to do, and try to die less if you have nothing to do. If you have something to do, sleep more, exercise more if you have something to do, read more if you have something to do, and read newspapers if you have something to do.
Reader comments
After reading a little bit, the story is quite good, but the first person perspective is awkward, ugh...
After reading a little bit, the story is quite good, but the first person perspective is awkward, ugh...