School Beauty Deskmate? Watch Me Seduce Her

How should I put it, the plot in the book is very good, but the details are not particularly accurate. And in some places, it is obvious that I wrote it for the sake of writing it, and it is not the so-called deep love that comes naturally. Hope you can work harder! ! ! !

Stars will be replenished later depending on the situation. The writing style cannot be said to be amazing. The details are pretty good, with a slight idealistic color. The storyline is very good so far, close to reality, and I can continue to watch it (excellent). However, there is no special emphasis on blurring out those unimportant characters, such as classmates, teachers, etc., There are always just a few people in this book. The world view of the novel still needs to be described (currently I think it is a fly in the ointment, just a personal opinion). I would like to give some suggestions. My idea is to let the male and female protagonists go through a relatively big thing (difficulty) so that they can rely on each other and gradually develop feelings. The progress should not be too fast. After all, love should not be too hasty. Come on, author.

It's worth reading. It's a fresh article on campus, inspiring and healing. (I hope there will be no swords between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the normal daily emotional line will develop slowly like this, without any bloody plot, let alone any big villain [face covering]) There is no poisonous point (for me), the three views are very clear, the protagonist Xiaoshuai (not handsome or very handsome), the family is well-off... Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

What kind of school is this? You study in the dormitory late at night, and you can go out to the snack street at night. It's so cool.

The content of the story is relatively real and in line with public life. The characters have distinctive characteristics, the logical thinking is relatively complete, and the language expression ability is strong. It is very realistic in describing the story content of the male and female protagonists. This novel is worth recommending. I hope the author can strengthen his training in pen and ink and enrich the content of the novel's campus story.

The author writes very well and has a strong sense of immersion. It seems like personal experience at first glance, but he is still not very proficient in writing or details. Finally, where is the author from Anhui? Maybe it can be used as a ball tie-up

In fact, for a student like me who is about to enter high school, this book feels very close to life and reality. The description of the characters is not one image that runs through the whole book, but a continuous and in-depth description. Not only for this book, but also for the author himself, it is the change and growth of this novice author. As the author said in the article, regarding the portrayal of my past, the sublimation of my past and future, and my personal character, there is actually no one in the article whose character is similar to mine, but I just feel that it looks very comfortable and not so irritating. This is actually an advantage of the author. Then this book is different from most of the books I have read. It tells the story from a first-person perspective. It was not very attractive when I first saw it, but gradually, it made me feel its charm. This charm is not there from the beginning, but is carried out step by step, which is a very good thing for us readers. But... The author, you update too slowly, and the update is not enough to read. I hope you can speed up the process. The other thing is... Don't be unfinished... Don't be unfinished... Don't be unfinished. Say the important things three times. The main reason is that the only "Dragon" I watched was almost unfinished. Okay, I'm exhausted. By the way, the author saw it, remember to take a good look.

@Xiaokangouzi I still hope that you and your Le Yue can be together. Even if we are separated by thousands of miles of mountains and rivers, we will still go to each other. I not only hope that the ending of the novel is happy, but I also hope that the ending between you and her is also happy. You have to work hard, Gouzi, are you willing to let Le Yue marry someone else? And if you still witness the whole process, will you be willing to do so?

Beautiful, the article is very in line with my taste. It has developed since high school. The relationship is also the kind of hazy love, not mixed with interest disputes, pure love. I hope there will be no knife [cry][cry]

A very good flow of literature. I hope the author can make up for the regrets of youth in the novel [Chigua]

It's really good to read. Although some readers may think it is divorced from reality, I think life is hard enough. Isn't the purpose of reading novels just to see an imaginary world that I have never had? I think the author writes it very well. As for the writing, I can't tell. In comparison, I may like the plot of this novel more, which reminds me of my high school life.

We are a freshman in high school, and we finish our self-study at 11:30

As a newcomer, this novel is his first work. With 82 chapters so far, I feel that his description of the characters, which depends on reality, is quite rich, and he has also made necessary beautifications. Overall, I think this book is still very readable. Well, I made a typo, it's Chapter 80

The book is a bit white, but it is indeed a unique daily novel. There are not enough boring designs, but the plainness of the narration makes people want to put it down. Come on, author.

I haven't finished reading it yet. To be honest, I don't really like reading in the first person (I think this book's poor performance is also due to this reason. Nowadays, most readers are used to reading in the third person), but the writing of this book is really good, and it is a bit similar to me, so I continued to read it. After reading it, it is indeed okay. If you ask me to give an opinion, I can't explain it, so I posted a long review. I just want to say that this book is indeed very good and worth reading. Just think of it as helping the author to save some people. The above opinions are only personal opinions

It's worth reading. The author's writing style is not that amazing and is even a bit childish, but this is a boy who has just entered high school. I haven't read a first-person novel for a long time, and I am already a sophomore in college before I know it. This novel reminds me of the feeling of secretly reading novels at night. It is very immersive.

The rhythm is soothing and very comfortable to watch. After reading many cool novels and fantasy, I will feel visual fatigue, but this book is different. The characters in this book have obvious characteristics, the storyline will feel very real, and you will be immersed in it unconsciously and lose track of time. I have read many novels and this is one of the few that I really got into. I hope the author will work hard and keep up the good work I hope the author can indicate who said what the character said. Sometimes I see that I don't know who said it.

Adding whips and rhetoric brings youth, Drinking in the wild under the oil curtain and felt tent.

The author's writing is very good. If I guess correctly, the background of the story should be in Hefei Ba [Thinking]. The No. 8 Middle School is not Hefei 168 Ba.

The plot is good, but the literary talent is a little less so. Because I said it was based on facts, there is a lot of imagination in it, because I also have a girl I really like. Of course, my confession was rejected, and we are going to break up in June, so this kind of thing still touches me very much! Come on, author, it would be better if there are more updates [please take a closer look] [Please give me more updates] My performance in the Chinese language test was average, and the sentences were not very coherent, so I'll just pass it by [face covering]

Should I confess my love after getting into college? Author @xiaokangouzi

This is definitely one of the best campus novels I have read on Tomato in the past few years. The writing style is very delicate. It's not exaggerated, it vividly describes the feelings of my youth. The only flaw is that it's not finished. [Cry]

Is it a talent in junior high school? The more I look at it, the more it looks like

Author, are you asleep? I can't sleep, you update two chapters a day and I don't dare to read it👀

Your writing is very good. I like you very much. Please do your best.

It's been three months, why can't it be updated? [Crying][crying][crying]

No, this book is really the author's own experience? ! Well, I saw the explanation, but the author doesn't know if it's Yueyue we are curious about [face covering] and what happened to Yueyue is also true.

It is closer to the life of the first year of high school (affirmation from the new high school students), except for the late supplementary school leaving school @xiaokangouzi

Come on, author, the writing is very good.

[Chigua] It's my first experience, it's really like seeing high school life, it's very real, I jumped into the trap decisively