Villain: the Heroine Breaks Off the Engagement, I Decisively Take Action to Punish Her

They are not used to slaughtering the country, and it is not the original world, but a parallel universe. Blow up the earth

The beginning is okay, but the pace is fast, which makes the content of some chapters confusing. Subjectively speaking, it is okay. If the update speed can be increased, then these problems are irrelevant. So I suggest the author, either you write more seriously, or you speed up the speed. If you still have no hesitation, I don't mind sending you some souvenirs [laughter] Let's talk about other things. What kind of person does the little maid belong to? [Chigua] Don't torture the protagonist naked. I'm tired of the villain's torture of the protagonist. I focused on the little maid in the first part. Later in the update, I just left the little maid aside and looked at me. It's really uncomfortable. Since you don't want to steal the protagonist's second-hand goods, you should keep this little maid. [Chigua] But it may be because of me. After all, I read faster, but it is true that the protagonist you wrote is relatively weak among the villains I have read. The main reason is that the span of your writing is relatively large. If you want to write a normal urban novel, there should not be so many problems. Pure fighting is already good, there is no need to write about alien beasts, etc. , Like other cool novels, they start with a protagonist in seconds, but this comparison is too brainless. This book is mainly not exciting enough, and the protagonist in your writing is relatively weak. Obviously, as a villain novel... The villain novel is mainly aimed at those brainless protagonists. Qin Feng is indeed a bit weak, and even a little aggrieved. Originally, I felt that this book should be a little slower, but the more I read, the faster and faster it became. The writing was messy and the basic plot was not clarified. As long as the book is written around the protagonist "Qin Feng" and not around the brainless 2b, why did the villain novels rise? It's not because some novels rely on the protagonist's ability to double standard. To be honest, I used to think it was okay, but now I really can't read it. It looks like Long Aotian or even stronger than Long Aotian [smile]. My three views are completely shattered! So I suggest you write a little more detail, slow down the pace, and maintain the plot so that it doesn't collapse again. The villain is a villain, and the brainless protagonist is a brainless protagonist. These two cannot be confused. It's okay if it's not a cool novel, but don't feel aggrieved.

Not bad, a good start

The writing is not bad, I saw it was so well written. Why is no one watching?

Well written, why do some people give it low marks? Come on, author