The Shaking Jar's Second Book

I think this book is quite good. Except for the fact that there are two or one story lines in the front that are not well written, the rest is pretty good. Of course, this book was still a bit immature when I first wrote it, but it won't always be like that. The author, if possible, could describe the protagonist in the story more delicately in various aspects, such as emotions. It's better to be a little innovative, and the story inside will be more interesting. Overall, this book is still very good to read, except for some minor issues! This is originally a sweet novel, so there is no brainlessness in it. The protagonist still has an IQ. I don't talk about IQ except in front of my lover. The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. 🍉

It's very beautiful and worth appreciating. The writing is so brilliant, the plot is exciting, and the characters are three-dimensional and amazing. Love this book so much. Love it, love it.

It's so beautiful. Kudos to the author.

I really like the author's humor and patience. I really like this novel. I'm looking forward to the couples of Yan Yan and Lan Xize, Zuo Qi and Fang Shangtang. The other CPs are also very sweet and interesting. I like them very much.

Super beautiful, five-star praise

A super sweet pet novel!!!

It's super pretty. Come and show it to me.

It's beautiful and well written. The author is very good.

It's so good, but a little short, but it has a good ending. I hope the author will work harder in the future!

I'm going to starve to death. If I don't put food in, I'm going to starve to death.