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Strong, the wives who have been dead for six thousand years are all interested in the protagonist. I feel that the female characters described in more than 30 words are the harem of the male protagonist. This is a fine tradition of ancient online literature👍

I really like it, but I suggest that the author grasps the pace of the process. Writing more than 70 chapters will easily wear out many people's patience, so no one will read it later while saving books. If it is a little less slow-paced, the flow of the book will be much better.

I think it's quite creative and the writing is pretty good. Come on, kid.

... It's a little slower, but it's still pretty good. I hope it won't get mixed up or crash because of too much driving. Come on.

I personally like the content, but the plot is a bit confusing, but the rest is pretty good. Furthermore, the language is too straightforward and I am a bit worried about being shut down by "Shen He". I hope you can work hard and write a good plot. Also, the update is a bit slow. For example, the Tomato software is too slow or does not update and quickly disappears. In the end, only a few regular visitors are left. Why! ! ! ! There is no way around it. But you have to be honest when you are a human being. @, Don't lie to people who say you have a beginning and an end. I will try my best to arrange three free small gifts for you every Saturday and Sunday. The rest of the time I am still in high school and have no way to arrange it. [Grievance] [grievance]

It's so awesome. I hugged it all in one go. Overall, it's pretty good. The new Golden Finger Book, 18+ background story, the plot is not delayed, it is very enjoyable, very immersive, and there is no knife at all (please send some)

Actually I quite like this book, it's quite interesting, but when I heard about chapter 90, why couldn't Yun tide take it with her? It's possible that the author had other plans. I also gave it five stars, so I took the first step.

It's like an urban novel wrapped in a fairy-like shell, and people with an appetite for it should like it.

Highly recommended, the only drawback is that updates are discontinued [smile]

The writing is very good, with rich emotional lines, characterizations with style and characteristics, the title is very innovative, and the causes and consequences are also written in detail. However, there are too many holes buried, and it is not easy to make up for it. If you want to make up for it, you will have to write many chapters. However, as long as the author writes carefully, these problems are not big. The main reason is that there are too many 25-year-olds. The author also wrote about driving, but not too much. I must report it.

When I saw the small version of Huang Qingji coming out, I wanted to know if the appearance was the same as the historical one. Even the girl version was all green. Because in history, they were married as wives and had daughters. If the appearance is the same (whether it is a girly version or a mature version), it will all be green. That's not a matter of whether the girl's version of the film is there or not. Then continue reading

The author's writing is becoming more and more sensible, and there are quite a lot of foreshadowings. It can be seen that the author must have put a lot of effort into it. In fact, there was a time when I abandoned the book, and it was the part about helping Yun tide detoxify. At that time, I didn't know why, but I just felt it was a bit poisonous. Recently, I accidentally read it again and started reading it again. I have to say that the author's writing style has improved a lot compared to a year ago. Keep up the good work, author [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love]

The subject matter is quite novel, and the content looks pretty good, but the author is too short, and it took him so long to write so well.

There are currently 208 chapters. It's a really good harem book. Naturally (it's not bad), it's just a bit older.

It's beautiful, why is the score so low?

Are Tomato ratings based on the number of people? Around 6 o'clock

I took a look at the catalog, why are there so many deletions? Are there any groups? [Face covering] I think the group is full of members. Can we join the second group?

This book is still very comfortable even if it is deleted, and the deleted chapters are marked with deletions. I think this is very good, as it does not feel like some novels were suddenly cut off. It feels very baffling and cannot enter the author's imagination space to imagine.

Very good. They are among the best harem stories I have read on Tomato. There's nothing poisonous about it. The protagonist is not an indecisive character either. Four points means that the defense is gone.

Brothers, I must support it, but books are also okay

It's okay, but the realm refreshment is too slow. I've read more than 100 chapters and the protagonist hasn't improved yet. I hope the author can see [eating melon]

Cast an illusion to create a heroine who will do whatever you want to her, and then this illusion is perfectly reflected in the heroine's dream. Does this count as giving the protagonist a green thumb? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The author thanks you for replying immediately and gives you five stars [love]

The plot is very strange. When I first watched it, I was worried that the heroine would not be the same as in the original plot. How to deal with it later. After watching it, I found that the heroine was only chased by girls. I was forced to be helpless😹The characterization is delicate and the world view is relatively large. It is a pity that the author has been busy recently and the updates are slow. I hope the author will finish what he is doing before releasing more🦌

Little writer, you can send a message asking for gifts at the end of each chapter. Not only can you increase your income, but it also represents everyone's recognition of you. You are so cute, author-chan, hehe...

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, but it's a little stiff in the early stages.

The plot is relatively complete and the narrative is relatively good.

Not bad, the rhythm is good and the look is pleasing.

I think it's very good, and I finally found a good book that's not poisonous, but it's too much to take my junior sister back to the Immortal Sect and write 70 or 80 chapters alone [smiles] Let's keep it for a few more months [Working on manuscript][Learned]

The author said he wanted to go out for a while, but never came back. He stopped updating, [crying][crying]