A Business Simulation in a Box

Wouldn't it be a good idea not to return to the real world after the gods have descended? Just treat it as time travel. And the goddess can't use the people in the landscaping box. Wouldn't it be better to just put a figure in and the gods descend? [Purely personal opinions, for reference only]

The idea is novel and the outline is not bad! The writing style is a bit poor. Reading it feels like reading historical documents. The writing style seems more suitable for simulators. . .

Not bad, the updates are a bit slow, the combat aspect is a bit boring as the author is not very comfortable with it, and some combat descriptions are a bit redundant and not focused enough. A good author should make every content and plot very attractive, but generally it is pretty good. After all, not everyone can write well. I think the author is more suitable for writing daily life and plots about Lily's development of territory. The combat aspects are not passionate enough or a bit redundant.

Too many descriptions give people the feeling of AI, and the descriptions are vague. The story flow is not reasonable enough and relies entirely on "Leave this matter to the XXX card summoned beast".

It's very interesting to watch, the writing is rarely good, and the plot description is also very detailed, but there are really few people watching it. I think a big part of the reason is that some of the plots are too detailed, often with long paragraphs of character introductions and combat descriptions, and the thorough transformation process takes too long 🤦 Most of Tomato's books are fast-paced books now, which may cause some people to not be able to read them, but I still have to read them well. I still want to ask if you will consider the original body coming to the world later? Actually, it doesn't matter, as long as it doesn't end badly, I will keep pursuing it [laughing]

The author said it very imaginatively... The setting of the story itself is quite interesting (like it), but the writing style... Let me start with a few shocking words: 1. There are too many settings in the early stages! How come there are seventy or eighty chapters, and the entire chapter introduces how much energy is needed to summon units, how much energy is gained from war, and how much energy is consumed... It can be streamlined to a certain extent, and it does not need to be written like an introduction to game mechanics. Unless... There really is such a game (laughing and crying), otherwise the whole setting in one chapter will really make people just want to skip it; 2. In some parts, the story can be expanded and told, and it does not necessarily have to be summarized in one sentence. There are too many parts, such as the dispute between the two factions in the second world and how they finally cooperated. We can use some scenes to spread out and write about it, which includes both the battle of wits and the content. A simple sentence about the two factions merging, but it feels a bit... A running account, or in other words, an overly grand narrative, and it doesn't even feel like reading a history book (what did so and so do today, this is quite interesting too #). Finally, let me tell you an interesting story in this book: from the perspective of the protagonist, he is a god of light and is saving the world. But what if we change the angle (bad smile. Jpg)… An evil god came suddenly and brainwashed a group of refugees, and then turned these people into his followers by giving them food, water, shelter, etc. Out of thin air. Then, this evil god can summon the dead to fight for him, and he can even summon fantasy characters! Each of these summons is absolutely loyal to the evil god and has superb skills. In terms of low-end combat power, the evil god can also continuously summon soldiers, and can even resurrect dead soldiers. Even if they have been beaten to pieces, they cannot prevent this resurrection. If someone is defeated by the evil god, his body will be transformed into a distorted monster (compared to his original appearance), and his cognition and memory will be completely brainwashed! The evil god will also possess the believer, occupy the body, and even plunder the life (referring to the separation of childhood sweethearts), and the sacrificed person will fanatically dedicate himself... Finally, this evil god will also set his sights on the universe. Now even the brave and fearless warriors are coveted by the evil eye... (Funny)

The subject matter is good, but the writing is poor (five stars are encouraging)

-1 For the black beast (inexplicably associated with it), -1 for the goblin (ignoring the apartheid setting), and -1 for the bookkeeper (for fear of losing the book).

How can I put it, reading this book feels like reading a report, not like reading a novel, and the protagonist, as a god in the microscopic world, is too low. It is understandable to give food and medical supplies, but is it a bit too much to have the houses built for the little people? The protagonist also loudly warned of the goblin attack. I really couldn't hold back, even if I urgently needed faith to survive.

I'm an old book friend, so I think it's okay, but there are too many books now. The author thinks it's a little outrageous that this book has more than 200 chapters and only has less than 30 comments. I hope the author can work hard.