Genshin Impact: I, the Overlord, Am in Teyvat

The author writes very well, but why does he write "semi-invincible" and "daily sugar" in the introduction? Why are there knives in it? I **** the author!

It's okay, but the ability of the Holy Lord was not written well. It can calm the movement of rats and give life. It is not a dull life. In the original work, whether it is Pero, the super moose or the doll warrior, they are all consistent with the setting. They are not rigid procedures. Pero is as if he has been resurrected. Unfortunately, it is gone. It might have been better if the Tiger Talisman was used to separate Morax 🍉

It was well written, but to be honest, it was a bit overwhelming in the end.

Don't read chapters 36 to 38. Don't read. Don't regret it. I cried. All™ Knife. Woooooooooooooooo

It is an edible masterpiece for two-dimensional fans. The plot of the novel is skillfully written, and it is very good in terms of daily life and emotions. I particularly like the story of Yueyue. The love between mortals and gods is destined to be fruitless. The author does not force sexual agreement, and uses delicate descriptions and experiences to make the protagonist's character and emotions more full and vivid, which is considered a sublimation. The shortcoming is that it can be seen that the author wanted to write more emotional lines for the female protagonist, but it was a bit broken. In front of Inazuma, the attitude of the male protagonist is: not taking the initiative, not rejecting, and having fun, which is quite good. But after Rice Wife, the "innocent" male protagonist took various initiatives towards the Thor twins, and he won the game in the 20th or 30th chapter. Compared with the previous ones, he felt a bit scumbag, which is a small poisonous point. Also, the male protagonist is already considered the strongest in the world, and he is also paving the way to break out of the universe. I hope it doesn't collapse. From the current point of view, the five stars are encouraging.

The author's writing is really good, with an emotional flavor. I couldn't help but cry while reading it. Although I have never been in love, I can still tell that Yueyue and the protagonist have a deep relationship, and I will still never forget it even when I grow old. Sad and deplorable

It can be seen that the author did not want to write an invincible flow, but the twelve talismans were really chopped too hard. In terms of life form, they should only get the body of the Holy Lord but not his destiny. In fact, this situation should be written as a system lottery flow, where the lottery is drawn while traveling. Unfortunately, the main line is determined too early. Otherwise, the protagonist can be given a magic encyclopedia, which is the book written by the Holy Lord. The ability is gradually gained, and the stamina is strengthened.

I can completely understand how the old man feels. The protagonist is really too out of the ordinary. I feel a little tired after watching it, but the low star is not good enough. I will give it 4 stars for the time being. Let's check it out again.

The name of the book is just like Iron Restaurant. According to Zhongli, I suggested changing the name. I was not attracted to it at first.

The content is interesting and lively, and I like the character of the protagonist very much; and the addition of the Holy Lord and 12 Spells of Jackie Chan's Adventures makes it even more eye-catching. The author has a good control over the plot of the novel, but there are some small details that are not added (for example, the origin of Panyan Jieluo is missing and some of the timelines do not match up). Other than that, everything is pretty good. I hope the author can maintain and surpass himself. After reading so many Genshin Impact fans, this is one of my favorites. Good luck, author!