Under One Person: I Will Add Money to Become a Layman, Working from 9 to 5

A new book is on the way... I will continue to take salt for myself~

It's quite good to watch, better than those fics that follow industrial assembly line plots. Some of them follow the original plot completely, and it's as boring as reading the original graphic novel. It's just like there are more people watching the show.

In fact, I think it's okay. After all, novels are meant to make you happy and keep reading. As long as you can keep reading, it is a good book for me. This is better than those books that have high ratings and are said to be masterpieces, but can't be read at all.

I don't think there's anything wrong with it except that the word count is currently too small and it's not enjoyable enough to read. I would like to ask the author to work hard and code a few more chapters. Xia He handled it very well. I like it. I hope I won't accept it too early. Apart from not being enjoyable enough, I made a typo...

@ Meng Liangqi Since you asked for everything, I will give you a five-star rating (if you reply to me, I will give you a five-star rating. If you don't reply to me, I will give you a two-star rating or delete it and re-rate it with a two-star rating [laughing]) (This is a test of the author's activity level [top post]) The author is really too active. Everything seems to be going well so far.

Very good. Unexpectedly written. Lots of second creations.

The protagonist written by the author has a good character, but his emotional handling is a bit soft. Not decisive enough to clearly state the relationship. But about the description of the protagonist. It's quite reasonable. After all, before time travel, he was an ordinary person under the rule of law. Some detailed conversations require careful thinking. Some typos need to be changed. Although it does not affect reading. But if we plan to have no CP. Regarding emotions, it is better to write more clearly. Therefore, the topic of emotion can increase the content of the novel. But many books nowadays fail in the emotional aspect. So think more about your own abilities. As well as the aspect of the novel's dialogue character. If it cannot be handled well, simply describe it clearly to express the emotional relationship. This is a solution. Overall, a five-star rating. I didn't feel too toxic. (I just finished reading them all this afternoon.)

Okay, okay, the author's new book supports it. Good looking, love watching, more updates [full]

It's really good, come on! Looking at it from Xingtie, when will Genshin Impact come out [Thinking]

It's still very good, but could the author change the title of master? This title is very particular. All the words you use here are master. I hope the author can pay attention to it

Dear author, Hello! First of all, thank you for bringing us such a great story. Every chapter you write brings us endless surprise and pleasure, and we are deeply honored to accompany you on this writing journey. However, we can't help but regret that it's been a while since your last chapter. During this time, we have been looking forward to your new work and anxiously waiting for you to reveal the next plot for us. I believe you also understand that readers are eager for wonderful stories. This expectation is like a fire burning in their hearts and cannot be extinguished. Therefore, we kindly ask you to update the new chapter as soon as possible so that our expectations can be met. At the same time, we also know that creation is not easy, and we believe that you are also working hard to find inspiration and breakthroughs. During this process, we are willing to give you our most sincere support and encouragement. Finally, thank you again for the joy you bring to our lives. We look forward to your new work and believe it will bring us more exciting stories. Readers who are eagerly awaiting

It looks good for now, author, cheers This seems to be the first book in which Xia He pursues the male protagonist. The author writes it well and doesn't give up. It would be nice if Xia He had only one female protagonist. I have read many stories with multiple female protagonists, and each female protagonist does not have much plot. I hope that more interactions between the male and female protagonists can be written. It is quite interesting to watch. Come on, author.

The writing is smooth, the plot is on point, and it doesn't drag on. The protagonist is involved in the plot, but not completely. It can only be said to follow the timeline. I think this scale is very well grasped. The strength is relatively strong, but the upper limit has not yet been seen. In the author's words, the protagonist is a bit frustrated, Feng Baobao's talent seems to be unreliable, and Zhang Chulan is also a bit frustrated despite his efforts (this is probably what I mean). Quite interesting. The whole length is well organized. One thing I felt while reading was that the relationship with Xia He was described as very ambiguous in the early stages, but in fact their relationship was not ambiguous at all. If readers want to quit after reading this, I suggest you stay for a while. There will be a thorough and complete narrative in the next few chapters, and the author has written the plot very well. When dealing with the relationship between Xia He, Zhang Lingyu and Feng Shayan and how it is viewed by outsiders, they are all suppressed first and then promoted, making you feel: Oh oh oh oh! Oh! ! ! ! ! ! , It's also interesting to see the reverse later. The protagonist's character is very special, and it is also the kind that most migrant workers hope for. He is not aggrieved. Every turn and change he makes is very organized, and you will not feel depressed. The plot is not for the sake of the plot. It is thought through and not forced. The character design is also very upright and natural, not obtrusive, and appropriately measured. If this book is put together in this way, I think it can still get a score of 9. If you look closely, it's a cool novel, but it doesn't have the outrageous arrogance or conflicts. [Praise]

I personally find it very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The setting of Xia He in the TV series is that he can't control his own charm at all. When he was a child, he suffered a lot of injustice at home because of this, so he finally added Quan Xing. But in the setting of your novel, he can control his own abilities. So why did he join Quan Xing? I hope you can fill in this point later.

I have read Chapter 54 so far. The plot content is pretty good so far. I hope that the combat power will be carefully thought out. Now I have a feeling that the combat power will collapse later. It may also be because I just challenged 4 Zhang Kuang.

To be honest, you, the heroine, might be Yan Zi. Did Xia He get together with Zhou Fengliu in the end? Author There's no need to post it later, it's a bit poisonous. Don't want to read it

@ Meng Liangqi Today is April Fool's Day. I wonder if the author has seen the whole work of Eternal Calamity, which is all about fighting the God of War [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's pretty good-looking. The writing is okay. There's nothing too bad about it. It's just that the salary is a bit of a complaint. I haven't read the original work. But your salary of tens of millions is really not enough to compare. For example, if you add 500 to it, you can go to follow me. Anyway, I won't go. Although I can't make 500 a day, this is a world with force. If you have such ability, you can only make so little money to do this job. How can ordinary people survive?

Except that the author didn't know how to deal with the emotional line of the cat cake, I think it's quite interesting (I didn't take the money) [laughing]

I've been a bookworm for almost 8 years, and I've basically read all the hot-blooded and shocking genres. When I'm chasing other books, it's nice to have this kind of funny but not nasty book to spice things up. Now the author is updating every day. I listen to the book to sleep, and I fall asleep after just one and a half chapters. It's very comfortable. The author's breakthrough in my previous comments is quite interesting, but helping me sleep is not an advantage. Anyway, you update so late every day [making faces] @ Meng Liangqi Let's not talk anymore. It's getting boring. I gave up.

It's very interesting, especially the plot of Xia He, the Bone Scraper, which took a lot of time to write, and was finally "taken" offline by Yi Dao. It has a very new author's style of writing whatever comes to his mind.

When I read it, I thought this score was 8.5, Which was very appropriate. Unlike some books that were rated 9, which were a mess, at least the character of the protagonist was still very distinct. And although the supporting characters cannot be one person with one character, they are at least within a reasonable range. Very good and worth seeing.

Personally, I feel pretty good. I'm not very good at writing reviews, but don't say I'm a human being. I've always been treated like a human being before, and I'm really annoyed.

How should I put it? When it comes to the plot, it doesn't have the compactness of other fanfics. Maybe it's because I've read too many fast-paced books. Occasionally, it's okay to read this type of book. It gives people a very relaxing feeling. I personally think this book is very good, but it's just too little to read [smile]

Either close the emotional line, or don't write it, don't abuse it, don't pull it,,,,, the rest is pretty good! ! ! !

Except for the hard love line, everything else is very good. Personally, I prefer to watch movies without CP or with two male protagonists, but it's very complicated to watch. Oh, it's a male video, that's okay

Yes, the writing is easy to understand, the plot is rich, especially the protagonist, who is so handsome, low-key and can make up for the regrets of the plot. The character description is very good, but can you be a little nicer to Xia He? A little bit is fine

It's really good-looking, and the strength is unparalleled. Except for Lao Tianshi (without using the conceptual rules), no one can beat him. Regarding the description of the layman who adds money, Zhou Fengliu has achieved it, and it is very successful. It is not comparable to other fake laymen who add money.

Invincible, this book is invincible, the author's writing is first-rate, and his narrative ability is also excellent. Especially some insights into the protagonist's power improvement and character. The description of emotions is also very good, even though I haven't seen yet whether it will be a single heroine or multiple heroines. But I think it can be viewed on both sides. I read a chapter of this book before and I didn't think it was good. But I accidentally picked it up today and read a few more chapters, and I was impressed by the author's writing style. Especially his handling of the CP of the protagonist Zhou Fengliu, he really wrote the flesh-and-blood feeling of some female characters, unlike some people who feel like their brains were eaten by zombies and then stuffed with shit. The kind of writing where a woman can't walk in two minutes after meeting, and has to go to bed in three minutes. As for this book, among artist's fan fiction, I think it can be given a score of 9.2. The current score feels a bit low.

Zhang Chulan: I thought I was inferior to one person, but later I felt that one person was the Heavenly Master, and I was at most inferior! I never expected that I was not even below. This crap book has nothing to do with me