One Piece Comics Heritage System

It's been a while since I've commented, so here's a quick comment: The early setting of the protagonist's character seems to be good, at least I personally like it, and the plot is also good. What I don't like at first is not the money spent on Whitebeard, but the heroine Charlotte Lingling. I think it would be better if the heroine is at least a hina, but after thinking about it later, the protagonist is from the modern era, so the requirement for this should not be that big. The second is the development of the plot. It is impossible to wait for "Robin, Nami" in this time period, right? Coupled with the timing of the plot, choosing Charlotte Lingling as the heroine is very good and correct; Let's talk about the follow-up suggested plot: (suggestions only) First of all, the heroine Lingling should have a character to solve her anorexia and soul problems. Secondly (personally I think) Sky Island is a good development base. That's all for the comments. Personal comments have personal preferences. Don't judge me. The author writes well. I really want to see the martial arts moves from Chinese comics appear in the pirate scenes. I believe this book will be interesting.

The pinnacle of pirate fan fiction The plot design is vivid and vivid The characterization is penetrating Kuanggu Shuojin [Like] [Sneaky smile]

Give it four stars. It's not good to keep spending Whitebeard's money even if you don't join the Whitebeard group.

I've seen a few of the previous ones that I kind of want to complain about, but they're generally harmless and worth a look, so keep going! I hope it will be more exciting in the future [Like]

It looks good and develops slowly. This kind of fusion ability is very good. I have an idea. Use the method of supreme quick knife, use high-quality materials to build equipment such as finger tigers, and feed this equipment with super-type or natural-type Devil Fruit. Even if it touches water, it should be fine. At least the material itself is there. If the blood does not contain the Sea Tower Stone factor, then directly feed the high-strength raw material with Devil Fruit and then embed it into the body. Is it feasible?

This is the 203rd book I have read about One Piece fighting the World Government, and it is also the second book that allows me to return to the original world. After living here for forty or fifty years, my parents are all dead when I go back [crying]. This is a question of having a wife, children and parents who may have died.

What about Bajiquan and spear skills? Is Bajiquan just boxing? Where's the Liuhe gun?

I don't know what to say in two words: beautiful

Very good, I hope the author will continue to work hard

Yes, I personally like to read it. Good luck to the author.

It looks good, keep writing.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Not to mention, it's pretty beautiful

I can watch it all with just one female protagonist haha ​​(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The plot is really good, I love it

High-end atmosphere and class, low-key luxury and connotation. Unrestrained, foreign style and deep, cool and awesome. There's nothing in the world that can't be solved with one car, and if there is, then two.

Well written and awesome

Just two words are beautiful

These few words a day are enough for anyone to read and add a thousand words. I am talking about one person adding a thousand words.

It looks okay for now, but I don't know if there are any characters from the League. After all, does the League also have anime?

This is a rare article about the Rocks era. Good luck to the author and I look forward to your next performance.

It's okay for now, not bad

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Red and fiery, in a trance

Not bad, not bad, really good.

Not bad, keep up the good work

Personal feeling is good

It's okay, I feel good. It would be even better if I added some pictures.

It took 40 years to rely on the protagonist of the world to dare to defeat the world government, and it was the slowest thing I have ever seen to set up the online settings for the protagonist.

It's beautiful, why are there no comments?