The Reborn Evil Master: the Disciple Has Bad Intentions

The author of this book said that it was just for practice, and it is normal to have a little plot. The first chapter is not very smooth, but the later chapters are smoother. Then the update is unstable and writing is very slow. The whole story is relatively smooth and easy to understand, and it looks okay. However, the climax is not written so high. For example, the first encounter in the Karma Fire Realm, the feeling did not meet my expectations. There are also applied plots, such as the part in retreat that helps a man who becomes obsessed. , That person didn't appear later, and the part was written very short, just like a formality, just to set up the plot. To be honest, I didn't write that part at all. Whatever foreshadowing I wrote must be able to be used in the subsequent plot. If it is not used, it will be digging holes instead of filling them. However, I am still looking forward to the later chapters. Come on.

It's okay, it's not the same as anything else. The heroine is reborn as soon as she comes and then wants to take revenge. What happens in the end? The overall reading is very smooth, and there is nothing strange about the sentences. It's just that there are a lot of types, and it's not easy for people to watch. But it's still okay. I'll leave it for now and come back to it later.

Well? What. ? Complete text. No? Too sudden. All right. It's actually quite good.

Finished reading. OK OK