Pokemon: Wait, They're All Adorable!

How should I put it? As a new author, the writing is good, but if you don't grasp the essence, how can you say this? It was written too fast, so the life of this book will be very short. After reading the first 17 chapters, I met the King of Heaven in Chapter 17, with crazy shocks, crazy praises, and the chapter about my grandfather. Even if it paved the way for the protagonist, it was impossible to go directly to Z. Writing like this would be very exaggerated. (To summarize, I said before that this book cannot exceed 500,000 words, and the life span of this book will be very short. If the author has to write 500,000 words to slap me in the face, I can only let the author slap me 🤔)

First, the protagonist is a villain, has some abilities, is crazy, has a bad mouth, and is crazy to no end. Second, when I was in my twenties, my personality after time travel was too childish. This book is okay, but these two points greatly affect the quality of the entire book. I don't want you to swallow your anger when others ridicule you, but you have a crazy bad mouth, which means you are of low quality and lack of education. You have some ability and are crazy and arrogant, so what? Are you a champion? Aren't you afraid of being assassinated? This reminds me of Tony Iron Man, who blew up his address, and as a result, his home was bombed.

I can tolerate the protagonist being teased by the BOSS and then the BOSS mocking the protagonist in certain ways But I can't stand people making fun of me, but I can still let them run away. And at that time, the protagonist also summoned the two dragons of time and space.

In Chapter 14, the protagonist's reckless behavior was very bad. He posted a video as Chihong and touched other people's cakes, which already caused hatred. In reality, the dream demon around him is special in appearance. Even though his family told him to hide his identity, the protagonist still posted the video of the special dream demon as the red anchor. This clearly tells others that the person with the special dream demon in reality is Chi Hong. Do you think those enemies whose interests have been harmed can stop harming you? The protagonist's current combat power is only a dream monster that has just passed its infancy. As a member of the army of time-travelers, how dare he be careless before he has grown up? Thanks to the tough background, if the protagonist is from a lower-class or commoner background and dares to commit suicide without an umbrella, the fact that he is not spitted to death by readers shows that everyone is of high quality. It can only be said that the rebirth of his family gave him the confidence to be a prodigal, but the protagonist who relies on his background to survive and relies on the system to develop rapidly. He is too naive in his behavior and thinks like a paramecium. After all, he is an empty shell without charisma.

It's well written, and the tactics are classic, but it's a bit missing. I hope the author can update it more.

The fighting strength has collapsed,

Really beautiful 👍

Can I add Jie Laora?

Come on, it's exciting

Not bad 🍉