Global Expedition: Wild Adventures

It's great, I just wish there wasn't a female protagonist

Looks good. Does the author have a female protagonist? If so, I will withdraw.

The author's writing style is still a bit immature, and many exciting points have not been written. For example, the ancient cave ruins discovered during the first expedition can be written about the relevant professional staff accidentally seeing it while watching the live broadcast, and then expressed shock at the discovery of the protagonist, and then reported it to the upper management, and privately negotiated with the protagonist for the specific location, and then commended the protagonist in the news to expand the protagonist's influence in the early stage, but the ending was scrawled. There is also a second expedition, which can also describe the shock of some researchers who have been to this place before, and can also illustrate how powerful the protagonist is, including the discovery of savages. A discovery of this level did not attract official attention at all, and the emotions were completely unreachable every time. This world-level discovery was written as a self-entertainment for the protagonist and those in the live broadcast room. Moreover, not long after each adventure ends, the next adventure begins. The transitional chapters in the middle are too short. You can also write some daily life in these transitional chapters. It is too dense.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful Wilderness Survival game, and I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the back.

Personally, I felt that the adventure was too bland. Anyway, I didn't feel like reading a tomb-robbing novel. The adventure locations chosen by the author are actually very mysterious. Especially the Brahmaputra Grand Canyon and Lop Nur that are currently emerging. There are many legends in both official and unofficial history. I think the author can add some appropriately, and then the protagonist can personally experience these during the exploration, making the entire exploration process more ups and downs. At the same time, the system can also play a guiding role, and every adventure or survival place is for the ultimate goal. Rather than just a tool for publishing tasks (at least for now, the system is like this).

There are too many typos, and why don't you say that your live broadcast software has a signal and does not need to be charged? No need to charge your phone? Are you trying to survive in the wilderness or are you going on a trip? If it's about survival, shouldn't the most realistic thing be a 24-hour live broadcast? Is there any such thing as downcasting? For me, unless you are broadcasting 24 hours a day, you are just a script designed by the team.

It's a very nice wilderness survival novel. It's my favorite type. Kudos to the author.

First, all the equipment and video editing can be purchased with money! You received so many gifts, why didn't you pay for them? Second, the water problem is serious, and science education should account for more than half! We can't remember why you do so much popular science? It's totally a water number! Third, are you a wilderness survival or travel writer? I have to introduce every place I visit and write about every meal I eat! No wonder not many people read 200,000 words

Come on, don't be a eunuch. I hope you can update it more besides maintaining the writing level. These dozens of chapters are really not enough to read.

I admire that the protagonist starts drinking unboiled water at the beginning. Unless it is an emergency, you can understand that you don't boil it, but I can't understand him drinking boiled water at the beginning. The author also insists on seeing Mr. Bei and Mr. De. Oh my god, since he is writing about survival in the wilderness, can he be more rigorous?