Don't Kill People in a Romance Novel

It can be seen that the author of Fusion World still wants to write with depth and breadth, but the plot is compact, some plots are quite abrupt, the details of the causes and consequences are not very clear, and the ending is a bit sloppy. It may be that the author has not figured out how to write later or is just practicing writing, so he wrote it in a hurry. Also, the characters do not feel full enough, and the backgrounds of the characters are not rich enough, which is a bit one-sided. It is recommended to add more thoughts or psychological activities of the heroine on the incident. However, this subject matter is still acceptable, it is relatively new, and it tests the heroine's ability to handle relationships and resolve conflicts.

The author's writing style and the plot of the novel are very good, but like other comments, the mind is too active. The introduction also says that there are a lot of DY jokes, but you can't even suppress the serious plot. It's really exhausting to watch. I want to give up the article but I'm a bit reluctant to give up the plot.

The writing is quite good, with a sense of compactness, and the plot of Shura Field is well written. Citing too many online events somewhat affects the viewing experience, because in addition to the protagonist, the time traveler, several other time travelers are introduced, so the plot rhythm is a bit strange.

In reality, it can only have three stars, but I am selfish, so it is five stars. The plot has many unfilled holes, but the suspense style is quite enjoyable.

Come on, author, I'm ready to read a hundred chapters at any time 🙂 🙂 🙂 It's so beautiful

It looks good, but I personally think it's a bit too short, leaving me feeling like I haven't finished it yet.

It's fun, not bad

The idea of ​​this novel is good, but it is not well written.

I haven't read many chapters so far, and the plot is quite compact, but I don't know what the follow-up will be?

It makes me a little confused, continue reading