Star Vault: It's Broken, I'm Surrounded by Star Gods

[Laughing] Honkai Impact 3 is a "Healthy Sunshine, Positive" game. You can see the teacher's warm guidance to the students in "The Last Lesson", you can see the sisterhood in "Reconstruction of Angels", you can see the students' beautiful yearning for their teachers in "Meteor of the Sky", you can see the sweet friendship in "Sinner's Elegy", you can see the story behind Sunshine's team leader in "Crossing the Dust", you can see the beautiful energy of friends in "Forever Burning", you can see the beautiful energy of friends in "Apocalypse". You can see the beautiful love of Bishop Otto in "The Story of You" and the "happy ending" of the beautiful girl as cute as a flower in "The Story of You"... In conclusion, go ahead and have fun, it's very sweet♪

It's from an old book, it's very interesting and I like it very much [Admiration], but please take the time to revise it, the typos really affect the perception [smile]

It's good-looking, but the author is really explosive. Belloberg's three versus one hundred is okay, but Jingyuan and Shenjun on the fairy boat are really, am I straightforward? ! ! But I recommend that the pharmacist [shy] can still accept it, just wait for the Star God Shura Field

Very nice, the writing is very good so far, as long as the character design is not broken, the visual score is about 9.4 Points

After hesitating for a long time, I decided to write a review. It is undeniable that the setting of greed is great, and the world view is also very complete. The story of Greed Walker is also well written. But on this basis, this book is also very subversive. The major star gods have become effeminate, and various characters are jealous of the protagonist. I thought that Nihility would always remain the same, but in the end, Nihility was also dragged into the water. When nothingness becomes physical, it violates its destiny, because nothingness is no longer truly "nothing". I can't see where the protagonist is greedy at the moment. He is not like a Star God. He is more like an ordinary man who has traveled to the Star God. He will make love to women, discuss their body shapes, and try to show off. For example, by asking Xipei to open the back door directly, there will be people who like him, such as a special liking for the pharmacist. His desires are mainly reflected in lust and appetite, but I think greed should not only refer to these two points. Greed, what can be called true greed. There is the ultimate pursuit and the ultimate desire for everything. Whether it is extreme appetite, extreme lust, extreme laziness, extreme intelligence, etc., They are all desires. So I agree that greed affects other destiny paths, which makes sense. The Star God will not hesitate to hit the wall and die on his destiny, and will always fulfill his destiny and fulfill his destiny to the end. But can the protagonist be called greedy? His humanity is greater than his divinity, and even the selection criteria for his own practitioners have a premise, "selflessness." This is the result of the limitation of the protagonist's humanity, because if they are true star gods, they don't care about humanity, they only care about their own destiny. For example, the pharmacist is the ultimate in compassion and will not reject others. He does not care about the results of his blessings and has no restrictions on the three views. He will take action when he sees suffering and prays for blessings. He does not care about the path and consequences, as long as he meets the "abundance". The pharmacist has no humanity. He only has compassion, the ultimate compassion. The protagonist has humanity, and even the other star gods he influences also have some. I think this is already divorced from the concept of "god". In my opinion, he is not worthy of the title "Greedy Star God". He is not truly "greedy". Even if a person's mind is filled with eating, sleeping, and 18+, if this is the meaning of his existence, he is still considered "greedy". Rather than having a premise of "selflessness" As I write this, I suddenly realize that "greed" is too broad and unreal. I can't imagine a world where "greed" coexists with other fates. It seems to be greater than all the fates of Xingtie. After all, it is a second creation by a fan. After reading so many of them on Tomato, this is my favorite second creation, even if the plot is too subversive. Aside from the "greedy star god" setting, I also like Huang Cheng's character very much. After all, who doesn't like Shota? These are some of my opinions, not organized, I hope they can be understood.

A very good harem article, the details are well handled, but the content is a bit short, please expand on it.

Except for the ambiguous harem, there are no other big problems. Five stars if you can accept it. The author is obviously very good at writing ambiguous stories. It's just like me that I get bored easily if I read too much. It's all OOC and disgusting. No matter how I handle it, I get tired of it if I read too much. I like the lone wolf without a heroine. But the author's writing style is really good, except that the original star god has too many changes and is a bit abrupt.

Wrote my favorite feeling

It is a relatively new one in subject matter. Harem story. , Turned all the Star Gods into women, and had great fun fighting openly and secretly. Although some of the characters are not very realistic and can even be said to be broken, but overall, I don't see any problems and it's pretty good. Later, I started to play with various jokes, and it was very interesting to bring in the author's own creations. In addition, the Star God has also broken away from the shackles of his original destiny. This is something I never thought of before. I have to say that the author's imagination is quite big. It may be written in front that it is not very good. , But things are slowly getting better later on, so I look forward to getting better and better. All in all I highly recommend it. Also, the author should code quickly. !

An above-average Star Railway novel, the protagonist's current body is that of a eunuch (it was not fabricated when I fabricated it, so I am very curious about how he goes to the toilet [thinking], or to put it another way, does the Star God need to go to the toilet? [Thinking])

The early plot is very novel, and there are very few fans about Feng Fu, and it seems very addictive. But about Yaliluo, the one emphasizes "same". I don't know if it is to avoid emotional disputes and force the "same" cp to avoid a harem. If you don't add a harem, you don't need to write "same". It feels very strange. I don't know who the audience is. There is also the body setting, which may be for the purpose of writing ambiguity. It is easy to understand and overall worth updating.

The book is novel, the content is lively and interesting, the author's writing style is very good (≧∇≦*), the characters in the book are rich and colorful, and the characters are well described. The author can continue to work hard and update more

It's quite good to watch, but the early plot is quite shocking. For example, why is there no such plot when you're not hungry? It's all harem plots. I don't mean I don't like it, I love it, I just want to watch the more shocking ones.

Generally speaking, in classic two-dimensional fan fiction, as long as everyone can transform into a girl, they can all turn around the protagonist.

It's a very nice starry sky fanfic, and you can trust the author's driving speed [Cool]

The clanking of gold and iron of destruction is accompanied by burning and scorching; the weird laughter of joy is accompanied by the echo of the flute; the arrival of the harmonious holy light is accompanied by the clanging of gold and iron of destruction, which is accompanied by burning and scorching; the strange laughter of joy is accompanied by the echo of the flute; the arrival of the harmonious holy light is accompanied by the rhythm of musical instruments; existence The evaporation of protective steam is accompanied by the knocking of iron tools; the gradual progress of order is accompanied by the echo of bells; the roar of greedy evil beasts is accompanied by terrifying chewing; the refraction and condensation of memory is accompanied by calm echoes; the neighing of breeding insects is accompanied by the flapping of wings; the echo of the void universe... "May [Destruction] give you the power to crush difficulties." "May [Hunting] give you the edge to overcome difficult situations." "May [Abundance] grant you selfless kindness." "May [Preservation] grant you the will to protect others." "May [memory] grant you the calmness to face challenges." "May [Intellect] give you the wisdom to explore the answer." "May [Tonghe] grant you the friendship to unite others." "May [Immortality] grant you a strong body forever." "May [Happiness] give you endless optimism." "May [Pioneering] grant you freedom like the wind and the courage to solve problems."

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've seen a story about falling in love with a star god [laughing]

It's very comfortable to watch, and the plot is reasonable. Although there will be some changes in the author, it will be a little different, but it will not affect it at all, and it will not look strange. This is a very good Bengtie fanfic. If the author continues to keep up, this book will have good results. Keep up the good work!

How can I say that the whole book is very good, but the updates are too slow. I happen to be short of books, so I read the whole book several times. What's wrong with the author? I feel that the quality of the later chapters to Teyvat has declined, probably because the progress was too fast and too little thought was given. I think the author needs to make some changes, but they are all good.

It gives people a fresh and refined feeling. This is the first time I have encountered such a high-quality Bengtie. The plot is fresh and refined, the content is very good, and the heroine describes it very carefully, so you can imagine it on your own. Overall it's a good book

Very nice! I have read more than half of it, and I can say that the novel about Star Railroad that I have read recently is the one that attracts me the most and is the one that I have read for the longest time. You, the author, must work hard! Write more, hee, hee hee (=^▽^=)

It's very beautiful and interesting. It's a fan novel about Beng Tie with a lot of interesting content. Da Guan Bao's problem is that the author's update speed will be slower after reading it. However, the content of each chapter is of very high quality and is very online.

The King of Medicine is kind and gives health to all living beings; the King of Medicine is kind and loves all living beings as if they were his own children; the King of Medicine is merciful and generous, no matter how high or low one is born; the King of Medicine is compassionate and willing to bless all living beings. Here, praise my God, praise my Lord, praise my mother, praise the compassionate Medicine King!

In fact, if you don't read the harem, it is a good happy novel, with a bit of farming, and no BE. It is just a plot and abstract, with a hint of the lover king. The author can actually write ambiguity, but it feels a bit greasy and cannot be handled well, and it becomes obscene by overexerting it. It's okay to skip it, and it can be regarded as a backer and cover for unknown guests.

A very good novel, the content is also very detailed and sufficient, the worldview in the novel is also very complete, the additional new content added, and the new organization constructed are also very specific in shaping. As a Iron Breaking novel, it is also very good. The only drawback is that it is very slow. I hope the author will work harder.

Very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, really good-looking, it's the author, why are you so short? Sister-in-law must be very lonely, right? [This is used to describe short]

This book is very good, summary: "The Love History of the Star God"

Very good, very good, if there were not only five, it would be no problem to give it ten stars! Must be collected permanently! Even if you beat me to death, I won't delete it! It's useless for anyone to come! I said it! ! ! !

Author, you understand fanfiction! ! ! Nice! So beautiful! Ecstasy [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]

This is a good book. Although for some reasons, this book has been locked up in a small dark room, I still hope that the author will continue to update it, because this book is very beautiful. As for how beautiful it is, you will know for yourself if you go and read it😊