Pokemon: Setting Out from Pallet Town

The writing style needs to be improved. The Pokémon I conquered are not trained or written out. It feels like becoming stronger in an instant. There is no concept at all. The details are average. Except for the detailed description of the battle, the rest is basically brushed off. I quite like the short paragraph at the end of each chapter. It looks very warm. So far, I can read it.

Keep up the good work, keep up the good work, I'm optimistic. It's really well written.