National Destiny************

Come on, don't stop updating. I want to see if Luofu Jingheng and Xiao Qinglong dare to get out of the car [laughing and crying]

Very nice! Come on, author! ! !

The subject matter is novel, the plot is vivid and interesting, it is relatively restored to the original work, and has been modified on the basis of the original work. The protagonist has a rich and full personality, decisive killing and handsomeness. It can be said to be a very good one-star iron novel. I hope the author can work hard to update it more

A very good book, but the only bad thing is that the update is a bit slow, but I still plan to give it a five-star support.

National luck, the same old routine. The plot is average, okay. But there are a lot of details about the settings. For example, please don't equate the plot of Collapse of Iron with the game settings. In fact, many of the people we meet have not embarked on their destiny. People like Jeppard's Shield and Pella relied on external forces to fight, but it was not the power of Destiny, and Natasha did not embark on Destiny. I hope the author will pay attention to this when writing Xianzhou, this is very important. The game only sets the destiny for convenience, and it has nothing to do with reality [Chigua] In addition, there are many problems. I hope the author can read more comments, get more accustomed to it, and write better [Note]

It's a good book with novel content (there are definitely no more than 100 million copies of Guoyun Jingliuwen on the entire Internet) and the protagonist's character is not too bad. The content is probably the plot of the game + what the author thinks This book is pretty good among Tomato Mirror fanfics. This book is a good choice for those who don't have high requirements for books. This book is a good choice to pass the time. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I really like this book. The author basically has no word count. One chapter has more than 4,000 words, and Qiong also writes normally. He is not like other authors who often go crazy and have some dirty ideas. It is worth recommending. I hope the author can stick to it. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Even so, the mirror style is hunting, but it was changed to destruction just for the sake of gameplay.

It's okay, but it describes too much of the original plot. Actually, there's no need to describe all the details. It's enough. Keep up the good work, author.

Writing a book is not easy. As long as the content is not too brainless, I can accept it and won't judge it too much.

It's been a long time since I read it, and the overall impression is very good. The plot is still a little different from other national games [like]. Secondly, the characters are well created, but there are too few of them [smile]

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

The quality and word count of the chapters updated by the author are guaranteed. One chapter is as good as two chapters of some novels. It would be better if it was updated twice a day.

Nice! Come on, author! Give five stars

It's great. For loyal players of Bengtie, they can finally make up for the regrets in the plot [Sending my heart] Must be dizzy! [Shy] And the author wants more updates [blowing kisses] If the content of the work is long and exciting, book lovers will not know how long they will be happy [Adoration] Come on♪My author is great~

I think it looks good, but the update is a bit slow. I hope it can be updated faster.

Well, you can adjust the mirror to flow through the sky.ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The author is so awesome [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

How to say it? I feel like 60% of it is original, and the rest is private shooting. For those who have never experienced it and have seen the plot of Iron Break, it is still very good, but if you have seen it, it will be a bit uncomfortable (T^T). If you want to skip it, you are afraid of missing the details [face covering]

Not bad, why is the score so low?

Encourage me, the ones written in the same genre are considered good.

The protagonist plays the game character Kyouryu... Instead of Luofu Swordshead·Kingryu

It's really beautiful. I support you as the author. I hope you won't stop updating [crying][crying]

I forgot to comment on it last time, hehe.

I want to know if the protagonist is married? Or single?

It's pretty good, and it's updated quickly. You can get recommended after reading 100,000 words. The author of a certain work with 50,000 viewers (who was banned for talking about siblings) can get more than 60 in a day [laughter]

Love remains the same across thousands of rivers and mountains, can you please add a few more chapters? [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully] (ᗜ ‸ ᗜ)

Compared to other fanfics on the market, it's pretty good

I can't describe it, the main thing is that it looks great.

Average, okay, watchable