The Outcast: Mastering the Strange Gates at Eight, Shocking Wang Ye

Good looking, highly recommended (it is recommended not to read the paragraph review, some scumbags will just be slanderous) Don't be so watery, the author, I can hardly drink anymore. I only updated two chapters in one day and it's still so watery 🙂🙂

It's really good! The plot in the early stage is quite fast! The pace is tight, and the character portrayal feels quite good 🥰🥰🥰 But I also feel that the protagonist in the early stage is a bit too strong... I don't know how it will be written in the later stage, I look forward to it! However, ordinary people can type at least 30 words a minute, so author, why haven't you updated it yet? 😢 I watched it all in one go, it's really not enough 😢

It looks good, I just hope the author pays more attention to it and it won't end badly. The characteristics of the characters in the book are consistent with those in the original picture, but they are not very different. Moreover, the protagonist in the book and Zhang Chulan both know each other, but they have never met each other. In the later stage, if the protagonist helps Zhang Chulan solve the root cause of the Jiashen Rebellion, or goes with Zhang Chulan and the others to solve the Jiashen Rebellion, I think this is still possible. Otherwise, I don't know what to watch in the later stage. It is almost as in the play but forcibly adding a character and tampering with some plots. There's still a lot to watch, just don't let it end and don't stop updating it😊 But it's a bit wordy, there are quite a lot of psychological description activities, it just feels like hydrology, and I shocked so and so, so I don't need to write a lot about it, but it's a bit wordy. I just hope that the size of five or six pictures can be reduced to one, and the text is not very good.

Because One Man is not finished and many plots are not revealed, there are still some flaws in this novel. I want to know if the author can only rely on himself if he reaches Mi Er's current progress. But I'm still looking forward to Lee Mo-hyun's appearance in the future 🥰

It's good to read, and it doesn't have the common problem of many "prodigy" stories that are too exaggerated to the point of making people laugh. Come on.

The biggest advantage is that the pace is not sluggish, it is refreshing but not brainless, and it is flamboyant but not crazy. The characters and plot are very consistent with the original work and can be elaborated. But the shortcoming is that it fails to show the spiritual character of the character (the heroism of the family and the country), and the characters are not impressive (Tang San's interplay of light and dark, Gu Yue Fang Yuan's coldness and emotional conflict) I had an idea in the later period but the stamina was not enough. However, Zhang Yunqing was originally a Long Aotian. It was not easy to write this kind of novel with characteristics in the later period. Of course, there were also reasons for the lack of updated content in the original work, which led to insufficient breadth of world view and plot content. Finally, I want cool writing, but it is difficult to balance slow-paced reading and fast writing. Of course, Honghuang Wen wrote about Shen Gongbao in the middle period.

The content is rich and substantial, full of new ideas and innovations, the structure is novel and eye-catching, the aroma is overflowing, and the taste is very good, but the taste is a bit salty. I like your fried pork belly very much. ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣠⣶⣶⣶⣦⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⣠⣤⣤⣄⣀⣾⣿⠟⠛⠻⢿⣷⠀ ⢰⣿⡿⠛⠙⠻⣿⣿⠁⠀⠀⠀⣶⢿⡇ ⢿⣿⣇⠀⠀⠀⠈⠏⠀⠀ 𝟓𝟐𝟎🎀 ⠀⠻⣿⣷⣦⣤⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣾⡿⠃⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⠉⠻⣿⣄⣴⣿⠟⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿⡿⠟⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀

Although it is a bit unreasonable, it is so refreshing and exciting for men to see the unreasonable plot!!!

The battle scenes can be written well, please do more. On the other hand, the transitions were a little blurry, and the plot progressed a bit slowly. However, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. This can only be said to be the author's style and cannot be regarded as a shortcoming.

It makes up for the regrets of the original work and has smooth logic. It is already a very good and enjoyable article. Maybe because the original work is too short and the author did not write any more, there is a feeling that the ending is hasty and unfinished. However, for a semi-fanatic like me, I can accept this ending that is not the ending. Overall it looks good.