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After searching for a long time, I finally found a book with Hei Xi as the main character. The writing is also very good. However, I am a student party and don't have many gifts to give, so I can only send a few yuan regularly and send electricity for love [crying] Why is he only 7.6?

The characterization is good but the plot may be a little lacking

Good, very good, very good, good-looking, love to read, keep reading, but there are too few of them now, although there are more than 4,000 in one chapter [currently in progress]

Very well written. And I like the subject matter very much. After all, I have been looking for a book about Xier for a long time. Some have been discontinued. I hope it doesn't break for the better.

Don't cut it, it's so beautiful [Adoration] [Cool]

How long? Beng San finally has a new masterpiece.

I really like this book, and it has a lot of words. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! ! Moreover, there are very few people writing about Xier. Many of them have stopped updating. I hope the author will not stop updating.

It's totally not enough. Send more. Send more.

In terms of plot: more daily life, I really like Hei Xier being pushed back by Bai Xier Rhythm: The narration rhythm of the main plot is a little off, mainly because the emotional line is too good, so the preparation for the main plot is too poor. These five stars include the eight-star emotional line, but the main plot can only be counted as three stars, so the overall five stars, after all, everyone has what they are good at and what they are not good at. Personal suggestion: Optimize the foreshadowing of the main chapter and maintain the emotional line. The main chapter is the long-term existence of the work, and the emotional line ultimately only serves the main line. This is the first time I've posted so many comments. I don't want people to comment on this good book because it's just that. [Laughs]

It seems okay, but there is always a feeling of embarrassment when facing the protagonist group again. It would be great if I could only write 2 Xier posts.

It's very interesting, but I just hope that scrambled eggs don't get blocked for some reason. I've had doubts and anger before, so why shouldn't a book that can arouse emotions be a good book? Full of expectations, three updates a day is best, but it's not a requirement, just keep updating. I hope more people will pay attention and give it a mid-range rating. High scores in the early stage will attract people with data, lower scores in the mid-term will guarantee people, and low scores in the later stage will guarantee people. Tomatoes are urinary, it's good for everyone to know👌🏻.

As soon as Ah Fa arrived at the shop, all the drinkers looked at him and smiled, and some shouted, "Ah Fa, you have a new scar on your face!" He did not answer, but said to the cabinet, "Warm two bowls of wine and ask for a plate of fennel beans." Then he ejected nine molas. They shouted loudly and deliberately, "You must have embarrassed Genshin Impact again!" Ah Fa opened his eyes and said, "Why do you accuse someone of innocence out of thin air..." "What innocence? I saw you embarrassing Genshin Impact with my own eyes the day before yesterday, and you were beaten while hanging up." Ah Fa's face turned red, and there were streaks of veins on his forehead. He opened his mouth and argued, "Kurogenshin cannot be considered evil... Kurogenshin!... Can a matter of just traffic be considered evil?" Followed by a series of difficult words, such as "rice guards", "doing things for money", etc., Which caused everyone to burst into laughter: the atmosphere inside and outside the store was filled with joy.

Brothers, I won't lie to you if I get five stars. I enjoy watching it.

It looks good, but is Hei hope too weak in front of the protagonist group? [Thinking] I feel a little aggrieved. [Aggrieved]

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought she was going to be some kind of girl. I felt aggrieved that the main character couldn't compete with a time-traveling girl, but I didn't expect that after watching it, I would be completely Everyone feels comfortable. 1. The heroine is a lady, has the talent to attract attention, is smart and smart, and can afford it. Come on, don't give the scumbag a chance. Very rich in knowledge and IQ Online, you will never suffer any loss. 2. Jiang Yan, not much revealed, you will sigh after reading it 3. The writing is solid, the descriptions are detailed and vivid, and it is consistent with the beauty of ancient literature. It's so comfortable and comfortable, yes, I'm at a loss for words. I can't describe it. Living, but it's a very comfortable feeling. I don't think it's okay to invest in shares S

I hope this book can come to life

It's such a pity that another excellent fanfic has been banned.

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It's nice to look at, but it feels a bit uncomfortable to look at it. I don't know if it's my problem. I have the feeling that they treat Hei hope as an object, and basically don't care about Hei hope's feelings. It gave me the feeling that if I were the protagonist, I would just find a way to create a fake stand-in and then hide and live a stable life alone. It's also possible that I'm simply overthinking. [Think]

The author is very nice! ! ! ! Brother, I hope we can update twice a day! ! ! !

Damn it, damn it! There are simply too few. I'm going to burn [angry][angry][angry]

Brother, foster father, I feel so uncomfortable if I don't see you for a day, can you please give me more [crying]

It's okay, but I personally don't like this style of painting. I'll just watch it for fun. Goodbye.

This book looks pretty good now. If you like Shuangxi Tietie, you can give it a try

Not bad, in line with my xp

It looks good, but it's a bit lacking [laughs evilly]

In terms of general theory... It's really good [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's pretty cool, but... Well, the evil Tomato Review will eventually be eliminated.

Nice! Can you please stop updating? (Distressed) I really like this book.

This is really too much. Each chapter is kept at more than 4,000 words, and I like it. Come on, don't stop updating.