变身萝莉修仙，开局长生不死

Awesome, the best article on female immortality I have ever read! Although the heroine is stubborn, she does not follow male porn routines or capitalist routines. She is not a virgin, but she is not selfish either. Although she is cautious, she still has warmth with those close to her and believes in her. Although she is devoted to the Tao, she is not like a piece of wood that only knows how to practice and become colder and worse. She is very motivated. Perhaps what she was thinking was: Even if her qualifications are terrible, as long as she practices quickly enough, finds a few immortality skills, makes a few life-extending pills to cover up, and tries her best to advance before the "deadline", she doesn't have to cut off ties with her friends, right? It's very humane, and I like the protagonist very much [smirking] Great work, author! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Post it! Post it! Post it! And the Loli sword and so on are the best! ! !

Very good, it fully describes the ordinary path of cultivating immortality for low-level monks [Send Heart]. When the protagonist forms the elixir, he can just think about it and rebuild it again like Han Li when he formed the elixir. Anyway, the protagonist has poor talent [Send Heart]

It's quite nice to watch, quite relaxing to watch, and not too boring. For example, the conflict between Su Bai's Gou Dao and Xu Changge's was quite interesting, as well as the gap between the world of martial arts and the world of cultivating immortals. The pace is not very slow, except for the small climax every 50 chapters, which is quite enjoyable to watch. Compared with the fairy tales about going to heaven and earth, where a fight is like destroying the world, this kind of small-level fairy tales is quite good. I hope the author will keep writing. I'm really looking forward to the next one. The relationship between Su Bai and Chang Ge will take its time and don't be too hasty. This kind of light ambiguity still feels quite pricking to me.

The plot is very good, coherent and reasonable. It is very good in Tomato and the plot is also novel. It is not like other novels that all seem to have the same routines and templates. There are still some shortcomings in the character image, mostly in the description of actions and language. The psychology (the inner activities of the protagonist) is very well grasped, and the literary skills are good (unlike some authors who write about the psychological activities of the protagonist in such detail, it is like writing an expository essay, and there is really no desire to read further). But the image of the protagonist is not fleshed out enough and there are too few details. For example, I wrote a little bit about appearance at the beginning, but the rest of it was just brushed off, so I couldn't imagine the appearance of the protagonist when I read it. The author can write about the protagonist's appearance from multiple angles from time to time, such as when the protagonist meets new people and sees the protagonist from another person's perspective. There are also some expressions and very small and difficult-to-notice movements. More of these can be added, because this book is really small. Moreover, I suggest that the perspective does not need to be fixed on the protagonist, but can also be appropriately placed on characters other than the protagonist. You can use other people's perspectives to profile and highlight the protagonist. I don't know if my words are difficult to understand. In fact, what I want most is the details and demeanor of the protagonist. I really hope the author can add more, so that the reading experience will be better and I can feel that the protagonist is a character with flesh and bones. It's really hard to find a good book about Tomato that's good and tastes good. Now that I'm reading this book, it's really good, so I hope it will be better.

After reading it, I felt a little frustrated in the early stage of being a spiritual farmer, but it can be said that my strength has grown rapidly in the later stage, which is very exciting. I would like to ask who is the cp, will the two heroines have a harem, or is it just a simple romance? Will there be a lifespan theory in the end? I personally hope for a he

The first 350 chapters are relatively interesting. The development to growth is the most dynamic stage. Different people from different planes are equivalent to reading several novels at once, but they are integrated into one story with the protagonist's development in this world as the core. It can be said to be a half-full experience. Why do I say it's half full? Because the subsequent plot is like an assembly line with no emotion. One level of realm is followed by another. My evaluation is that it is unnecessary. And you can tell from the title of the book what the author wants to write, but from the overall feeling of the whole book, it is true that it is evil but not courageous, "one hour, two hours, two days, thirsty", this kind of description, it is better not to write it. At the same time, the protagonist's style changes greatly, it is like a little white flower who became rich overnight and turned into a greasy uncle. It is hard to describe in one sentence. It can be seen that the author has either changed people or is suppressed. Comprehensive evaluation: You can read it in the early stage. Recommendation index, two stars.

Overall, it's pretty good. It seems to be a sign of Lily, and it can be treated as no cp, but there are few fighting plots and the descriptions are not detailed enough, lacking thrilling scenes. There are no other problems. I hope that the protagonist will not be left alone without friends to accompany her until the end of her training.

Overall, this book looks pretty good. There is not much poison in the plot, but I feel that the heroine is getting faster and faster in the later stages of her training. Apart from being a little poisonous (acceptable), then there is the essence of all things (it feels a bit like a system gift, I have been living in the book "Invincible" for a long time, but it is also acceptable) I think it's quite rare for a female channel to live forever and cultivate immortality like this. (The longevity stories I searched are basically all about male protagonists, and those about female protagonists are quite rare) I think the plug-in Zhutianding is quite interesting. The protagonist of other immortality novels has five spiritual roots cultivating immortality and stretching his crotch. It was really uncomfortable for me to read it. There are almost 100 pictures, and he is still practicing Qi (I am not referring to all immortality novels, but the basics in some of the immortality novels I read) Xanadu is gifted with a crotch pull, which made me feel a little uncomfortable.) But the plug-in in this novel is quite interesting. You can travel to other worlds. There are basically no longevity novels I have read. This book is quite enjoyable. Although there are cheats, you still have to rely on your own efforts. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope the author can update it more.

I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals and immortality, and I dislike many of the male protagonists who show mercy to them. This is a novel about a heroine who lives forever and cultivates immortality that I have rarely seen (I came here to see the little Lolita). It mainly writes about daily life. Although the introduction says "Tie Tie", there is not much post content, which makes me a little disappointed (it should be that Tomato limits the author's performance). The battle plot basically ends in one or two chapters. I feel that this length is quite good. I think this is a very good novel and worth reading. I hope the author will not cut the novel in half (many novels on my bookshelf have been cut in half). Come on, author! ! [Like][Like][Request for more updates][Request for more updates]

Ciallo~(∠ω< )⌒★This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M 4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

This is the only surviving harem story that I have read. Wannian Loli Laoden is really the most stubborn cultivator I have ever seen. She can't get out of any secret realm. I thought she was going to be a harem after reading the first half. The heroine only focused on cultivation, but when I saw the later, I realized that she had no strength. Once she had the strength, the heroine completely let herself go, and the mirror was so sharp that it flew up!

To be honest, the front part is actually okay for reading, and the middle part is okay for writing. Well, it's very well written, maybe I'm a little selfish. Like the protagonist. It can be shown with absolute combat power [I'm about to cry]

A very exciting novel, from more than 20 chapters to more than 200 chapters.

The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are very well created. In the early stage, they managed to develop secretly, were prepared for danger in times of peace and worked hard, and finally started to fly into the sky. These are all my favorite plots [blowing kisses]. However, the plot behind it is a bit bland and watery, so I deducted one star [eating melon]

The advantage of this book is that it is new and true, and the novelty lies in the narrative method. Other novels usually record things day by day like a diary, but there are also times when thousands of years and tens of thousands of years have passed. However, this book often reads one year later, three years later, or ten years later, which gives people the feeling that this is how cultivating immortality should be... The protagonist is really a man of Gou Dao, not a fake Gou Dao, but a true Gou Dao, and the word "true" stands out.

Very good, the protagonist of the Eternal Life style, and he is from a hundred queens. Although the writing is tactful, it is easy to be blocked. It is good and interesting all day long. It is slow in the early stage and the pace speeds up in the later stage. It lacks a little extra and is a bit unfinished.

I have finished reading it. The novel is very good. In the first half, the protagonist is cautious and has the style of Han Paopao. In the second half, the protagonist rises and the plot is more invincible. However, there are no bloody plots such as men and women pretending to be slapped in the face. The style is also more relaxed.

Post [love], super nice, although I don't post it often, it's very reasonable. I mainly spend my time practicing. Personally, I feel that the protagonist's combat power is a bit too strong. He is invincible at the same level as soon as he breaks through. The main reason is that he is afraid that if he keeps getting stronger, he will be able to fight across a large level as a Nascent Soul. Shouldn't there be a big gap in every small level for a mortal cultivating immortality? I just hope that the combat power will not drop in the future [Like] After reading more than 180 chapters, it was really cool to read it in one go. It's so good.

The author's writing is good (I don't know why the rating is so low and it feels like it doesn't fit this book), but the love line is so slow to push, it's better to push it faster (it feels like you are writing the order even though you are labeling it)

After reading it, please rate it, it looks great! It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful article about turning white and cultivating immortality. After reading books for many years, I have gone from liking the setting of transforming into a loli to now hating it. I would rather read some stories about normal age groups becoming white. Because most of the transformed lolita characters these days have protagonists who are like useless people. They are so weak ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ that they have no strength. Should they be pushed back or pushed back? This book is different. Although the protagonist is a lolita, he is very rational and decisive in facing most situations. He can kill as many people as possible without leaving any trouble. It is enjoyable from beginning to end. It is an invincible novel.

Yes, there are no unpleasant points in the ending. The pace is also very suitable. There is no procrastination and no tiring events one after another. It is very comfortable to watch. It's just that there are still a lot of holes to be filled. What will happen after Dawu's spiritual energy is revived? What will happen if Fenbao Rock is completely filled? Where are the other truths? How is the fairy world going? The demon world promised the emperor to take action three times, but it has only been used once. The empress of the Fu Xiu world has no follow-up, and the world after her ascension should be quite interesting. There are too few plots in the world of monsters and sword cultivators. What about reincarnation? However, although there are still a lot of pitfalls to be filled, the protagonist's original intention has never changed. Live a long and happy life with the people around you. After confirming that he could enlighten the Sanxian, this wish has come true. The protagonist can indeed move forward, but there is no reason to work hard anymore.

It's pretty good. I really like the atmosphere. I don't practice all the time, and the rhythm is not so tight. Then the protagonist's cheating feels pretty awesome. I just don't know who is the one who can keep going with the heroine? After all, it seems that the high-grade spiritual roots are a bit weak now. Could it be that Demonic Saint Son? But Xu Changge has also been with the protagonist for more than 100 years. There shouldn't be a knife, right? Moreover, the protagonist is immortal, and he is also a master of both body and law. Well, learn everything. And three worlds have been unlocked so far.

It's okay, it's quite bland, and the slow pace is normal. I guess this is the family history of a small person in the world of immortality. Also, I don't know if this book has a CP. I feel that it is a bit interesting but too alienated from Xu Changge.

The writing style of this book is very good - this is really valuable. Many novels do not have such detailed descriptions. The people and things in the world of cultivation are described so vividly that it makes me feel like I am immersed in the scene. What is also interesting about this book is the description of the time span, which also makes people feel the sense of vicissitudes of life. All in all, this novel is very addictive and I finished it in two days. Looking forward to more updates in the future [face covering]

The plot is slow-paced and you need to be patient to watch it. The main character is a paranoid man who gets up again and again in the middle and later stages, and then calms down again. All in all, it is very good. Highly recommended.

A good book about transformation and immortality. It may be a little boring in the early stage, but it becomes more and more exciting in the later stage. If you are not a buddy, how can you support me [crying]

It's a plain story about Immortality, no poison, no swords, no twists, it really turns into a hundred harems, no ink marks in fights, no beeps if you can run for seconds, and the situation of being ridiculed by the eighteen generations of ancestors before starting the fight is already far ahead of Tomato. The disadvantage is that some characters are not filled in, such as the empress, but there are few descriptions in the first place, so it doesn't matter. Overall, this is a good dessert novel. I hope the author will continue to improve.

The protagonist's cheating will not be too excessive, and the details are also handled well. It will not be too brainless, especially in the later stages. After the upgrade speed increases, there is a different kind of pleasure in the slowdown, which is very good [laughing]

A very good novel about cultivating immortals. I hope the author will continue to work hard [laughs][laughs][laughs]