Brother Control*****

I'm not surprised at all when this book was banned. I'm very angry right now.

It's the first time I've read a love story that's a bit weird. The author's writing style is a bit like the movie I've seen. I'm excited. Although I haven't watched much, I still want to write a review first. It's a very good book. On Tomato, it's really good and bad, and good and bad. Generally speaking, if the author's words are not broken, it's a very good book. It's a good book. I hope the emotions and plot can have more ups and downs in the later part. The first part is too bland. Although it is to pave the way for the later part, the plot should be a little more ups and downs, so that I have the desire to read it. Now that I can see that the theme and plot are very good and novel, but it is still a bit boring. Come on, author, I hope it won't be unfinished.

，，，95%，，， He will definitely become a god!

Almost finished. It's quite interesting. There are so many female protagonists and I don't know what the author will write next. It was when I saw Lao Deng in a chapter that I was suddenly struck by the knife. The author should write more plots about making sugar, even if the male protagonist is too stupid. I won't comment on it, but the author doesn't mind. Very nice. Anyway that's it! I love Laoden!

So cool! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please finish writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please finish writing! ! !

Tomato is one of the few books that I think has a good look and feel, even though I'm only halfway through it now. It is very good for the author to write this kind of knife story about mutual redemption. It can be seen that the writing style is solid, unlike other formula-like content that is directly described in common sayings and made random jokes. I like Mu Mu and her sister's daily humorous style very much, but the doting chapter was really uncomfortable to read. As I get older, I am not used to seeing knives.

It was the first time that I felt that the first-person perspective could be so beautiful. I cried when I read the final phone call, as if I was really talking to me through the book. If the book were a world, I hope that Sister Furan would be happy in the book. In the end, it would be a happy 520! ——2024.5.20 Sorry, I forgot to control the points. I'll leave it to the remaining brothers.

I boldly guessed that the sister felt guilty because of the emotional loss of the male protagonist in order to save her, so she used perversion as a cover to stimulate the male protagonist to awaken his emotions. Later, when the male protagonist recovered, the sister became cold and let go in order to avoid suspicion. Then the male protagonist found out that he fell in love with his sister, and the roles were reversed to pursue his wife. When I think about it, hehehe~ Wow, An Xi and Er Gou are both very good. Author, didn't you say no swordsmanship? These two must also redeem each other with the male protagonist. I don't understand whether my sister is in love with Su Mu. If she is, it would be better to express it truly. There is no need for him to deepen his relationship with his ex-girlfriend and admirers. If my sister comes to an end seriously, Su Mu will definitely recover faster than other heroines. But if you don't love her, then Su Mu will definitely be in trouble after she regains her relationship.

The characters and plots are all very good. I read in the comments that there are women's clothing (it seems to have been changed, but I haven't seen it, but I want to see it). The design of Bu Ran's characters is perfect, but it feels a little awkward when Bu Ran is too perfect. When Bu Ran lives in school, Mu Mu's reaction is a bit too big, which is not good.

Are there any books of the same type? Feeling not enough

The cold white moon sneaked out to chase the dying sun, but no matter how hard she tried, even if she erased herself from the vast river of stars, she could not touch the light behind him.

Okay, I've finished reading. I'm trying to bring it in. I'm not the protagonist. I'm abandoned and no one wants me. I don't want to trouble everyone. I like a girl. Maybe I just want someone to accompany me. That's it. I hope everyone has someone to accompany them.

It is a great novel. It does have a bit of a yandere attribute, but it is within the normal acceptable range. At least except for the extra chapters, there is no BT behavior such as imprisonment. What to say then? After all, I'm the only one who reads sweet articles, so there's not a lot of sweets here. Even the informal interactions with Su Bulan can actually be regarded as sweets. Then came the all-evil knife part. It can be said that all the female protagonists had knives, and they shed a lot of tears. The description of the knives was also very good, but in fact, I feel that the most touching description should be Su Buran's few times. Damn, I never thought that I would be seen in an online article in my life. Just Su Buran's one-way devotion to the male protagonist... How should I put it? Envy, jealousy, distress, touching, sadness, confusion... Love is a magical thing. To put it bluntly, even if you observe the love between parents, you may be confused: How did the mother fall in love with the father? But this is actually the biggest difference between love and other emotions. After all, the object of family affection cannot determine friendship, and many people may not need it (some people may say that many people do not need love, but in fact, from a biological point of view, the genes of all animals are engraved with two identical necessary behaviors: eating and reproduction. Because humans are civilized, humans need to fall in love with each other before reproduction), just like Su Bulan's emotion for the male protagonist. We will definitely wonder why Su Buran would recommend his beloved male protagonist to other female protagonists, but after reading the book, we will wonder why Su Buran's love for the male protagonist is so deep? How did Su Buran's love for the male protagonist come about? Does the male protagonist have the ability to repay Su Bulan's kindness and endless love? Wait, wait... In fact, it is inevitable to leave this doubt. Love itself is an elusive thing. No matter how detailed an author describes love, there will always be various doubts, even some basic doubts about how love arises. Both parties themselves may not be able to explain a word. But this is actually quite good. It is the illusory and ethereal things that humans pursue. If everything was placed under the reality of broad daylight, then human beings would not have all kinds of doubts, and naturally there would be no civilization. Oh, holy shit, I talked too much. All in all, this is a very good book, and I gave it to him for the first time in the online literary circle. Um? What? The author said to control points? He~tui is a small reviewer, afraid of eating shit. When I was seven in and seven out of Liyue Port, his reviewer was not born yet, so that's all. Goodbye

I don't know what a masterpiece is. I'm afraid that saying it is a masterpiece will make people feel exaggerated, but I would like to call this book a very rare masterpiece. The description of Buran is so perfect. It was so perfect that I still couldn't forget Buran after reading this book. It was so perfect that I felt that if I could travel to another world, I must go to Buran. Everything Buran has done for the protagonist only makes me feel distressed and jealous. I am jealous that Buran has done everything for the protagonist. I feel sorry for Buran's injuries for the protagonist. I feel sorry for Buran who obviously loved Su Mu deeply but had to push him to other women [crying] [crying] But fortunately the ending is good [crying] After reading the whole chapter of what Buran said to the readers, I really burst into tears [crying] [crying] The author said that five points will not be counted, so it can only be changed to four points... It's a pity, but my love for Bu Ran will not change [crying]

Before reading a book, I always read the reviews. I read the good and bad reviews for a long time. I saw the author explain many times in the comment area that this book just wants to express one meaning: there will always be someone who will infinitely tolerate you, love you, help you and accompany you. I can also see that he may be writing about his real-life experiences and then adapting them. Now that I have read one or two chapters, I feel a little stuck. I have also met such a woman, but I really am not worthy of her. It is also my problem that I am not able to be with me all the time. After living for 21 years, I always say that you are the best and kindest person I have ever met. You are so good to me. Her answer is the same every time, saying that you will definitely meet someone better in the future, who is better than me to you. I always say it is impossible and I don't believe that there will be. No, bro, I'm crying. Just read quietly.

It's a good book worth reading. There are all kinds of unexpected stories hidden under the light and funny daily life. It's very interesting to read, and the details are well done. Both the male protagonist Su Mu and the six female protagonists have different personalities, and the various emotional scenes are also very touching and not boring at all. The details of the characters are also very detailed. Sister Buran is playful on the outside and subtle on the inside, Zian is decisive and smart, the An sisters love and hate, Xiaozhu is gentle and obedient, and Sister Mo is emotional and unrestrained. The personality of each female character is reflected in the daily plot. I have to say that the author's writing style is really good, which is also an important plus point for this book. The literary and martial arts are very naughty, the literary and martial arts are touching and thought-provoking, and the martial arts are vivid and vivid, making people linger. Finally, good books should be rewarded.

It's very good. Savor it carefully. It's very good. I hope the ending doesn't come so quickly and allows you to settle in a little more. I'll talk about the rest when it's almost over. I'll definitely make up a long review then. Love you author for bringing us a nice story. This kind of sweet and a little sharp novel really makes me addicted and painful to read. They are miserable and I am miserable too. They are happy and I am happy too [almost crying] The author's writing is pretty good. This is almost the first time I've read this kind of thing on Tomato. But the author seems to have been screwed and the books seem to be gone. I hope the author can come out, otherwise I can only say goodbye to this good work. If it doesn't work, let's change the platform [Love]

It's been a long time since I've read a first-person novel. The advantage of this type of novel is that it has a strong sense of immersion, but the disadvantage is that it takes a lot out of the author's writing power. I have to say, the author has written well so far

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The author's control of some places is just right. The jokes (such as Kun Kun) are just right. If there are too many, they will feel boring, and if there are too few, they will feel boring. The author's writing style is also different. Others stabbed a piece of sugar with a knife, but the author crushed the sugar and the knife together, added a little poison, mixed it evenly with the author's writing style, and fed it to me. I am conflicted about the morbid nature of the protagonist. I like the morbid nature of the protagonist, but I am also a little opposed to the morbid nature of the protagonist. These feelings make me want to stop reading. I want to stop reading, but I also want to finish reading. The author's writing is really good. I haven't seen such an author in a long time. I'm already thinking about what to do after reading it. (Four stars are for controlling points)

The writing of this book is very good, the plot is good, the car is very fast, and it is a bit perverted. It's always a little weird when high school is changed to college. Of course, you can also feel the explosion in the comment section during the explosive chapters. The reason this book is still alive is because of its average rating.

The writing is really good. The first person is very easy to put in. Experience the feeling of being wrapped in the deep love of troubled girls [Note]

My evaluation is that the characters have delicate emotions, there is good foreshadowing, and the various gags are just right. I haven't seen a work that can make my eyes shine in a long time. I really like this work, and I hope I can watch it finish happily. In addition, the author competes highly

Mu Mu Mu Mu Mu Mu By the way, should it be Twilight, Twilight, Twilight, you are right, Qingmu [sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky smile] The narrative is so loving [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It's a pity that there are too few comments and it lacks some flavor. I feel that in Brother Kun's eyes, Ran is still a stupid little fool. When I think that she is just pretending, I feel even more stupid. I asked a few questions in the comment area, I hope someone can answer them [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] That's it, see you later.

It's really fun to watch. The author's problem is that he overuses various modifications, which often seems a bit showy. If a lot of appearance descriptions don't advance the plot, they are actually unnecessary. They will appear very divorced from reality and embarrassing, but it's okay. Come on.

To be honest, the ending is indeed quite satisfactory, but I didn't see the most important thing in the whole book, which belongs to Sister Buran's "The Blooming Sophora Flowers". This is also the last part of the whole book that makes me sad.

It's so good, my family. After reading the extra, I understand that I used to be too shallow and I must finish it. The author is so great and powerful, and the writing is really good. This one is also really sweet. I like it very much. I highly recommend it (love) [love] [admiration]

How can I put it this way? This book is one of the most touching male novels I have ever read. I really like this kind of redemptive book. The characters are also very fleshed out. I like An Xi and Bu Ran the most. [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss]. Highly recommend. However, if the author wants to control the points, he will give it four stars.

A great book, the characters are very three-dimensional, and the article is also full of humor, mixed with darkness and sadness, which is fascinating... So who can tell me when the male protagonist's illness will be cured, which makes me a little hopeful [face covering] Why is it a bit sad to read it? The author has a bad hand, I have to score points, don't do it anymore

All I can say is, show them all to me and put them on top [shy][shy]