Red Mansion: Go to Beijing and Beat up Master Bao

When reading this novel, which is a re-creation of the classic plot of "A Dream of Red Mansions", I have to admit that the author did a pretty good job in telling the early story. The writing is smooth and the plot is fascinating. Especially for those ill-fated characters in the original work, the author has given new life and story lines. This innovative spirit is worthy of appreciation. However, the evaluation and rewriting of Jia Baoyu, the core character, seems a bit unfair and fails to fully capture his complex character and destiny. In addition, the frequent appearance of supernatural forces in the novel adds a touch of mystery to the story, but it also weakens the rigor of the work to a certain extent. If it is positioned as a magical realism novel, these elements are naturally plus points, but if measured by the standards of traditional historical novels, it seems a bit excessive. Despite this, at least until Chapter 138, this book is still a rare masterpiece in this software. Its unique perspective and novel ideas are refreshing. Unfortunately, starting from Chapter 138, the quality of the story dropped significantly. The plot of the protagonist entering the army is handled quite messily, and the development of the plot makes it difficult to continue to invest. This change not only broke the previous narrative rhythm, but also affected the credibility of the entire story. It is hoped that the author will be less involved in military matters, reduce the use of supernatural elements, and pay more attention to the realistic basis of the story in subsequent creations, so as to make the work more complete and convincing. Overall, despite some shortcomings, this second-generation novel still has certain reading value. The author's writing style still needs to be refined, and he hopes to be able to regain his original intention in subsequent chapters and conduct a more objective and in-depth discussion of Jia Baoyu's image. I hope the author can take the readers' opinions into account and make significant improvements to the content after Chapter 138, so that this work can truly shine. (Note: When I was young in junior high school, I opened "Dream of Red Mansions" for the first time, and the twists and turns of the plot once made me intoxicated. Time flies, although the intricate story details have long been blurred in my memory, but the lifelike creation of the characters in the book still impresses me. Each character is like a real life coming out of the pages of the book, and their emotions, conflicts and destiny are intertwined into vivid pictures, as if they can talk to us through time and space. I wholeheartedly recommend this re-created book. It not only revived my fond memories of "Dream of Red Mansions", but also ignited my desire to explore the masterpiece of Master Cao Xueqin in depth again. I believe that everyone who reads this book will be attracted by its unique charm and eager to taste the mellowness of the original work. Finally, I have to praise the greatness of "Dream of Red Mansions" again. It is not only a treasure of Chinese literature, but also a shining pearl in the world's cultural treasure house. Its profound characterization, delicate emotional depiction, and broad social background are all astonishing. Whether you are a literature lover or a first-time reader, reading "Dream of Red Mansions" is a baptism of the soul and an unforgettable journey)

Wonderful! The Red Mansion fanfic is very good. That's what it's like to travel through the crowd. After the safety issue is solved, no one will get used to it, no one will be troubled, and no one will be offended! Who is good to me and who is bad to me have clear grudges. It is in line with the modern thinking of right and wrong. Especially the handling of Jia Zhen and his son, no planning is needed, it is handled smoothly and smoothly. Originally, compared to ancient times, modern people would neither deliberately plan for a beautiful woman nor reject them.

Five stars, thank you to the author, the characters are all very good, just don't mess with the system. I personally like this book very much, and I have no intention of affecting the author's creation. [Salute][Salute][Salute]

I have read many books on the theme of Red Mansions. The characters, language and actions of this book are very consistent with the original work. I feel that the author has read the original work of Red Mansions intensively many times and has a deep understanding of the characters. He can restore daily events well. The author has strong writing skills. It is a rare masterpiece of Red Mansions. Hope to keep up the good work and provide more updates! [Adoration]

One of the few good books in Red Mansion, I like it very much

The first half of the book is well written. The protagonist is relatively shrewd in his appearance. He is cautious about advances and retreats, and he also pays attention to courtesy first and then attack. The initial treatment of Jia Baoyu, the nanny, was quite exciting. The description of the situation where the protagonist gets along with the original characters in Red Mansions is also very good, and the language is very similar to the original Red Mansions. Later, when the protagonist's force value increased and his power became stronger, he let himself go. He became more and more reckless and unbridled, engaging in some dirty plots, such as feeding feces and urine, cutting off the enemy's private parts, and giving them to the emperor... He was more murderous, often killing the whole family, the Yi clan, etc., Soldiers would clear the way and kill people in the street. Wearing a big gold chain and a big gold watch, he never looks at any scene and just says some dirty words. The system also rewards young and Dangerous guys as subordinates. He feels like a nouveau riche, a gangster leader, and a soldier. The author said this is self-destruction, but I personally feel that he is more discouraged. After all, everyone basically does not like arrogant little gangsters. The characters rewarded by the system should be from novels, movies and TV series that the author likes. The characters created by the author in the past are quite good and can be considered plump and three-dimensional, such as Zhou Ying and Ren Ruyi. After the system rewarded more characters, the ones added were all the author's self-promotional characters, such as Brother Crow, which seemed incompatible with the background of the red building. The author's descriptions of the original characters and some of the original characters around the protagonist are basically always online, and the dialogue between the characters is lively and interesting. However, the protagonist often swears in his mouth and heart, is impulsive and irritable, can't make jokes, will retaliate after the slightest joke, threatens others at every turn, can't suffer any losses, and likes to escalate small conflicts into big feuds, and then kill the whole family. In short, the author's writing style in emotional description is very good, and he must have carefully studied the original work of Red Mansions. However, in the middle period, he felt very self-indulgent. The protagonist's image changed from a smart and capable ordinary person who intended to save the tragedy of the original work all the way to a free-wheeling gangster+patriot combination. You can read it and count it as food and fodder.

The wording in the book is very delicate, the writing is fluent, the characters are well-depicted, and the characters are distinct. It has a certain degree of prominence in fan fiction. If the update is faster and longer, I think I can give it five stars [laughing evilly] Well, I feel like four stars are too much. The protagonist travels through time but seems a bit reckless.

It's quite good. I like watching the delicate emotions so I came here to read it. I really like watching the daily interactions with Dai Chai and the others. I hope the author can maintain the big style of writing. Also, the volume is too small. I finished reading it in three days. It's not enough. It's not enough.

This book is not that book, leisurely, smiling tiger, decisive, wolf turns back, romantic, Cao Mengde

It's pretty cool to read the latest chapter. Except for the middle pictures where the author is a little bit young, everything else is very good. The protagonist's system is relatively strong. If you don't abuse the protagonist, you won't be defeated. If you don't accept it, just do it (don't be too picky, not many novels can withstand such subtle twists. Generally speaking, it's not a big problem. It just makes you want to read on). Don't care about the young age of the protagonist (original version of Red Mansion) The novel is not very old). Different from other Red Mansions, the author has changed the personalities of some characters, such as Jia Mu. In this story, Jia Mu is not always blindly biased towards Jia Baoyu. In the later period, the main character gradually became the main character (the protagonist can save the Jia family). The identity of the protagonist is also related to the royal family. It is not sure whether it is the child of the former prince or the emperor.

It's pretty good, especially the writing. Reading this novel feels like reading the real Red Mansions, and it comes to mind involuntarily. The author also describes each person's character very well. I feel that he has really worked hard. I hope the author can work hard and continue writing. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

A very good novel. The author has a certain understanding of Red Mansions. The main body of this book is the human relations and sophistication in Jia's family. It is relatively delicate, so the pace is relatively slow. Some people may feel that the ink is stained and it is aimed at a niche readership. However, it is indeed a very good Red Mansions novel. It must be supported with 5 stars.

I have read some Red Mansions fan fiction, and this one is indeed a fine product. The author is thoughtful in writing, and the setting is commendable even though it is not perfect. To be honest, it's just a bit short, but the author has to work hard to understand this. I hope the author can persevere, but don't bother yourself too much. After all, who will write the book if you fail? Come on [like][like][like]

It is the most interesting Red Mansion fanfic I have ever read. Although Jia Jun does not fit the image of the male protagonist in my mind, I like him very much now. Another thing that I think is a bit problematic is that Jia Jun is too partial to Daiyu and does not care about Baochai's feelings, but overall it is not a big problem. I think the biggest problem is that you, the author, are so short!!!

It is indeed a very good book. After reading about fifty chapters, I can feel that the author has read The Red Mansion thoroughly. The character descriptions are consistent with the original work, and the language is also very well polished. 👍 Emm Looking back, the garden drama is indeed well written, but it is a bit too exaggerated when it comes to other things later.

I have read no less than ten books on Red Mansion. This one is as good as Crossing Jia Huan's Imperial Examination and Entering the House. That one is better in details. This one is better in imagination and breaking the situation. The thinking is clear and strange. It is the first one for the time being. The most important thing is that it is refreshing. It is as wise as a fool. It can be punched. It is much better than those who pretend to create perfect characters and mother-in-law.

It's cool, it's really cool! It makes my blood boil! Author, NBplus

Compared with other Red Mansions novels (not very modern vernacular and a bit hard to pronounce), there are less words about noble things and more descriptions of character portrayals. It's a mixed bag of good and bad. It lacks embellishments of things and uses system rewards to assist. It always makes people feel that the prosperity of Jia's mansion is like a castle in the sky. Therefore, in the book, there are frequent intrigues among the parents, but the difference between the superior and inferior in the prince's palace is rare. The author always only touches on it. It is a pity. But it is understandable that it is written like this in order to set off the character of the protagonist. Otherwise, the character cannot be quickly highlighted in the feudal ethics and the reader can read it smoothly. Otherwise, what will the audience do if they don't follow it? I can only say that it is fortunate that the publication of Dream of Red Mansions has benefited from the publication. Unlike the author who has to consider the performance every day, I am afraid that the readers will not be able to read the lengthy and detailed introduction of the items. Fortunately, the author's writing style is delicate, and there are always a few sentences of deep meaning hidden between the lines. The relationship between the three protagonists, Dai Yu and Baochai, is well handled. I think this is the author's preference. He spared no effort in writing for Chai Dai. It's just a pity that the portrayal of others is a little bit worse. If Jia Mu and Feng Lazi were portrayed more delicately, it would be more perfect. These two people are the foundation of the entire building of the Red Mansion. I always feel that with the author's writing style, Jia Mu's attitude change can be more profound. Wang Xifeng's change of position is forced to act by the protagonist with only a few strokes. Mrs. Wang hates the main character's motive and doesn't spend much ink. She can only push the villain to cause trouble by spoofing Baoyu. It can be regarded as Baoyu's slight flaw in the whole book (Baoyu's flaw here is really just an adjective). The chapters I have seen so far can only be regarded as group portraits of the protagonists, Chai and Dai. Others have not yet escaped the aura of the protagonist's behavior. It is right to focus on the Jia family and not outside the palace. The system is too powerful. The sense of separation between the brainless harvesting outside the mansion and the intrigues inside the mansion is indeed a bit big. Although the outside of the mansion is absurd, there is indeed some excitement inside the mansion. Overall, it is indeed a Red Mansion fanfic worth reading (I have read Chapter 170 so far, I can't tell if there may be other additions in the future) Not to mention anything else, this sea cucumber elixir alone really has the flavor of the Red Mansion full of absurdities. There are all kinds of absurd people and all kinds of absurd things outside the house. But when you think about it carefully, only the protagonist is the most normal. It is really strange and strange.

The writing is quite good, but the strange killers sent by the system are very interesting.

This is a pretty good article among the Red Mansions fanfics that I have read. Compared with the Wind Blowing Cool Outside or The Wind and the Sky, it loses because of the ridiculously slow update time. The plot of the Red Mansions is not interesting after reading too much of it, but the character creation is very in line with my wishes. I can't say it is perfect, but for my appetite, don't be a eunuch. Thank you.

The best Red Mansion fanfic I've seen so far

Very good 👍👍, very funny, especially the elixir written about it was so funny, it made me laugh out loud most of the night! ! ! (ಡωಡ)Hiahiahiahiahiahia, update quickly, otherwise the elixir will be crushed for you

It's a very good Red Mansion fanfic. Although it has flaws, I like this flaw. The author's writing style is top-notch, the characterization is delicate and reasonable, and the plot is very enjoyable. In short, it's good to read. I love reading it. I recommend it.

I really can, the writing is very interesting, but is the protagonist a little too "arrogant" in the early stage, and is there a lack of some small transitions? I really want to ask the author how to deal with the situation here? How can I write something that can be handled properly and naturally?

This is my first time reading The Book of Red Mansions. I have never seen the original TV series. The author's writing is really good. I originally wanted to read about killing enemies on the battlefield and targeting people in court. After all, I have never read such ancient romance novels, but this one really interested me. It is very well written.

This is indeed a rare Red Mansion fan novel. Both the plot and the characters are very good. It can be called a masterpiece among Red Mansion fans! Of course, I also hope that the author will continue to work hard, and I hope there will be more!

It's well written. It's a very good time-travel novel about Red Mansions. It's written as a Three Kingdoms novel and a martial arts novel. It has nothing to do with the girls in Red Mansions. You traveled across time to protect the girls. Why would you not want such a good wife to wear it? . This novel is well written. You need to be a hero, you need to have wealth, and the girl from the Red Mansion loves her sincerely.

But it's very funny. Although the handling of Jia's family is rough, it's very enjoyable. It's a rare masterpiece. There's also a funny Red Mansions article about Jia Huan which is also very interesting.

This book is indeed very comfortable to read. If you are cheating, you can enjoy life. Generally speaking, to be honest, it is already written by Long Aotian. In the early stage of the classic I am the heir of the prince, I didn't say it and was kicked off the shelf.

Very good, the writing and plot are very good. No drag on the ink, crisp and clean. The characters' personalities are also consistent with the original work. Like one