Pacific Rim, I Pilot a Mecha Solo

This is my first time writing a book. I hope you guys can correct me if I have any questions. Thank you readers.

It looks pretty good so far. I hope the author can work hard and improve the code, otherwise my legs will be broken [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

The daily control is quite good, but for the details of the battle, my suggestion is to write in more detail. The battle of the first monster ended a bit quickly, and then quickly transitioned to daily life. I think this is not very good for fans of Pacific Rim material. More attention needs to be paid to the fighting part. I hope the author can write better [Please update]

The crown will make the person who wears it taller than others and is a symbol of status. But the real meaning of the crown is: when disaster falls from the sky, I will resist everything for you and always let you see only golden hope.

It's really good to watch. Basically no one has written about the Pacific Rim series. I've wanted to read this type of book for a long time, and then I found this book.

I hope it will be a good book, and I hope the author will pay attention to my suggestions. Come on, author, there will be ratings soon, just don't stop updating.

It's okay. The author can look at another fic, The Great Wall Watch, for some inspiration. It can be said to be the pinnacle of Pacific Rim fics. Come on, author╮(￣▽￣)╭

To be honest, this book will not drop a rating of 9. Among Pacific Rim fanfics and mecha novels, the writing is definitely a great one. However, the chapters are a bit short and the author is not strong enough. I don't know if it is not good enough.

It's a very nice book. It's one of the better books in Pacific Rim fan fiction so far. It has no system and no fantasy. It's just a science fiction movie fan fiction. It's close to its own setting and has a strong sense of pig's feet. It's very immersive. I hope the author can write more, [smile] [smile]

I hope this book can be longer, preferably a million words. I want to see the counterattack later. Come on, if there is a break, check the water meter to find out.

Some details are a bit problematic, especially the description of the "joystick" and "control panel" used by the pilot when driving the mecha. There are no such things in Ring Taiping. The meaning of neuron connection is to synchronize the actions of the driver and the mecha. Therefore, the actions of the driver will be directly projected on the mecha. There is no such thing as a "joystick" at all. The "control panel" can be barely understood. After all, the use of weapons in the movie requires a panel for operation. Even the plasma cannon in the movie is directly opened in seconds without using a panel. I hope the author can make corrections in his subsequent creation. I gave him a five-star praise. Cheers, author.

Five [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] How many more star reviews are there?

Of all the Pacific Rims out there, yours is the only one I'm very interested in.

What does the Polaris Mecha look like?

Not bad, not bad, but there is a very big problem, that is, there is not enough to read. I just speed-read a book in one afternoon. Another problem is that there are a bit few mechas at this stage. Now there are basically only one or two in each country, even the strongest ones. How about adding a few more?

It's good. I've already finished reading those few good books on Tomato. New books either contain formulas or running accounts, nothing interesting about them. This book is quite good. The content seems to have a high-level feel and is like a record of important events. And the protagonist is not the kind of cool novel where the protagonist is directly invincible. All in all, the writing is very good. Come on, the author, code quickly and don't be a eunuch.

Regarding the diversification of monsters, even crab-like carapace is difficult to break through defense now. What if there is a turtle-like carapace or a monster that focuses on defense and cannot even break through defense? What should I do? Moreover, the evolution of monsters is much greater than the update of mechas. If monsters break out in many places at the same time, it will be impossible to play.

It looks good, but the logic is a bit wrong with the movie version.

The plot is compact and the content is exciting. Both old fans and newcomers can watch it. The characters are perfectly created and the language and emotions are richly expressed, which earned the author praise. Hope the author can work hard!

Dear author, I have a question I would like to ask. Isn't mecha just for melee combat? If artillery shells are so useful, why aren't they mounted on planes or cars? The same mobility is still more cost-effective. You can even build a small mecha like a spider and carry an electromagnetic gun on its back? Relatively speaking, the mecha is too bulky for just shooting. Why don't you think that the heads of state are not fools? With the same effect at one ten thousandth of the price, it should be a good choice, right?

After seeing Chapter 73, I skipped over to Chapters 124 to 129. This is a human epic. The first volume is relatively relaxed. From the second volume onwards, it is about the destruction of mechas and the sacrifice of pilots. One after another human heroes sacrifice and fight, and there is a sense of tragedy. At the end, the protagonist's nerves and spine are injured and he is unable to pilot the mecha. After that, he is gone. Generally speaking, there is nothing bad about it, but starting from the second volume, small swords followed big swords, and one mouthful after another, but the writing is good, the characters are good, and the plot is good. The only shortcoming is that the book is in a discontinuous state and has no ending. The destined grand battle at the end is not presented, and the book does not draw a satisfactory conclusion.

This is the first mecha novel I've read. It's very interesting.

Can you give me more, don't force me to kneel down and beg you [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Super beautiful, highly recommended

There is an island in Sichuan and Chongqing: Genlaozi Guidao There is a mountain on the island Laozi Shudao Mountain There is a temple on the mountain, Genniyil Temple There is a potted orchid in the temple. Parisian orchid. There is a sharp point on the orchid, the sharp point of Genniyi. There is a dragon on the top of the spire. Nishi explodes and splits the dragon. Dragon Breathing Tornado Neon Magic Cloak

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but some of the swordsmen don't suit my taste and I can't stand it anymore. I hope the author can write it better. It would be better if there is a system or a golden finger.

It's very interesting, but the updates are a little slow. It's not enough to read. It's the type I like. Although I haven't seen the ending, I hope the author won't write out the main characters and leave a happy ending. I look forward to the completion of this novel and its sequel.

As an old book reader with 5,000 readings, it's a very good book, keep up the good work! [Note][Note][Note]

Super good [Like] The battle process is detailed and vivid, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The author is also very active, and the communication environment in the book is great [Like][Please update][Please update]

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