Traveling Through the Heavens

This is my first time writing a novel, so I'm going to give myself a pep talk and hope you can give me more valuable advice.

Listening to you speak, a sense of intellectual superiority arises spontaneously. Others smile with peach blossoms in their faces, but you smile hahahaha. Is your IQ stuck at the level of prenatal education? When you feel ugly and poor, don't be sad, at least your judgment is correct. What kind of breed are you and why are you so fierce! People like you can't survive more than two episodes of a TV series. Look in the mirror more often and you will understand why many things happen. If you ignore me, then I will become a dog. You look like material for reading! Although you look ugly, you think beautiful! If a person replies to you instantly, it can only mean that the person is playing with his mobile phone.

The writing is relatively fluent, except for the punctuation marks that I use randomly. I have finished the first novel, but it was taken down. It has more than 200,000 words! Has been removed from the shelves. Anyway, your writing is pretty good! At least it's better than mine, so I give it a five-star rating.

This is the first time I've read a novel that made me want to keep reading. It's not bad.

Although I have only written a little bit of content, I am deeply relieved to see that the supporting characters in Heaven Sword and Dragon Sword can have a good ending. I don't think some time-travelers are very decent protagonists, but it is still nice to occasionally read novels about villains and supporting characters! Besides, villains live longer than decent ones, hahahahaha

The author 666 has done a good job revamping the book, and the writing is pretty good. I will try to write more in the next book. The writing is good and smooth. It doesn't mock the protagonist. It's comfortable to listen to. The male protagonist is also a scumbag. 666 [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post]

It's the first trial and it's pretty impressive for everyone to stick with it until the end! Come on! I hope that my next work will have more interactions with readers. The work should minimize flaws, and the plot arrangement should not be clichéd, with ups and downs, but should have more unexpected, reasonable, fascinating, and soul-stirring scenes... I give you four stars of encouragement and hope to keep up the good work!

Newcomer? Five star encouragement

Encouragement, that's good.

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This is a very good book, written about everyday things (I just like to read everyday things), but it's a pity that there is no threesome [take a closer look]

What is the name of the second book?