Does the Villain Have a White Moonlight Too? It Definitely Isn't Me

The second article, Yang Ling'er, is a bit like the movie The Killer is Not Cold. The characters are realistic. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a peerless online article [smile][smile]

It's a good article, and there's nothing poisonous about it. The first one, "Deng Quan," can easily dissuade new readers. "Deng Quan" was a married man, and he was raised as a villain by pig's feet. After becoming a villain, he died in the end. Maybe it's because I wanted to see the development of a female boss. There's nothing poisonous about this article, but it's more interesting to read. It was boring and not interesting, but fortunately I read the introduction and continued reading, and the second chapter started with the development of a female boss. From now on, this article is quite good overall. As a male reader, I got it right. I hope the author will write more like this in the future. Suggestion: For new readers in the future, I suggest that the first chapter should be read in general as a transitional chapter (this may hurt the author a lot, so I apologize in advance and hope that the author will not blame it), and the second chapter is about developing the real boss. Okay, so much has been said, so how dare you, the author, add so little! ! !

It's a good book, but it's a bit of a knife. The author's writing style is more delicate. I'm looking forward to the follow-up story of the coming of the world [Love]

It's good-looking, really good-looking. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and has brains. He knows how to create a good boss. The male protagonist can kill people, but he also shows kindness that makes people hate him. I wish everyone a good villain portrayal to a great level. This skill is really good-looking!

It is a development system that I have never seen before. The villain is not the kind of paper person who is summarized by being shadowy and paranoid, killing people without blinking an eye, but a living individual. It was only when he needed help most in life that no one came to help him, so he took a different path by chance.

It's very interesting to watch, but not many people have watched it. I want to see the villains enter the world of Monsoon in the introduction, so come on.

It is a rare masterpiece. The author's writing style is very good, and the characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood. (The words in the first article are a bit sloppy, but the second article is very good.) The text has a strong sense of picture. You can tell what kind of person he/she is with only a few sentences of description of the character's personality.

The author, you kid, is good at issuing knives. Kong is so cute, oooooooooooooooo. And sister Ling'er, the author, you have such a cruel heart~ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sister sister sister sister sister being being going on.

Good, good, relatively real protagonist ✅ Emotional fluctuations and other things consistent with a three-dimensional person (for me, this is the case), it feels like a real person, unlike some books where the protagonist is perfect and not like a real person, just a "god" that makes me feel awesome. The story is also good. I feel like it is writing about the dark side of human nature. Cheers, author [blowing kiss] Although, I personally feel that the second protagonist of the dungeon died a little too quickly (?) It doesn't mean that he died early, but I just feel that there should be more description and foreshadowing when the protagonist dies, so that when the protagonist died, Yang Revenge basically didn't give me any feelings, but I was very sad when they both died. Then the daily chapters are a bit too long () In fact, it's better to write this kind of article with a faster pace. Anyway, I mostly focus on the protagonist dying and then doing whatever the villain does. I was quite comfortable with the first copy, but the second copy was too long and made me want to skip. But I personally don't have this habit, so I didn't. I was blinded when I saw that the protagonist's death only lasted a few chapters [covers face]. I thought there would be at least ten chapters to start preparing for death or something, but it turned out that more than seventy chapters were basically daily life, and now there are dozens of chapters in the third copy. Let's wait and see.

It's so shameless. Kind people will be treated kindly. Ji Feng and Yang Ling'er also have a good ending. Yang Ling'er's chapter is the most interesting chapter. It would be better if it could be written more or integrated with more plots. I haven't seen enough. It's a pity that there were several more worlds that were supposed to be written but were never written. I hope that the story of Monsoon can continue. 2025.02.25, 09:02, Goodbye, Ji Feng, Yang Linger, Shan Wuhao, eleven. [Top post][top post][top post]