The Villain Also Has Bai Yueguang? It's Really Not Me

The second article, Yang Ling'er, is a bit like the movie The Killer is Not Cold. The characters are realistic. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a peerless online article [smile][smile]

It's a good article, and there's nothing poisonous about it. The first one, "Deng Quan," can easily dissuade new readers. "Deng Quan" was a married man, and he was raised as a villain by pig's feet. After becoming a villain, he died in the end. Maybe it's because I wanted to see the development of a female boss. There's nothing poisonous about this article, but it's more interesting to read. It was boring and not interesting, but fortunately I read the introduction and continued reading, and the second chapter started with the development of a female boss. From now on, this article is quite good overall. As a male reader, I got it right. I hope the author will write more like this in the future. Suggestion: For new readers in the future, I suggest that the first chapter should be read in general as a transitional chapter (this may hurt the author a lot, so I apologize in advance and hope that the author will not blame it), and the second chapter is about developing the real boss. Okay, so much has been said, so how dare you, the author, add so little! ! !

It's a good book, but it's a bit of a knife. The author's writing style is more delicate. I'm looking forward to the follow-up story of the coming of the world [Love]

It's good-looking, really good-looking. The male protagonist is decisive in killing and has brains. He knows how to create a good boss. The male protagonist can kill people, but he also shows kindness that makes people hate him. I wish everyone a good villain portrayal to a great level. This skill is really good-looking!

It is a development system that I have never seen before. The villain is not the kind of paper person who is summarized by being shadowy and paranoid, killing people without blinking an eye, but a living individual. It was only when he needed help most in life that no one came to help him, so he took a different path by chance.

It's very interesting to watch, but not many people have watched it. I want to see the villains enter the world of Monsoon in the introduction, so come on.

It is a rare masterpiece. The author's writing style is very good, and the characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood. (The words in the first article are a bit sloppy, but the second article is very good.) The text has a strong sense of picture. You can tell what kind of person he/she is with only a few sentences of description of the character's personality.

The author, you kid, is good at issuing knives. Kong is so cute, oooooooooooooooo. And sister Ling'er, the author, you have such a cruel heart~ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sister sister sister sister sister being being going on.

Good, good, relatively real protagonist ✅ Emotional fluctuations and other things consistent with a three-dimensional person (for me, this is the case), it feels like a real person, unlike some books where the protagonist is perfect and not like a real person, just a "god" that makes me feel awesome. The story is also good. I feel like it is writing about the dark side of human nature. Cheers, author [blowing kiss] Although, I personally feel that the second protagonist of the dungeon died a little too quickly (?) It doesn't mean that he died early, but I just feel that there should be more description and foreshadowing when the protagonist dies, so that when the protagonist died, Yang Revenge basically didn't give me any feelings, but I was very sad when they both died. Then the daily chapters are a bit too long () In fact, it's better to write this kind of article with a faster pace. Anyway, I mostly focus on the protagonist dying and then doing whatever the villain does. I was quite comfortable with the first copy, but the second copy was too long and made me want to skip. But I personally don't have this habit, so I didn't. I was blinded when I saw that the protagonist's death only lasted a few chapters [covers face]. I thought there would be at least ten chapters to start preparing for death or something, but it turned out that more than seventy chapters were basically daily life, and now there are dozens of chapters in the third copy. Let's wait and see.

It's so shameless. Kind people will be treated kindly. Ji Feng and Yang Ling'er also have a good ending. Yang Ling'er's chapter is the most interesting chapter. It would be better if it could be written more or integrated with more plots. I haven't seen enough. It's a pity that there were several more worlds that were supposed to be written but were never written. I hope that the story of Monsoon can continue. 2025.02.25, 09:02, Goodbye, Ji Feng, Yang Linger, Shan Wuhao, eleven. [Top post][top post][top post]

It seems to have increased from 8.0 To 9.2. It is a good book. The second story is the most vivid so far. I just don't know if the protagonist will meet again with the villain he cultivated in the world he traveled to.

I tried poison, it was too sweet This is a semi-cool article. The previous part has been daily life. Believe me, it's true Especially the second simulation was particularly sweet. The fat guy in this simulation was super cool 😎 Hahahahahaha Especially sweet hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha At this point, I can only use other gods against the author [face covering] [OK]

There are many people on the Internet joking about books about raising villains. This book is really written, and this good subject is not wasted. I love it [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's a good book and may be to your liking. I am disgusted with all the actions and actions of the protagonist. The main character has a good personality. Everyone's perception is different. The book may be a bit clumsy. But as long as it is blocked, it can be cleared. Although it is impossible to cater to everyone, you cannot ask everyone to like this book. As long as people who read it like it.

I read three volumes and read three volumes. Each volume was like driving a diamond, ruthlessly crushing the barriers I used to hide my cognition, emotions, and humanity, depicting the helplessness, pain and sadness of an ant facing a giant elephant, igniting the long-suppressed anger in my heart in a desperate situation, causing magma to gush out from my chest. The exposed determination and madness are reflected in the hearts of the people, and like a trickle, they evoke the complex, sacred and primitive emotions of human beings. The family emotions hidden by money and utilitarianism emerge, and the amazing and true reproduction shows that we are naturally ordinary, with a hint of stubbornness, and still holding the fetters, with the true meaning of love, human nature! ! !

It's so good-looking, it made me cry. The main character has a single emotional line. I like this so much, and the brother was really moved by it. He was able to face death calmly even though he couldn't accomplish things on his own. I think the Cultivation to Immortality chapter could have been written more perfectly and less regretfully if it followed other novels, but the cruelty of Cultivation to Immortality cannot be described at all, and being too perfect is boring. I think the little girl with leukemia is a foreshadowing, because the death of the protagonist's brother, Fatty, may be to make the little girl not alone. I think Eleven is to prove that if you want to be free, you need to abandon many things, but true freedom makes people have no purpose. So feelings are both bondage and freedom. I understand what the author means.

Each article is worth savoring carefully. The ending of Yang Ling'er's article, or its continuation, is very warm and touching. Personally, it is a perfect unfolding ellipsis. Haowu is looking forward to seeing his senior brother again, and is also wondering how Eleven will view this former "shepherd". There will definitely be collisions caused by the integration of multiple replica worlds. So will the first collision occur between Yang Ling'er who relies on Ji Feng, Haowu who admires his senior brother, and Eleven who has an unclear stance?

Personal rating 9.5 The first two sections of the story are the growth and story of the protagonist. Very nice. It would be best if Linger is the heroine. Then you really love it! It may be boring at first, but each story slowly gets better and better. The emotional story is great! ! ! Possibility, the book is slow to gain popularity, but it will definitely become a hit! I know you will read the long review! So I suggest you read the first chapter before commenting. I have read a little more than 3 chapters now, and I think 2 chapters are best! Take your time and watch [laughing evilly]

I'll give it 5 stars first. After reading 2 story lines, this book is considered above average on Tomato. The author's writing style is great, but the plot and imagination are a bit average. Also, the plot feels a bit fast, or the description of the characters in each story is not delicate enough. , Especially the second story line, the death of the fat man was a bit too fast. I felt that the world view was a bit abrupt, and the plot was also a bit too fast and abrupt. I hope the author will work harder. Generally speaking, it is still good to watch. The second story line is indeed well written, and the writing style is also good. It is very touching.

It's great, four dungeons, Wrath of the Common Man, Effort and Talent, Redemption, Freedom, and finally merging with the main world. The characters are very well drawn. The dungeon of the second junior brother and the younger junior sister is very exciting [like]

I re-read the introduction and found that there is no "no cp" label, which is strange... Anyway, the book is good, I love the heroine very much, and the two of them have a great atmosphere, although I personally prefer no cp... All in all, it feels ok, there are no big surprises, you can read it. It's a pity that several worlds haven't been written about. I'm quite curious. I feel like the ending is a bit unclear.

Top-notch, I read it in one day and one night. Fatty Qi and Kong Xuan really wrote it so well. It's a pity that I didn't see Ling'er win the monsoon in the end. It's a pity that the story of D11 and the mother's body is so vivid that it makes people full of daydreams. My favorite is the second junior brother and the younger junior sister in Xiu Xian. The last sentence of senior brother "The person you like most will win over innocence" really made my eyes water. It's so cool, it's great. The shaping of the short story is really good, but when I think about it, it's still not interesting. It's not perfect, but I think I can give it nine points. (If you deeply shape the final villain, describe other worlds, and strengthen the connection between these copies, the million-word text will be a wonderful fusion of the final melee of the efforts of the 11th life. The fusion of the nine worlds will have the wonderful future of their descendants as the ending). This is definitely the most comfortable fast-travel and villain-type novel I have ever read. The text is really smooth to read, without any novice's pretensions, a lot of explanations, the artificiality of expressing sorrow, and the piling of various words that are annoying to read. Sometimes it is just two simple monologues, which makes the readers excited. It is recommended for villains.

The author's psychological description of the character is indeed very vivid, and there is a lot of text. Even though I only read The Second World without a female protagonist (little girls and sisters are absolutely taboo), I feel very good about watching The Second World. The male protagonist redeems others while also redeeming himself. Although this book is not exciting enough, the protagonist is not strong or even has a strong character, but the author does write well and can make me read it as a reader without a female protagonist.

It's very interesting. I didn't feel it at first. The first world was okay, but a little less interesting. But in the second world, the writing is very good. All kinds of daily behaviors, expressions and language are described in detail and in place. It hurts a lot when being stabbed with a knife. The author uses all his tricks on the readers. The world behind is not bad either. Although there are some bugs and flaws, they don't have any impact if you don't go into details. Overall, it's pretty good. At the end of the day, it's the knife first and then the candy. The final ending is suspenseful and open-ended.

It's really good to watch. I'm really looking forward to the plot after the world merges. The Yang Ling'er chapter writes down the background of the protagonist and the redemption of the bond between them. The story world 1 feels a bit loopy and a bit stiff, just think of it as the protagonist trying out the system for the first time. In plot world 2, the plot entry is also a bit stiff. For example, the arrangement of the protagonist's identity in each world was not explained clearly in the previous world, but the plot was indeed very good. Maybe it's because of different life experiences. The part where Ji Feng deliberately distanced himself from Yang Ling'er was a bit unsympathetic. Story World 3: It's not finished yet, just wait until it's finished and then watch it [Thoughts] Summary: It is worth watching, but in my humble opinion, it is more suitable to keep it for a while, unless the author updates it five times a day [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Overall, the story is very interesting, and the world view is very novel, but... The ending is too hasty... Many things I want to see are not written, especially Yang Ling'er's daily life, the plot of Eleven's arrival in the world, and the first few reincarnations of those worlds. I really want to see it... But it's a pity that I haven't written it. But I still give it five stars. It's really beautiful. I hope I can finish it all next time. (The extra episode really feels a bit worse)

After reading half of it, I felt that the author is a very personal person. The content is dark, but more realistic, and gives people a strong sense of substitution. Everyone has thought about changing reality, changing some things about others or themselves, but the results are not as expected. Impermanence, the laws of the world and the rules of society will make you completely lose in some things, but please remember that there are still people in the world that you care about and who care about you. Even if people have joys and sorrows, and the moon waxes and wanes, please don't make them and yourself sad.

There is one shortcoming. In addition to some text details, the plot is also a little rushed in some places. Generally speaking, it is one of the better books I have read in the past two years. It would be better if the details are polished a little better. The main reason is that the moment when the character's mentality changes is a bit rushed. Chapters one and two are a little bit, but the problem is not big and it is worth recommending [Love]

It can be judged to be a good book. After reading two volumes, the plot has nothing new, but the author's excellent writing skills are enough to make people indulge in it. The score should be above 9.3 There may be some knives, but that's okay. Pay attention to mine clearance.

It is a unique unit drama-style novel. When I read this book, I suddenly went back to the days when I first read The Floating Life and The Book of Demons in high school. The plot is compact and the characters are vivid. Both the thinking about the plot and the narration of the tasks are very skillful. In addition, there are many things that are eye-catching in the content. On a ten-point scale, I would have given it a 7 out of 15 years ago, and an 8.5 Out of 15 to 2018. But now, especially on Tomato, I think this novel is worth a 9.5, Especially since the author is a newcomer, which makes me very experienced! Come on! I hope the author's next work will be better.