Heaven-Defying Talent: The Loli Ancestor Begs Me to Improve

Youdian Yongsi can be imprisoned but not imprisoned

After flipping through the pages for a long time, I finally came across a decent book. From the perspective of online novels, it is still acceptable as a recreational read. But the author did not grasp the protagonist's psychology. As a time-traveler, I started out without a system, lived mediocrely until middle age, and my vigor has been worn away. It is not an exaggeration to say that he is a loser. If the author has read Dragon Clan, he will find that this is not the same virtue as Lu Ming. If you ask him to soar into the sky, it is absolutely impossible for him to change his humble heart in the past. Maybe once you find out that you have a system and talent, it really fails. Why are you still arguing with the little girl? Or even teach a lesson? If you think about it, from his point of view, she is also a disciple of the ancestor. Although her talent is not evil enough, she is still equal to or even better than the protagonist. After all, she is only six years old from the protagonist's point of view, and the protagonist is already middle-aged. The author still couldn't control his ambitions and ambitions, and imprinted his own shadow on the protagonist. Or maybe he wanted to portray himself as a talented, intelligent and invincible person, so he portrayed a protagonist who was arrogant, confident and confident even though he had been doing nothing for more than ten years. I hope the author will not ask about the past and move forward. I have only read a dozen chapters. I will review it after reading it. Please correct me if I find anything wrong.

Okay, okay, why do you think so? Please update your mouth quickly [smile][smile][smile]

It's so beautiful. Can the author transform into a tentacle monster? 👍

The plot and story are pretty good, with some minor flaws, but since the length is short and there are only a few of them, the biggest problem is that the ending is unfinished, otherwise the story would be a pretty good read.

When will the author share those movements? I really want to watch them and gain insights [smile] The author continues to write according to his own ideas. Don't let some people influence your thoughts. I support you! Come on! 💕

Well, it's this novel anyway, ah, no, this car... You can read the novel in this car

You can read it if you can.

I haven't seen much, so I'll give it five stars.

It was good, but it ended suddenly