It Is Dawn and Salvation

Just a personal suggestion. I like the storyline, but the writing is really mediocre. For example, the memories of Shao Yechuan's high school appeared, and the reunion chapter said that they met abroad, which was very conflicting, and the ending was too clumsy. Looking forward to the author's next better work

It's okay, but you finished it too quickly. Keep up the good work.

I skipped reading the ending, and it was very sloppy. The story is a good one, but it just feels, how should I put it, not very smooth. Alas, I don't know what I'm talking about.