The Start Becomes Bobo, What Should I Do?

The author's writing is quite good, but I have some personal opinions. I feel that the descriptions in some places are too wordy, a bit cumbersome, and not detailed enough. Many introductions are not necessary so much. Anyone who reads fan fiction will basically understand it, so the number of words is a bit short. The descriptions of some scenes and characters do not need to be very detailed. They can be rough. Important characters can be detailed, but they cannot declare the victory. A little suggestion, I hope the author can see it. I have no other meaning. The author writes very well and the subject matter is very novel. Keep up the good work.

That kind of beautiful girl makes me want to vomit. I finally met a normal one [vomit][vomit]

About this book: I think this Pokémon-type novel has a novel theme and an interesting plot. Overall, it's good. It's also unique among so many Tomato fanfics. However, I think the author's writing style needs to be improved. In some places, the sentences feel incoherent and not beautiful enough. It gives people the feeling of a novice, and it's too updated! Slow! Got it! Unless the author's writing is super good, this kind of slow-updating book will basically be unsatisfactory. This book is already a bit slow. I think many of the ratings are average. Anyway, cheers up! I believe you will get better and better as you write, and I look forward to the subsequent plot [manual comparison] ovo (the above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it) ——The first sight of the autumnal equinox Is this book going to be bad? QAQ, please give it a try. Our writing is not good and we can't update it enough. If it's really not good, you can read more good words and sentences to improve your writing. The subject matter is really novel, but the writing style still needs polishing...

Not bad, very good-looking Add 6 points to other pets

It's good-looking. This is one of the few protagonists whose trainer is not a woman. I feel that the protagonist's heart is more realistic.

Personally, I think it's very interesting [like]. The author doesn't need to care about other people's bad words. After all, everyone likes things differently^ω^. Satisfy what you want to write first and then correct it if there is anything wrong [please update]

It's so good to read, only one chapter a day, and sometimes I feel even more speechless. All the waiting flowers have faded.

Well written, keep it up

Author, Fanfan, Hungry (knock on the bowl)

It looks good, I hope I can write it down.

Don't use the power of other worlds. Create your own moves,

No matter what others think, I still feel good about myself.

Come on, author! Don't worry about other people's comments, it's already very good!

Big cheers for the author Not later.

Very well written but too short

I feel pretty good about myself.

Quite interesting haha!

According to my review, I like it very much

You can use speed flow, high-speed movement + lightning flash + storm + impact

The subject matter is novel, very special, and very interesting

This book is very read୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨. The subject matter is novel, but the author updates it too slowly.

The perspective is novel and the sense of immersion is strong. It's worth a closer look.

I think it's quite interesting. It started to be interesting around chapter 100, but the main character is not very good at developing and growing up. It's really interesting.

Not bad, but too short and not enough to see! !

Well written, keep it up

It looks great, please give it a try (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

Good book trainer is not a woman

It is recommended to add acrobatic skills to improve your flying skills.

I don't know if there will be super evolution in the future.

The update is so slow, can the author hurry up? Not enough. You are too short, I will only give you 4 stars.