Stardome******************

A mysterious destiny? What the hell? This foundation really has no character at all. Don't write about foundation, right? The protagonist is really bad at gaining abilities and have any side effects? If it weren't for the harem, even three stars wouldn't want to fight. What kind of foundation and what kind of protagonist? I couldn't bear it anymore and I withdrew it.

First of all, there is a love plot for Mao. Forget it, it's still so boring. It's just a weird novel. Your position is wavering. It's completely forced. You should read another one. Imitation should also be more reasonable.

You are too frustrated. There are still emotions. It is best not to add emotions when writing this kind of thing. What you are writing is not about love. Just like me, I came here just to watch The Evil God and Foundation. Then suddenly a March 7 segment appeared, and now it's Esta again. It's not that I have any objections to the love scene, I just think it's better not to add emotions to this type of story, and I think your feelings are quite inexplicable. Of course, this is just my personal feeling. Come on

Doing this on a pioneering car? And you said you want to protect the people in the car? Rub someone else's IQ on the ground? It's said that it's dark, but you still want to engage in this affectionate thing. It's very speechless. Well, the car is full of good people with secrets. If your thing is exposed, won't it be clear that the people in the car will destroy you? You're an adult now, why don't you read it yourself before writing it down? You also said that the Star God is ruthless. You are not a Star God yourself, so you still killed so many innocent people? Are space station workers not human beings? Are you uneducated or have a psychological shadow? So dark, killing so many people just for the sake of power and protecting so many people? Don't you think about whether others will accept it or not? Which of them needs your protection and rescue? Which one is not better than you? Don't make excuses for your darkness.

The composition of this article is a bit complicated. The Foundation, the Cthulhu Mythos, and love are all put together. The fact that there is a love element in it means that the book collapses, and the author's writing style is average. It can only be said to be a trial work, and I can barely watch it.

There are some redundant symbols, but overall it's pretty good.

It feels good at first glance, but it's hard to figure out whether we can do without the heroine.

Very good(●◡●)ﾉ

Isn't it sheer isolation from writing a weird story with elements of romance? What's more, the evil god also has Cthulhu elements.

To be honest, the writing is not that good, the writing style is not good, and it's very embarrassing.

It's all just a cloud. I don't know anything about the background of Star Iron or the character's strength, and I don't know much about the character either.

Chapter 7 Persuading to Quit

Why does it become more and more embarrassing the more I look at it?

Secretly written about the harem... Not very good review

Very nice \(//∇//)\

Nice! ! ! !

Very good! !

Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences.

I have obsessive-compulsive disorder. For me, the article needs to be improved.

Why is it that Star Iron is written mostly on March 7th? I can't read it.

Help the author

Very good.

Why was it removed from the shelves [what]