[Super powers + various heroines + decisive killing + profit first]
The fog descends.
Hidden in the mist, countless strange resurrections...
They feed on desires and choose people to eat.
The whole city was lost in desire, and the panic of killing enveloped every corner of the city...
"If you want to survive in such a world,
You have to transform into a beast and fight based on instinct.
You must continue to grow stronger until the world is at your feet! "
Reader comments
Sorry, what I wrote before was too boring. I didn't see that profit was paramount, and I didn't kill decisively. As for that policewoman, if it were me, she would definitely make her life worse than death. She still has time to talk to others. It's so boring. Moreover, she knew that the other party was trying to collect information, so she deliberately approached without making any move. How dare she Your first impression is that you are cowardly and incompetent. I'll tell you the rest. To be honest, I haven't seen a piece of rubbish work like yours for a long time. (Summary: Because your beginning made me stop reading, no matter how good your writing is, it's meaningless) [face covering] First of all, I'm not targeting you.
It looks a bit weird, uncomfortable, the progress is a bit fast, and it feels all about emotions, newbie?
The relationship is not reflected, the emotional line is too abrupt, the feeling of never leaving is unreasonable after just a few days of knowing each other, and the slap in the face part is too blunt, it gives me the feeling that it is an urban cool novel with a layer of superpowers and weirdness.
Sorry, what I wrote before was too boring. I didn't see that profit was paramount, and I didn't kill decisively. As for that policewoman, if it were me, she would definitely make her life worse than death. She still has time to talk to others. It's so boring. Moreover, she knew that the other party was trying to collect information, so she deliberately approached without making any move. How dare she Your first impression is that you are cowardly and incompetent. I'll tell you the rest. To be honest, I haven't seen a piece of rubbish work like yours for a long time. (Summary: Because your beginning made me stop reading, no matter how good your writing is, it's meaningless) [face covering] First of all, I'm not targeting you.
It looks a bit weird, uncomfortable, the progress is a bit fast, and it feels all about emotions, newbie?
The relationship is not reflected, the emotional line is too abrupt, the feeling of never leaving is unreasonable after just a few days of knowing each other, and the slap in the face part is too blunt, it gives me the feeling that it is an urban cool novel with a layer of superpowers and weirdness.