Life in the New World

The magic setting is very interesting, and the characters such as Rael are distinct, but the writing is a bit strange. Is it possible to try more segmentation, or to capture more close-ups of the characters, and try to describe more details. The setting of the world view can be presented slowly through the mouths of the characters as much as possible. It is easy to get tired of reading if it is explained all in one breath. Progressing through events will give a more immersive feeling. In short, the future is promising, and I look forward to the follow-up 👍 [sending heartfelt wishes]

Good-looking, super good-looking, highly recommended.

It's great to give newbies some encouragement, the characters and everything are clearly visible.