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I think it's pretty good-looking, but the protagonist is already so strong, and it's a bit difficult to come up with the text later. If it becomes the same old-fashioned way of writing, it's definitely not going to work, so I can only ask the author to use his imagination. In fact, I suggest that if it is really difficult to think of it later, you can write it in conjunction with the book "Immortal King, Please Go Back Quickly", because this book is about the fairy king who has experienced life, and the rating is also very high. There is a strange thing that may be controversial if it is not changed, that is, the male protagonist has lived for hundreds of millions of years. In terms of character, the author should have discussed it in advance, otherwise it may cause controversy. I actually think it is okay, but other people may think it is problematic.

I read it in one night and it was okay. I skipped some chapters and felt bored. But most of the writing was okay, especially Fang Shiyan's role. As an author, just write according to your own inner thoughts. Only readers who think it's good will like it. You don't need to care about other people's thoughts. Not everyone's tastes and interests are the same. Only readers who enjoy it can enjoy it. Come on!

The protagonist is a scumbag, but the writing is very good, he is very responsible, and the emotions are very delicate.

To a local who wants to kill me🐍, let him go and raise him as a father [Like]

It's okay to train your mind in the world of mortals

Wonderful and worth reading!

This is the venerable one who does whatever he wants [laughs evilly]

It looks okay so far, but it seems like a harem. I don't want it to be a harem. Come on, author.

Sorry, not suitable for me

Looks good, okay, no ink stains

Not bad, the content is great

Not bad, keep up the good work!

Good book, with the style of a writer. The great emperor who became a mortal wrote the cause and effect of mortal immortals in his life!