Becoming a Venerable in the City

I didn't avoid poison when writing a harem novel. There was a kidnapping at the beginning. It didn't matter. I could teleport to save it. I had to go by car and it took twenty minutes. The heroine was slapped and her clothes were pulled off. After the protagonist came over and everything was over, I suggested changing her name to the moderator's Urban Cuckold Immortal.

This kind of urban writing is either about retirement life or about my life, Chen Beixuan. Why do I need to explain this domineering attitude to others? This novel is domineering. I didn't see how powerful the male protagonist is at all. For example, there's a monster to fight against. I didn't see how awesome the protagonist is? What's wrong with the main character being too much of a stud? The protagonist has lived for so long and has not seen enough women. He has to marry so many wives in such a small place on earth. He has lived like a dog for such a long time. The stallion can invite some decent ones, such as Queen Mother Nuwa. How many mortal women are there? If the protagonist sees a beautiful one and stalls, then the beauty will not be counted in hundreds of millions, or even in trillions.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but the protagonist is already so strong, and it's a bit difficult to come up with the text later. If it becomes the same old-fashioned way of writing, it won't work, so I can only ask the author to use his imagination. In fact, I suggest that if it is really difficult to think of it later, you can write it in conjunction with the book "Immortal King, Please Go Back Quickly", because this book is about the Immortal King who has experienced life, and the rating is also very high. There is a strange thing that may be controversial if it is not changed, that is, the male protagonist has lived for hundreds of millions of years. In terms of character, the author should have discussed it in advance, otherwise it may cause controversy. I actually think it is okay, but other people may think it is problematic.

I can only say that it is good. I don't know why the male protagonist likes young women. I feel it is a shame. As a cultivator, I help others raise children. The second point is to be honest. Since I am with others, I say that it is impossible to have only her as a woman. This must be said

Give it three stars, my rating is a stallion. What kind of immortal emperor is there? I haven't seen any saints in the fairy world. I still feel beautiful when I see a woman in the mortal world. The body of a mortal is full of dirt and all kinds of makeup. I have practiced for so long in vain. My mood is so easy to fluctuate.

I read it in one night and it was okay. I skipped some chapters and felt bored. But most of the writing was okay, especially Fang Shiyan's role. As an author, just write according to your own inner thoughts. Only readers who think it's good will like it. You don't need to care about other people's thoughts. Not everyone's tastes and interests are the same. Only readers who enjoy it can enjoy it. Come on!

The content is old-fashioned, toxic and not superficial, and has no IQ at all. The lost brain has been found. I would like to respectfully leave first.

The protagonist is a scumbag, but the writing is very good, he is very responsible, and the emotions are very delicate.

To a local who wants to kill me🐍, let him go and raise him as a father 👍

This is the venerable one who does whatever he wants [laughs evilly]