From Cultivating Immortality to Building Foundation, I Became an Urban Legend

Not bad. Compared with those themes of cultivating immortals that are always systematic, there are new ideas. I hope the author can step up the pace and update a more interesting world of cultivating immortals. The novel is getting more and more exciting. I hope the author will step up the pace of updating and write better articles and a broader world view😎 Come on

It looks good. I would like to give you some suggestions. The protagonist should solve worldly problems and show his invincible Taoist heart, single-minded pursuit of Taoism, cold-blooded cruelty and decisive killing.

The novel is good and encouraging. As for the issue of how cultivators treat the harem, I made some points at the end of Chapter 41. The author can refer to it. Since you are writing about cultivating immortals, don't limit it with secular ethics. Mortals can't have close relatives, age issues, etc. Immortals don't consider these at all. 2,000-Year-old Han Li and 10,000-year-old Bingfeng understand. [Sinister smile]

He slowly told Liu Cheng what he had practiced for thirteen years. Is this what the protagonist can say now?

The storyline in the book is very good, very humane, and the writing is very real and very good.

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist is not a virgin. The plot is relatively interesting. I feel that the character descriptions of the protagonist and supporting characters are more realistic. There are no cookie-cutter routines. It's interesting to watch.

In fairy tales, you should be said to be a silver-level character. I've read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals. Your method of describing the Qi training period actually vividly and vividly describes each level of cultivation. It's not an exaggeration to call you a great god [like] Additional comment Five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

It's a bit like a person cultivating immortals who has experienced the world of mortals and walked in the mortal world. The bad thing is that this immortal is a bit weak and can't do both medium and low martial arts. To put it simply, you, a cultivator, can't defeat a group of martial arts practitioners, but it is more comfortable to watch and more creative than others. It is training in the world of mortals and enhancing one's cognition.

It's very well written, and I can give two to other authors with one copy. It's not enough to read, I hope the author will work harder and update↖(^ω^)↗

The setting is okay, compared to most early-stage system novels on the market. The protagonist feels a little bit poisonous from the one where he released the five ghosts. The Taoist priest was uneasy and kind to a woman, but he was hanged and beaten in the back. He was still able to chat with the protagonist normally and even sold him a talisman. Let's see what the author writes later. The setting is quite interesting. I'll just wait and see.

It's well written, no cheating. The connection between cause and effect in the early stage is very good [like][like]

You don't have to worry about whether it's a martial arts or a cult of immortality. It's a setting where a hundred flowers bloom. It's still pretty good-looking and quite charming. Check out the update. One chapter will be added every day... What should I do if I am afraid that I will forget it after saving it?

I feel like the plot is pretty good, but every time the protagonist comes to the rescue, there has to be a long period of foreshadowing. I don't know why. There are always a lot of colorful words in the descriptions of women, such as "beautiful legs" and "fragrant shoulders." Personally, I think it might be better to be more normal.

I have read a lot of novels, and this book by the author is still very good in my opinion. The characters are delicate, and the later stages are quite humorous. The early articles are relatively compact, and I hope the pace can be accelerated in the later stages.

So far the writing is very good (≧∇≦*)

After reading two chapters, I was hooked. It's a rare bookworm like me, and it deserves five stars.

I like this type of cultivating immortality. It's so beautiful. Wouldn't it be even more beautiful if I had a hundred per day [laughing]

It's very beautiful, the characters are well created, but the updates are too slow.

I read the latest chapter after two days of reading. The author's writing is good and the plot design is very reasonable.

Not bad, very attractive

∵This novel is super exciting

It's okay, it's okay

Looks good but a bit short

The story is fascinating and creative.

The story is interesting and the design is reasonable. I am quite satisfied with the five-star rating.

This book is very good! Why is the rating so low!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, 66666

It's super good. I can't choose this book. The author is also super nice. It would be better if he could update hundreds of chapters every day [crying]

It's interesting haha ​​😛[laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

I clicked here by accident, it's okay.